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Extremely poisonous. Be careful. Soldiers blatantly refuse to obey orders. This one is poisonous. It is unsightly.

If you don't have any skills, don't write about retired special forces. You are a retired special forces soldier with no marksmanship, yet you have a 15m target that can hit prohibited targets. I can't keep up with physical fitness. I won't tell you. At least you should have some combat and marksmanship skills. How did you become a special forces soldier? Goof around. The poison is too poisonous, what else should you write in this book? There is no need to write it down. It can poison people to death! ! ! ! !

Go home and farm. Even elementary school students can write better than you.

He was poisoned in the first chapter. The special forces only have these two skills and have no skills. Even the recruits who have just joined the army for two months will not only have 15 points of force, and their marksmanship will not be so bad (they can only hit 15 meters).

Is this special forces? I was better at target shooting than you during military training in university.

Just for the review, this is a typical studio mass-produced novel.

The first 3 chapters encourage you to quit, which is awesome👍🏻. Disadvantage 1: The retired special forces have a hundred hits within 15 meters. Not to mention the special forces, the soldiers who have been trained for several months are almost the same. Did you buy this retirement certificate? Flaw 2: The officers and soldiers are described as bandits, and they only recognize Li Yunlong. Even the national army would not be like this!

Take a look at what you wrote, Chapter 2: 'The strong are respected' 'Three major disciplines and eight points of attention', 'Article 1, follow command in all actions', do you know what they mean?

Trash, I can't even stand the first chapter.

Don't write anymore in this life, this is your peak.

I didn't want to read it after reading the introduction, but I endured it for a while. It was similar to the novel I read twenty years ago. Brainless writing.

Written by the studio? It's a mess. This kind of book can be approved. Your backend is a bit tough

After reading two chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Our Communist Army has always been a party-led army. The three major disciplines and eight points of attention. Look at all actions and follow the command. Since you are already the leader of a regiment, you think you are a bandit. You have to rely on force to convince people. A disobedience is enough to kill you. If you don't obey, hold back. Understand, even if you want the protagonist to win people's hearts, it is still on the battlefield. Showing the protagonist's command skills can win people's hearts. Also, the special forces can't shoot with guns, which is poisonous enough.

What the hell are you writing about the Eighth Route Army?

If a regiment leader can fight four, can the commander fight more than 20? Nothing wrong! Whoever can beat anyone becomes an official, there is nothing wrong with it.

What kind of thing is the protagonist getting fucked for no reason? After doing this, who would dare to work for the Communist Party?

Accept people like Xie Baoqing, alas, and persuade them to quit

This Shabi, did I see a fake sword show? When did the Audio-Technica call Yang Zhi, could it be more vicious?

Chapter 2 Are you serious? Ready to be shot

Vicious, anyone who can read the first chapter is a master, immune to all poisons

Don't add a system to the Anti-Japanese War novel. There is no sense of immersion and it will be awkward no matter how you read it! The special forces traveled through and hit the 15-meter stationary target with perfect accuracy. Was it possible that the army used to raise pigs? Not very logical!

The Iron Triangle is Ding Wei, Kong Jie, and Li Yunlong. Yang Zhi? I guess it's a joke... I'm talking about writing about Yang Dezhi.

What the hell is this? I haven't finished even one chapter.