A Journey to the Heavens That Begins at Night

I really like it. It's the first time I write a book review with so many words, but I still can't help it. They say that there are three golden chapters in writing novels, but I was poisoned in the first chapter. Don't tell me that you haven't read the subsequent chapters. I couldn't stand the first chapter. I still have to endure the poison to read the rest? The writing is really full of poison, imitating other people's literary style of painting, but not the essence. It's just like walking in Handan. It makes you look confused. Even if you want to take revenge, you can force me to say a bunch of words and use new postures for water words?

When I got to Chapter 9, I opened the table of contents and looked back, then gave up.

This book is okay, and the writing about Jiang Ye is okay, but the sentences are not fluent, but it's generally not bad. Compared to other books about Jiang Ye, it's okay.

This is the first time I want to comment on the feeling this novel gave me. I wanted to say something, but it seemed like I didn't say anything in the end. It was a mess.

It's too convoluted, there are too many private things, and the tone and logic in some parts are completely wrong. This is written a lot just to show off. Every time I fight, I have to explain one thing over and over again. It's not convenient at all. That's it. I've seen almost all of Jiang Ye's fandoms. This is the first time I've seen someone with such ink like yours. I can't stand it anymore.

How should I put it? Maybe the author wanted to write about a sentimental, open-minded young man with full literary and artistic temperament, but due to his poor writing skills, he ended up with a four-dimensional character.

Come on, author, there are not many complete books by pure Shoya fans.

He clearly said he was here for revenge, but he killed a practitioner at the door. But when he saw his enemy, he said he didn't want to go on a killing spree? Then why did you kill that practitioner? If you come to take revenge and are unwilling to do it yourself and deceive yourself and others, then what are you doing here? Come to poop?

Why do you have to lick your wife till late at night? Just because of one sentence: If heaven does not give birth to a master, eternity will be like a long night? What does it matter to you whether the night is long or not? Just be yourself and practice your own way. What does it have to do with you whether the Tang Dynasty dies or not? If you don't like Xiling, just chop it with a sword. If you don't like the Academy, just chop it with a sword. Why do you keep licking it? As a traveler in the heavens, the rise and fall of the world has nothing to do with you. 🤮

Jiang Ye's own strength is probably greater than that of Xuezhong. I feel that Jun Mo's performance has exceeded Xuezhong's upper limit.

There is no life for a literary youth, but there is a disease for a literary youth

The first chapter almost made me vomit, I should kill or not.

Even if it's a piece of junk that I don't want to read twice, well, that's my personal opinion.

Seeing so many people scolding me makes me feel relieved.

One of the most verbose books on human literature, "Jiang Ye Fan", "Vengeance in the Beginning" will scare you off every word you read. It's the kind of author who messed up junior high school composition literature. I guess her former Chinese teacher must have been very desperate. She didn't write things that should be written, and forced extra drama on things that weren't written.

The author can end this volume. The more he writes, the worse his youthful illness becomes 🙂🙂

The protagonist in the author's works is really hypocritical and has serious double standards. He takes advantage of other people's popularity in the snow and changes their character, dragging them to trample them in the snow, which is really disgusting.

What kind of nonsense is it that you can't take revenge just because of a random reason? Then why are you back? Why are you looking for your enemies? , Baffling. They almost killed you and caused you to suffer at the border for so many years. You came all the way to take revenge and you just said you wouldn't take revenge because you were afraid of getting your hands dirty? What's ridiculous is that your enemy still wants to take revenge on you, and it's so poisonous that you're going to die soon.

I feel that apart from Jiang Ye, which is better, Xue Zhong and Liaozhai are okay without reading it. There are a lot of flaws in it. The author is too young and his writing skills are not good enough. Especially in Xue Zhong Gai, Xu Xiao and Xu Fengnian were changed beyond recognition. He made Xu Xiao and Xu Fengnian villains, and took Zhao Kai as his apprentice to make him feel pity. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

What did you write? The protagonist is in a high realm and is fighting in a low realm. What can he pretend to win if he knows his destiny and wins? Is it similar to the pretense of warming wine and killing Hua Xiong to let the protagonist speak out for himself? Can't you write a pretentious article?

To be honest, literary youths are too seriously ill, they are just pretending to be literary youths

Is there anything cool about this book? Is the protagonist's setting likable? Does the protagonist have any attractive changes in the direction of the plot? Or does the protagonist change the course or outcome of the plot? None of it. The setting of this fan protagonist has not changed at all in the plot (at most, the protagonist has cut off the plot in advance and takes the lead), and there is no plot that makes readers feel refreshed. In fact, this is equivalent to setting up a dispensable fan protagonist.

It's not for nothing that there are all bad reviews. A pure disruptor does nothing but make the water muddy quickly. Um, that's not right, what you did was quite disgusting.

What kind of garbage are you writing? I felt like I was watching it from the first chapter, it was a bit sentimental. Then when he took revenge in the second picture, he emphasized that he was a person who had never killed anything. And then what reason do you have to make up? I am a religious person. It is not I who kills, but the sword in my hand. But what if you weren't holding the sword in your hand? And why did it become a murder weapon? Every time you want to kill someone, you always have to explain a lot of truth. Just like when I met Ning Que in the tavern. The time traveler is directly exposed at the beginning. Then he forced Lai Lai to say a few words. The author should want to write about a young man who is sentimental and has a literary style. However, it was written in four different ways, and I only read six chapters of the total text. Whether it's the protagonist's character or the surrounding supporting characters? As for the protagonist's character, many people don't like to have a reason every time they hit or kill someone. Still a sentimental person who always laments himself. Lament that he is an unlucky person. It's all quite hypocritical

Come and go, do you writers have nothing new to offer? ? ? Every day is long and short. This is just a genre of novels. Do we have to regard it as the highest in the world? ? ? Would you like to take a look at the top 10 monthly votes? ? ? It's so annoying that I keep writing and writing about it.

It was very uncomfortable to read the Jiang Ye chapter. To be honest, I have read a lot of fan fiction that has this problem, which is to imitate the writing style of Jiang Ye's original novel. To put it bluntly, it is a writing style that is useless and moaning. If your writing style can be like that of Han Han, it might be okay, but the author is obviously not civilized. A lot of punctuation marks are often wrong, and sentences are often broken, which makes people feel like having a myocardial infarction while reading it. Also, the protagonist first obtained the main god space plug-in, and secondly, he read the God's perspective of the original work, so in the novel, he self-righteously played chess with Fuzi Haotian, thinking that he was awesome, and looked down on the protagonist. This kind of mentality seems to me like what Lu Xun said, where a slave turns over and is even more exaggerated than a slave owner. After traveling through time, a small character traveled back and relied on the plug-in and God's perspective. You can benefit from it, but where does the arrogance come from? Do you really have that ability? Pretending to be cool but not doing it right makes people feel very hypocritical.

I have always been saying that "Zhe Tian" will end with "Xue Zhong", but it turns out that "Zhe Tian" will end with "Liao Zhai", and "Zhe Tian" will end with "Fengshen". I can't watch the rest of it, you are just playing matryoshka dolls for me!

Tell me what you wrote, and that one, Jiang Ye Xianyu, is even more rubbish than what you wrote.

Don't be messy when writing fan fiction. After all, there are still many people who like the protagonist, unless your writing is more exciting than the original work. But what kind of fan fiction can you write with that level?

From what I've read above, what Fengshen writes is inexplicable and doesn't make any sense.