Conan's Winery Warlock on the Run

The protagonist is a time-traveler and a warlock, but the protagonist is in such a miserable state. There is no apparent way to make money, and he is also sentenced to mental illness, which completely prevents the protagonist from obtaining a series of licenses such as a gun license and a driver's license (either the acquisition of these licenses is not written in the first place, or mental illness is not mentioned) , and what the author describes is the same as in 2000. The dignified killer blushes at every turn and is afraid of ghosts. Of course, it looked okay from the front, but the author recalled that nearly 50 chapters have not been finished yet, and now that the results are enough, he can consider cutting the book (no insult intended, just a few suggestions)

What's the point of having the vest come out and the body go in again? It's better to mix the vest with black and the body with red.

The name of the protagonist... Author, are you serious? Japanese people generally have four-letter names. It's a bit awkward to force it to be set to two words.

If you have any suggestions, you can mention them here and I will correct them in time. Thank you for your support.

The protagonist is really weak and stupid. It is really unimaginable that he has no savings in the winery for 4 years. In the second chapter, he said that he felt that the winery was behind a cage and was licked back inexplicably. Then I would go back to work in a winery. Also, I saw Chapter 36 and only saw the system in Chapter 2. The system never appeared again until Chapter 36.

Dear friends, it is very important to read the new book in the early stage. I hope you can support me more. Thank you.

I have corrected the typos in the previous chapters. If you find any others, please point them out. Thank you for your support. ٩(๑^O^๑)۶

Don't stop fattening up, the author will give you a big boost

I want to see the male protagonist get jealous. 😍😰😍

Chapter 8... I almost vomited... Did you write this on a computer assembly line? But comes but goes. There are four or five buts in a paragraph. Can't other words be used? It would be smoother if you just use "but", "but" and "and" instead of using but all the time...

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Why is the protagonist always misunderstood as mentally ill for no apparent reason?

The protagonist is black and red? Is there a female protagonist?