Journey to the West: I Can Modify the Narration

Tsk tsk, I won't say anything else! I only said what I saw was unreasonable! That's it! The immortal has not eaten for a long time! You will definitely lose your cultivation level! Are you the martial arts version of an innate god? Are you really going to treat the contents of the TV series as gods? For example, in the TV series Taibai Jinxing is a good old man, but he has no ability to deliver the message. Do you really think that he is a soft persimmon? Venus, Gengjin! The main killing. . Do you think he will be capable? So your understanding is that heaven eats dragon liver and phoenix marrow and holds banquets, while demons eat humans and hold banquets! The gods are drinking and having a party! Is this why you think gods will lose their cultivation if they don't eat?

Writing a novel is a dead end, find a job in a factory

A very good Journey to the West fanfic. I haven't seen such a good Journey to the West fan for a long time. I feel that the versions of several different Journey to the West TV series that the author combined are very good.

... Dragon Girl moved bricks for three hours and got blisters on her hands...? The bricks that were infused with the power of Xuanhuang from the beginning of Hongmeng? ? Bar? 🤤

This good old man in Journey to the West was a military attache in most ancient works. Taibai was in charge of fighting and killing.

Journey to the West engages in entertainment technology. Is this a joke? Or is it a web article?

It's so poisonous. I just watched a few chapters and I got poisoned. What the hell is the setting? Only by helping the human race can you gain merit. Are you serious? Also, the wages of shrimp soldiers and crab generals are actually silver. This is about cultivating immortals and cultivating immortals to become gods. Gold and silver cannot be turned into gold by turning stones into gold. Shrimp soldiers and crab generals are silver. Then the turtle prime minister and the like are paid in gold. Only the Dragon King and the prince are resources for cultivation. That's nonsense. Even if you were the Dragon King, your subordinates would have run away a long time ago. I don't have the cultivation resources to hang around with you. I won't be able to raise my level until I die. Why hang out with you? People go to higher places and water flows to lower places. It's the same thing. I don't want to complain about other poisonous points. You can remove the bookshelf

It's so embarrassing, I can't understand the writing! Isn't that how Xiaobai Wen is written? Are you writing an essay?

It's worthy of being a daily guide. After reading three chapters, I felt something was wrong. I jumped to see the improvement of Sanwei Zhenhuo. I finally felt that the protagonist did something. Then another weird operation? ? ? I think this modification system should first modify the protagonist's brain Forget about the dishes and smash all the miscellaneous things like crazy Leading a new trend? From now on, everyone in the world of Journey to the West will have a mobile phone, right? Another big spoiler? Forming a rebel alliance for Journey to the West?

It wasted half an hour of my time, Chapter 9, setting up an Internet cafe in Journey to the West

What the hell is written? I can't understand it! ! !

There is a reason why this author with over 1 million words is still a level 1 author.

The protagonist of this book is extremely talented! Not only does he possess a powerful system, but he also has NTR tendencies and has been saved by the Great Merciful and Compassionate Guanyin Bodhisattva. And it's also the mount of Master Sanzang! In order to obtain the Western Meridian, I am willing to be a mortal mount even if I have a golden finger! Such a fearless spirit is worth promoting!

It's truly a daily introduction to poison. I've been told all kinds of novels about cows and horses, and I'm dying of poison every day 😰

Poisoned every day, Bengbu lived.

You can also learn the three-flavored kamikaze. The three-flavored kamikaze and the three-flavored real fire are blown together.

I was deceived about my feelings. At the beginning, there is the so-called farming and meritorious deeds. Retain readers. It turns out that everything behind it is a fantasy house fight.

Is this a book that people can read?

What the hell, it's a mess, and you didn't even check if it made sense after you finished writing it?

The rubbish written by this author is as if someone has eaten a piece of shit. It's so disgusting.

The concept is very good, the writing style is okay, and the description is very vivid. The author needs to work harder and update it!

This is a book whose narration is better than the main text

Centipede Spirit's Thousand Eyes Divine Light is also very powerful

Fried Chicken is a good book and a wonderful story about farming. I look forward to the rise of the protagonist.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, some of the comments were either direct curses or poisonous comments. I don't know what the mentality is.