
People Are in the Original God, System Fire Shadow
人在原神,系统火影
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 152k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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If nothing else, the setting of this book is fucked up. You plan to let the Sixth Path level fight the Seven Gods. Are you overestimating the power of the Seven Gods? The kind of power they can cut through a canyon with one knife, ugh. I really don't know what to say, and then the author told Xini that everything depends on the setting of the book. But the problem is that you are not original, you are a fan, a fan, do you understand? You don't follow the original settings? At the level of Teyvat, I really laughed to death. Then I saw something else in the comments section talking about Honkai Impact, the Tree of Imaginary Numbers, and the Sea of Quantum. No, it has something to do with the Genshin Impact. The Genshin Impact is just a leaf on the Tree of Imaginary Numbers... With Teyvat's expressiveness, even the Super Shadow level can be crushed, okay? In short, this book is really not friendly to a setting party like me at all. Full of all kinds of flaws. Also, you can't use the Five Elements Ninjutsu. Chakra and elemental power are not the same system, okay? In fact, whether it is spitting water or fire, it is transformed using chakra. It is transformed directly and does not require the mixing of elemental power, okay? It's ridiculous to say that the Seven Gods use all products to prevent the use of elements. Because chakra will be directly converted into wind, thunder, water, fire and earth. In fact, the wind, thunder, water, fire and earth spit out are actually chakra in nature. The Seven Gods can't stop it at all, okay? Alas, forget it, this book is too eunuch anyway, there is nothing much to say. I just hope that the author can pay attention to it in the future. It doesn't matter if you write the original setting yourself, but when writing fan fiction, you should pay attention to the setting and don't make it up yourself.
Damn it, I almost exploded on the spot.
Some people like to take a very short break. I won't say who it is.
Regardless of combat power, the settings all depend on the author after all, but the female lead in this row of roles is really advised to quit.
Okay, you have rested for twenty-four hours, hurry up and start coding the next chapter ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾
The author probably wrote the book and sent it directly after typing it up😂
What I said in my book review section is all about the setting of this book, and it has nothing to do with other works, so don't argue if you can.
Is the protagonist a human or a horse? Are these female protagonists serious? Even if you have a harem, that's not how you play it, right?
Regarding emotional issues, I mentioned it in the book, but it seems that some people have not seen it. I will say it again. Extras, emotional scenes, etc., As well as the acquaintance process will be added later. After all, the update of the plot is a bit slow, and the later period will be supported by those extras. In addition, don't compete across works. Those things are really just a few words written by the author
Even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this! ! ! Update!
I don't recommend writing about harems. Many authors can't write emotional scenes well at the beginning, and 90% of them are eunuchs in the end. It's not that I hate harems, it's that most authors can't write well
I saw someone talking about combat power... Let me talk about the real combat power of the original god 1, the original man created the world 2, the four supreme pillars 4, the original god 5, the seven gods 6, the setting of multiple worlds I just want to know what Naruto wants to do?
Author, the content of your novel is actually considered successful among Genshin Impact fan novels, but since your recent update ended with a chapter saying that some readers are monkeys, my evaluation of you has dropped. I'm sorry, but I may be the monkey you mentioned. However, there is a recent shortage of books. Playing games and listening to books to relieve boredom is not a big deal, just pretend I don't see it. As a result, these single chapters are just like posting updates, and your level of crystallization worries me. Just go away if you can't stand it anymore as you said before. One more thing before I go away, I advise the author to play rationally and not to be like Senior Mi.
Author, the author wants to ask you a question, okay? If you accept Shen He's offer, please respond to me. Ah, it's very beautiful. If you tell me, I'll order it all. If it goes on sale, I'll order it all, okay?
Naruto's worldview: Sacred tree, planet, Loulan Dragon Vein, time travel, parallel universe, Otsutsuki, different time and space, divine power... Maybe the background of the story should conform to the multiverse theory? Genshin Impact worldview: Fusion collapse, world bubble, seven gods, original, false starry sky, Otto's five hundred years of sacrifice, creation, dragons, leaves... Maybe the background of the story should be based on the multiverse theory plus the awesome World Tree? It seems like the two worldviews are still harmonious? I haven't read the novel yet, but I don't know what the content is like.
Kaguya is also at the level of the Seven Gods. The Super Earth Blast Star can create the moon, which is equivalent to making a giant meteorite. The reincarnation eye then pulls the giant meteorite down. This is not a proper Blast Star. There are also Blood Succession Snare and Time and Space Ninjutsu, which are not inferior to the Demon God at all, and can be said to be stronger than Zhongli. But Kaguya cannot create the world, so she must be weaker than the Teyvat ceiling.
You swear
Okay, you've rested for a second. Quickly code the next chapter.
Except for the Dragon of the East Wind, the other three guardians of Mondstadt are originally humans.
Come on, it's very rare to see a fan of Genshin Impact dare to try to create a protagonist with such a personality. Although the writing style is a bit immature, the main focus is on the portrayal of the heroine's image. It also seems more comfortable to rely on the game's character setting. Overall, this is a very good fan fiction. Writing a fan here requires some courage and dreams. If you dare to set up a harem setting in a fan tag, you will definitely be criticized. I hope you don't give up suddenly, because there are always some people who are very demanding of the author. The last 500 rewards, monthly tickets + recommendation tickets are all the support I can give, come on.
We are all younger brothers, not as good as me, Popeye, you will be gone when I eat some spinach. 😏
Transmission panels from Tieba and major organizations have been deployed, and our actions will be faster
You cannot absorb natural energy during combat. To absorb natural energy, you must remain still, unless someone else absorbs it for you. The protagonist has Huzhai Palace, but it only absorbs elemental power and does not help the protagonist to synthesize it. Then the protagonist cannot use it at all, okay? This author always messes up. In addition, to absorb natural energy, you must pay attention to the ratio.
Sage mode can enhance perception, but the author didn't write about it at all. This author has not carefully checked Naruto's information at all.
Then there is a very stupid thing that the protagonist's strength is too unclear. The author himself doesn't know where to write it. For example, I have read chapter 36 now. What level of strength the protagonist is in the Hokage? Is it a jounin level, a quasi-kage level, or a shadow level? It is not clear. It is a mess.
****The author was stunned and asked the protagonist to stop time to complete the teleportation skill.
Hey, you're a eunuch, and you've been watching in vain again.
Let's start with the bad words. The heroine is written too much, and it has a feeling of stallion novels from the last century. Everything else is fine. Don't write about stallions easily. That's what most people read in novels nowadays. What age is it and how many people still like to watch stallions?
As we all know, Genshin Impact is MiHoYo's game with the lowest combat power. Isn't it normal that you can't beat Naruto? Don't even think about trying to defeat Honkai Impact. The combat power is astonishing.
It made me laugh to death. I also saw a comment saying that Naruto's reincarnation in dirty earth could not resurrect the demon. Hahaha, Naruto's reincarnation in dirty earth could not resurrect the demon. This is simply the funniest joke I have ever heard. Not to mention the demon, the seven rulers in the world and the gods can be resurrected. You think you are joking, the first generation Madara is not much better than the gods.