Becoming a Void Walker Starts with Naruto

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It's really beautiful. Why not update it? It's a pity

It's very well written. It would be great if there was no real world. I would jump directly to the real world.

After being banned for a week, I can finally speak. The opening chapter is extremely brilliant. If he were not an experienced author, the author would be very talented in conceiving the story. Internet articles, like many popular literary and artistic works, are not the most critical in terms of writing style, values, and logic. The most important thing is whether the story is good or not. The opening story amazes me

The writing is really good, and it doesn't look like a newbie. I feel like no one is watching, and I'm afraid it'll be cool

It is strongly recommended not to include Chinese-Japanese words in your articles, such as "Hi", "Sou Ga", etc. It is very embarrassing...

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The writing is very solid, but unfortunately it's not my favorite style. It's a bit dull, and the plot progress is too grinding.

When it comes to Void Walker, isn't your first reaction a bit shameful?

Author, the speed of chakra refining is not the standard for whether you are a genius, it is the quantity. Chakra is not internal power, but divine power. The better your bloodline, the more chakra you will have. It cannot be increased through training. It is almost the same as a template. You will not use it for a second.

It's pretty good to watch, but the character of the protagonist is a bit broken. Didn't I say that he has no emotions before? Did I remember it wrong? The last few chapters feel more and more emotional. It looks a bit like Rimuru from the previous movie.

Hey

How many people like me skip the real-life part without watching it? 🤭

After reading the previous chapters, there are two problems with this book. One is that it is too delayed. The description of the real world is very confusing. The author wants to describe the protagonist as a wise man, but in fact the protagonist relies on a plug-in given to him by the author. He recruits the Walker Administration Bureau, but it only comes to sweep the floor, which is of no use. He randomly picked up a sniper rifle on the road, and two random intruders came to help hold it in front. The plot relies entirely on deus ex machina. Second, the strength of the heroine fluctuates depending on the author's mood. When we first meet, she is mentally exhausted and is scared off by the protagonist. When we meet again the next day, the container that can block B-level attacks is easily dismantled by the heroine. However, to escape with someone, she has to overdraw. And the so-called overdraft is to hang a regular buff, and it is clear as day, and the cheating is too outrageous.

You kept raising it, but ended up raising it to death?

The real world is actually well written, and there is no problem with the setting framework at first glance... The only problem is that it is too heavy, sophisticated but tasteless. In comparison, the weight of the Naruto world is only a little more than half of the real world. This structure is obviously not satisfactory to the fan party. Since the real world is compact and dangerous, it turns out that Naruto has the same tone, and both sides are in this dizzying state. However, the author is so short... It is too tiring to catch up. Judging from the setting of the protagonist, this sets the tone for the follow-up fandom world, but the real world is too dull, just like eating steamed buns for half a month, you might as well add some vegetables and dipping them in. This book is not so much a light novel fanfic style as it is a hardcore fantasy style. If I change the name and simply go to the fantasy side, it might be more popular. (I laughed to death when I saw about one hundred and twenty chapters, they are all pitfalls. Jpg

It's not bad, but I'm not interested in the main world at all. The dungeon world is better.

Incense

Ah? Coming from the cute king, it's all broken.

If you can't continue writing, then you might as well stop writing.

Wasn't it Chapter 169 when it was blocked? How come it's 173 after you follow it out?

It feels miserable, the author really has no popularity at all

You can't watch it after 168. Pity

Is the author going to stop updating? A little panic

It's a pity, I quite like the writing style and subject matter.

I wasn't planning to read it at first, but I've read it countless times, so I clicked on the catalog and saw a sentence about "serious people's seals". I fell in love with it and subscribed~