Galloping Through the Heavens: Starting with the Blue Blood Sword

Well written, cheers to the author! ! !

To be honest, among all the heroines in Jin Yong's novels, Wen Qingqing is the one who despises the most

Here are two pictures Xia Qingqing Ajiu

The dialogue is too long-winded, which greatly affects the reading. There are many indifferent explanations, which belittles the status of a master.

Hello author, I have read ten or twenty chapters, and I feel that in addition to introducing the martial arts settings, it is just about Nuwai Wen Qingqing. How can I put it, the introduction setting is pretty good, but it's enough to be tired of crooked girls. How are you going to mess around in every plane until you die? If this is the case, according to the way the author describes it, there are not many planes that can be written. If the plot is pushed forward quickly, too much emphasis is placed on women, which feels unnecessary. A little bit of my own feelings. If I don't express my feelings, I don't want to express my displeasure. There is no other meaning.

Alas, after reading a few pictures, I couldn't help but say, if you want to continue the Ming Dynasty, you can first kill Huang Taiji. Without this person, the Ming Dynasty would be half stable. Dorgon would never be able to break in with his half-heartedness. Huang Taiji's methods and personal charm are too powerful. Don't be fooled by the TV series.

Both the protagonist and the author are talkative. . . Lots of narration

The author's view of history is somewhat problematic. Let's talk about Li Zicheng first. This man rebelled because he was forced to do so. Whether he was laid off or was blackmailed and hung from a tree by officials and beaten, he never thought about rebelling. He was falsely accused and imprisoned and never thought about rebelling. He only killed his wife for having an affair with someone. It can be said that he is a strong-willed person, but this kind of person does not rebel easily. Once he rebels, the harm will be great. In fact, there were so many rebels in the late Ming Dynasty, and it was he and Gao Yingxiang who were not ordered to peace from the beginning to the end. This man killed Yingye, and even to that point he would not be a White Lotus. From this perspective, he was neither a good person nor a bad person. As for slaughtering the city and eating human flesh, it was nothing, at least not in Li Zicheng's group. He was also the best in military discipline among the rogue bandits, although he also had many shortcomings, which was because he did not have the talent and ability to be an emperor. As for Chongzhen, neither official nor unofficial history can tell that this person had any courage, mental means or force. He has looked down on Tianqi all his life, and has not even learned anything about his brother. There is no way to save the Ming Dynasty with Chongzhen. I quite like the Ming Dynasty, but to be honest, starting from Emperor Wanli, all the emperors except Zhu Youxiao are really too stretched. There is no way to save the Ming Dynasty when it arrives in Chongzhen. Once it is saved, Chongzhen will be in a mess in a few years. He is an idealist and has many ideas, but he can't accomplish anything.

Since the girl came out, the taste has changed

I praise you for the patriotic chapter, but you can't save Chongzhen's character. You really can't save him. The emperor is not allowed to kill him, but you dare to kill him? It's no use even if the evidence is sufficient. When all the ministers in the court press, the emperor will be scared. Have you seen Song Ci? After finding the evidence, the emperor burned it on the spot. Your system says you can only be a minister, but you can't. Chongzhen has no money and no army, so why do you want to help him train his army? When you are in power, civil servants say you are rebelling. If you don't take power, you can't save it. Just like Guo Jing, you can only extend your life. So, if you do this like a spy, killing two people will only increase your ambition and extend your life. Can you still break through to the kind of one that ignores the number of people? When the Manchus come in, I will kill them all by myself. You can have this, so you can handle it all by yourself, and the emperor will not be cowardly, let him listen to you!

As a bookworm for more than 20 years, I can say with certainty that as long as you don't watch it, it will definitely become popular.

The author is a waste of nonsense. With less nonsense and more plot, this book will definitely achieve much better results.

I haven't read the book, but I have watched the TV series Green Blood Sword in the past few days 😰, and I feel that there is something wrong with all the villains and IQs. The protagonist has a reason to rebel, for his father's revenge. There are martial arts figures who are proficient in murder, arson, robbery, and rebellion. The Ninth Princess is even more embarrassed. She helped to start a rebellion in her own family. She was afraid that her father would not die quickly enough and the country would be lost quickly enough. Looking at it, for the time being, the three views of the Jinyiwei official are normal 😵

Blue blood is still too niche. Young people today probably don't even know about it and have no idea. Also, if the Jianghu people are reasonable, why do they still practice martial arts?

It's a good idea, but the key points are broken, and the characters are not well developed. Nowadays, when I read martial arts, I only read cool novels. You can at least make the protagonist's character more mature. The female character at the beginning was not likeable, and so much writing was used. Also, the mission given at the beginning was extremely unreasonable.

The male protagonist laughs suddenly from time to time, which makes me feel a little nervous.

Looking at the scene where Chongzhen is incompetent and irritable and the protagonist is submissive, I have the urge to manipulate the protagonist and slap Chongzhen to death.

It's so long-winded. It's only one or two sentences. I wrote several chapters, but the middle part is full of nonsense. It slipped away.

It doesn't matter if it ends like this, there's no point in dragging it out. Martial arts fan fiction is difficult to write, and it is also very difficult to stand out. The author's research on the original work is actually sufficient, but what is missing is something eye-catching. If you don't grasp the point of upgrading your skills or pretending to be invincible, it will look very dull. Today's book lovers are very discerning. If you add too much water, no one will like it. If you don't want to write unnecessary boring content, don't write it. It's hard to agree on how to recruit girls. You have to stick to your own ideas. The harem party and the party without or with only one female protagonist are destined to not coexist. If you choose one side, you must give up the other side. Either don't write at all and be a cold-hearted practitioner, or write as much as possible, the more sexy the better. Anything that is neither good nor bad will only make the book lose its characteristics. A few suggestions from martial arts lovers, I hope the author can have good results next time.

The format is too tiring for people to read, there are all kinds of water characters, and the plot has no sense of substitution at all. How can it get so many good reviews?

The first chapter made me vomit, the system became WeChat, the previous company released tasks with explanations, real-time online communication, awesome!

Guo Jing Hui Yue Nu Sword Jiu Yin Sutra bonus, Quanzhen teaches swordsmanship, his sword is not weak

Huashan was passed down from the Quanzhen Sect. God Guo Jing was favored by the Quanzhen Sect and even claimed to be a disciple. The protagonist in the book was also blessed by Guo Jing, but he has always been at odds with Huashan. He couldn't stand Huashan. What qualifications does Huashan have? The protagonist in the book was written by the author. From this, it can be inferred that the author is a white-eyed wolf.

The writing is actually okay, but it's too ink-stained, and I can struggle with trivial matters for a long time. Shuangwen, who is invincible at the beginning, has to show off and slap in the face so that people will like to read it. It took almost two hundred chapters for the climactic plot in Shaolin, and not many people could afford to wait so long. If there weren't so many inked narrations and trivial things, or if the game didn't start with an invincible setting, the results would be much better. The most taboo thing about Zhutian Wudi Liu is ink. Just simplify it, write about big events, pretend to be cool, and then accept the girls. If you have potential but no experience, go for it.

You have to resort to force, but you also need to introduce yourself for a long time and explain the causes and consequences like recruiting a bride? Can't appreciate it

The author has at least read the original work and the writing is pretty good. I look forward to the new book.

Please recommend "Invincible Since the Beginning of Relying on Heaven" to thank you boss ~

Arrogant and domineering, never clear about myself

There is too much nonsense in this book, and the dialogue is written for several pages. The plot advances too slowly.

It's very good. I personally particularly like the contents of chapters 53-61. I really like it.