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If Catherine doesn't give you a female protagonist, I don't really approve of you as an author.

Don't be a eunuch, brother

Ten whole chapters. . . He just couldn't explain anything clearly. . Who is rebelling? ,,

Wait until this part is over before you consider reading it. The author was so excited to write it, it was so lonely, so long, and divided into so many chapters.

Giving life to the core of Hex, Heiko (Jarvis)

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Strange, this book is a Shuangcheng fanfic with more than 200 chapters, and there are very few comments inside and outside the book. Is it because the writing is not good and no one talks about it, or the author deleted the comments?😲

You are making it difficult for all of us, it is too slow 😒

April 15, 10:16, still no update.

Not updated? Eunuch booking.

It's very difficult for us to do it so slowly.

I have voted for two months. Quick update

It's getting worse and worse, no matter how eunuch it is, at least I can leave a thought about it, if I continue to write like this, it will suck.

Give it to me, I will go to death😤

Come on! ! ! ! ! Don't be a eunuch

Well written, keep it up😁

The book is excellent, and the overall rhythm and detailed descriptions are very well controlled. But there are still some suggestions. Regarding the protagonist's experimental results, such as the Hextech Gun and Super Glimmer, the ingredients are indeed a bit of a coincidence. Although it can basically be explained by sudden events and whims, too many accidental experimental results are still a bit nondescript. Especially when the protagonist has learned a lot of relevant knowledge, it can actually increase the protagonist's own thinking about the experiment instead of the so-called "accidental". Regarding the rhythm of the book, I saw the end of the first climax, which is the part where the protagonist settles down and gets the Iron Man suit and Batman's car. The reason why I like this book is because the rhythm of the climax is really very comfortable, and the logic is clear and interlocking. The appearance of these two alien equipment is actually very important. The rhythm is very influential. Although I basically know that it will be used in the exhibition part and subsequent plots that are about to begin, in the final analysis, this transitional chapter creates two products that are actually inconsistent with the plot, which affects the rhythm a bit, especially when it is followed by a clichéd plot that shows off and slaps in the face, which really ruins the rhythm. Of course, I haven't read much, and I hope the author's subsequent pacing can maintain the original level. This is indeed one of the better books I've seen among Shuangcheng fans.

I have an idea, but I don't know if it's feasible or not.

Not enough at all

I have read Qidian for many years. This is the first time I subscribe and give rewards. After all, the author cannot generate electricity for love, but also has to make money. I will give you my first blood. I hope the author will not be a eunuch. I really like Shuangcheng.