Trouble in the World Begins with the Lord of the Rings

No. 15

Speechless, Hermione was born in a magical family?

It's a cool article by a novice, it's a bit toxic, but overall it's okay, but there are some bugs that really make me speechless. Hermione was born in the magical world. Damn it, can the author stop such low-level mistakes from happening again?

In fact, don't write about the characters of Aunt Ya and Su Xin, they are still very interesting. The first two characters were speechless when they appeared. They were so old, and the plot was set up with an unrelated aunt and a silly and sweet woman. . The protagonist also had to act silly and cute in front of these two people, which was unpleasant to watch.

A dungeon ends after a few chapters, so I speedrun through it quickly. The protagonist is decisive and courageous, knows the plot well, and is invincible. The force system is gradual, leaving room for creation. The people, heavens and cities are bound to have a lot of fun (can't be too deliberate) The writing description + plot imagination can be regarded as a refreshing article. Although they are all relatively common points, the plots of National Campus Heavens and Urban Aunts are shattering. However, there are relatively few men's quick time travels, and it still looks very enjoyable. It tests the author's imagination, the balance between the copy and reality (I hope he is the main writer), and the upgrade speed.

There are not enough words in the update. Forcing a straight man to be straight is very harmful. Either he should not have female followers or he should not be so straight and narcissistic. Speed-passing is a cool piece of writing, no one will read it if it hurts the senses. You can only speak if you have a fan value of 200, which will result in fewer interactions with your book reviews, messages, and complaints, and your popularity will be low. The setting of enemies is too deliberate. In a world where you will die if you are killed (not to mention resurrection cards, which are useless if you have restraints), you can never imagine the means of group revenge. Auntie, this weakness is too obvious. Throwing mushrooms in the urban dungeon is also a normal operation. Mental operation + card + skill + prop. Learn about Yuri's Revenge.

Let's make a complaint. In the National Dungeon, there are only 4 factions with 10 million people. Tell me how many people there are in your big city.

It looks quite touching, why is it so bleak?

Listen to it all in one sitting. I like the way the male protagonist kills decisively in the dungeon. Naruto copy is the best. A small reward of 1,000 coins. There are very few Naruto fans who don't lick.

This book is very good. Why are fans restricted from commenting before it's even released?

Why did I suddenly download a dungeon with a girl I don't know?

I find this book very enjoyable to read. Some books with tens of thousands of collections are just average to me. Why is this book so rare?

How long do you have to write Douluo Dalu? I've been waiting for more than a month.

You are on a holiday for others, right?

What about wearing it quickly as promised? Currently 1/3 are Douluo, I don't want to watch them anymore

Money back, money back, money back. Are you sorry for us? Just look at it and it's gone

Go to Boruto and get Naura's future-predicting and time-traveling machine, and then get Ichi's ability to change the size of objects and yourself. Raising ten cubs