This Star Is a Bit Versatile

The topic selection is okay, but there are too many system-type novels. I feel that if I use past life memory, the writing will be very good.

We are here to worship the mountain with our little red horse girlfriends, come on, come on

After reading Chapter 42, the author's description of the protagonist playing the piano on the stage, I really couldn't accept this unreasonableness anymore, so I had to abandon the book. I can accept that the protagonist is good at cooking because there is no lack of time for exercise in his life. I can accept that the protagonist writes on the tip of his tongue, because creativity may be a sudden inspiration. I can accept that the protagonist wrote a song to his sister, because it may be an occasional gain from the accumulation of many years of life. But it is really unacceptable for me to acquire various musical instrument skills in such a short period of time. If the protagonist comes from an ordinary family and graduated from a normal university, it would not matter. This can also be understood to mean that he occasionally plays for fun, but he is a genius and can master it as soon as he plays, and he can reach the top level as soon as he practices. If the article describes that several years have passed, the quality of life has improved, and I have studied during this period, then it is acceptable. But what is your protagonist's current setting? A person who graduated from elementary school, had no TV or mobile phone at home, and almost failed to save his life because of overwork. Then you told me that he could play the piano on stage?

I don't know how smart today's little kids are. The little kid in the book feels like he's trying to force his wits down. The little white bear kid is too cute and swears a lot. I really have no love for this kind of kid! There are too many dialects in the whole article, and there are so many black and white things. Sorry, as a reader, I feel really uncomfortable. Dialects are allowed, but there are too many to fill the article. I looked at the number of chapters that have been updated so far, and there are more than 300. I have only read a few dozen and I can't stand it anymore. Can anyone tell me if I can follow up? ! !

To be honest, it's a bit nonsense. It's acceptable at the beginning, but there is no logic in the subsequent development. Although it is a systematic novel, if there is no logic or serious deviation from objective laws, it will be very uncomfortable to read. To be honest, if there are no entertainment plots, it is still very interesting, and the plot is quite reasonable, but the sudden planning, shooting, editing, etc. Of the complete documentary are very fake, and it was made by someone who graduated from elementary school, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. The above is just my personal opinion.

I gave up after reading Chapter 24 (actually this book is quite good) The reasons are as follows: The background setting and system do not want to be integrated (orphans who graduated from elementary school and know design? Food is something you can work hard to make up for. If you can't understand decoration design even if you graduate from elementary school, a system reward will be opened directly. It's starting to show off, but it's really hard to watch. You can get rewards, don't just show it up to be funny, you can just cut it out and teach it to your children. It's really a way to persuade others. It's very sweet in the front and a bit abrupt in the back. It's a waste of the work if the protagonist does it completely.)

The book is a good book, but there is no difference between time travel and non-time travel. I feel like an otaku who has never been exposed to social beatings.

It's so well written, don't write it again in the future

Hee hee, there are too many adjectives for laughter like "giggle". The children's ones are fine, but the adults' ones almost failed. It's not that you can't write it, but it can't be too frequent.

Everyone, give your favorite little cute kids a little care. As long as the care of any one of the characters reaches 100, Xiao Xi'er's character will be added.

The beginning is pretty good. Keep in mind that the character is an orphan who doesn't have the energy or financial resources to learn piano.

A bunch of women vomited🤮, is the protagonist a male dog🐶?

Chaos, what on earth do you want to write?       ，，，，，？ A person who is tired and needs rescue, a person who has graduated from primary school, is suffering from chronic malnutrition, and is struggling to survive with food and clothing. The main reason is that the background before the time travel is unclear. It seems that such a person has been in the novel for less than a month. The timeline is too short, and it is all over the place. It is too outrageous. Add a bit of bloody plot and it will become unreadable. I didn't even insist on reading the chapters you listed.

The protagonist is like a rural child who doesn't know much about anything and is a bit speechless. And after the protagonist acquires skills, every time he uses them, he feels so embarrassed. This should be more refreshing. The author is a newbie. Don't use the protagonists from other people's novels and use them blindly. I am really speechless.

I wrote a story about pancakes and fruit for more than ten chapters. During this period, I was stuck in the water. The story was not progressing at all. Characters kept entering the scene but it had no effect.

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I forgot which book I read. There is a character named Xiaobai in it. The protagonist seems to be reborn. He returns to Shanghai and inherits a real estate. Xiaobai in Midnight Little Red Horse Kindergarten has exactly the same speaking style and personality as you 😰😰😰

I hope you can comment more and make suggestions, no matter good or bad. My wish is to work hard with friends who like this book to write this book well. If you have your favorite songs, favorite movies or favorite people, you can leave a message to me and I will adopt it. Finally, I sincerely thank you all for your support.

Sichuan people find it a bit uncomfortable. Half of the babies will treat rice as Mang Mang when they are coaxing. Gua Wa Zi is a curse word. Normally, it is the last character of the name + Wa Zi. Pi Er Hei and Xin Hei have almost the same meaning 😅

It's well written. Since junior high school, few books have made me cry. Seeing the background of the narrative protagonist really gave me a strong sense of immersion. Come on

I finally got it once! !

There is no such thing as a celebrity brother. It's just the follow-up thought of Dong'er after hearing her three sisters' introduction to her brother🐶

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Mohe Dance Hall is neither good nor popular at all. How did it get to the front row? Any internet song is better than him

It's a bit different from Huang Hai. I can't stand selling the copyright of the tip of my tongue.,,

Come on, author! I don't have much time recently, so I'll take my time. . .

Come on, it's really good-looking. It's my first time to get the first place

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I've read Chapter 40 and it's very well written, but I don't know why, but I feel very tired from reading it. Maybe it's because I haven't read a slow-paced book for a long time.

It is doomed to be impossible to be omnipotent. If you write in a messy way, readers will also read it in a messy way.