People Are Fighting for Victory, and the Three-Year Period Has Come

Author, take a look

The number of words is too obvious. One thing has to be repeated for several episodes before it is over. Other events are briefly mentioned. Author, you have too many inner dramas. Don't write so monotonously in the future. Also, your writing skills are not good. You need to be more rounded. The plot ideas are still broad. The ending of the story is particularly bad.

The three-year period has come, and we welcome the return of the Dragon King!

It started well, but it really didn't work before and after it was put on the shelves. After three years of meeting here, a lot of preparations were made, but Yun Leng still had to stay for anti-inflammatory, Yun Shan still appeared, Jie Jie Jie still appeared, and there was no change at all? What I want to ask is that I have been setting the stage before not wanting my family to be kidnapped, not wanting to repeat the original work, facing Jie Jie Jie, hoping to change the plot. What is the use of it? Is it just to improve the word count? so? Apart from arranging a Medusa, there is no plan at all? Didn't you think about changing the plot at all? The plot can only be faced but not changed?

The studs in the harem are not good, so, the protagonist should collect all Xiao Yan's women, and don't let Xiao Yan get lost in women 🙂🙂

Now it seems that there is no big problem, except that the ultimate goal of the protagonist is to go back. I feel that since it is time travel, then we should make peace with it as we come, instead of thinking about going back to this world where we have to work hard every day.

Because the author's writing skills are not strong enough, the description of the plot has many shortcomings, so I opened this post. If you have any suggestions you would like to make, you can write them here. The author will read each one. Or readers who feel that the description of this book is not adequate, you can point it out here. Thank you thank you 🙏

In the original work, Xiao Xuan said that although there were few Dou Emperors in the ancient times of Dou Qi Continent, it was not like the legendary realm where there were no realms. Logically speaking, the ancient imperial clan should have left behind the inheritance that the Origin Qi was needed to break through Dou Emperor. However, in fact, Xiao Xuan did not know this. He only guessed it after repeatedly failing to attack Dou Emperor. This obviously broke the inheritance. There is also the Dou Qi Continent, the Wild Ancient Territory, where the beasts are ferocious beasts that can never produce spiritual intelligence. There is no such thing in other places. So, can we conclude that the Dou Qi Continent was also invaded by evil races from outside the territory in ancient times. The Dou Emperors all died trying to kill the invading evil demon emperors. Therefore, the inheritance of Dou Emperors was cut off, and many sky-high-priced martial arts and fighting skills were also lost. After the death of the Demon Emperor and a group of evil tribes, the demonic energy was sealed in the Wilderness Ancient Territory, so the beasts there were affected by this and turned into ferocious beasts. The Swallowing Spirit Tribe is actually the evil spirit tribe born from the combination of the evil tribes from outside the territory and the humans from Douqi Continent.

Give me back your monthly ticket! Get out of here! It sucks in the end! May your son be born from a paper hug! And it's a single-celled organism!

How come Dou Po's abilities are all fire? Can't we mention something else? Is fire very powerful? Not to mention time, space, let's talk about gravity, the four forces of the universe, wind, fire, thunder and lightning, metal, wood, water, fire, earth, soul, etc., Among so many abilities, which one is no better than fire. Just know how to fire

As we all know, Dou Qi Continent is a lower plane under the Great Thousand World, and Tianyuan Realm is at the same level as the Great Thousand World. The Daqian World is dominated by spiritual power cultivation, the Tianyuan World is dominated by Origin Qi, and Dou Po is dominated by Dou Qi. However, in Dou Po, Dou Sheng needs "Origin Qi" to break through Dou Emperor, and there is a high probability that it is Origin Qi rather than Spiritual Qi. Therefore, it can be inferred that the Dou Qi Continent should have been part of the Tianyuan World at the beginning, but it moved to the Great Thousand World for some unknown reason, and then there was no source of source Qi supply. This resulted in the Dou Qi Continent having less and less Source Qi in ancient times. In the end, Dou Qi Continent could no longer produce Dou Emperor.                                                                                                        The spiritual energy and the source energy are at the same level, and we can also support the Dou Sheng to continue to practice. After Xiao Yan broke through the Dou Emperor, he mistakenly thought that the spiritual energy was the "origin energy". Therefore, it can be concluded that the Dou Qi Continent ran from the Tianyuan Realm to the Great Thousand World in ancient times and has been "secluded". As a result, the cultivation resources of the Origin Qi level have not been replenished until Xiao Yan shattered the void, broke the closed state of the Dou Qi Continent, and connected with the Great Thousand World. In addition, the world law that the Dou Qi Continent will produce Dou Emperor's bloodline should also be the product of the mutual influence and combination of the Qi Luck Law of the Tianyuan World and the Spiritual Vein Law of the Great Thousand World.

Every time I see this Medusa's Hunyuan Creation Bloodline, I want to delete it. It's too ridiculous. I have to mix in a fantasy fan's vocabulary with a fairy tale.

I finally signed the contract. Everyone, if you like this book, you can vote. The monthly recommendation vote is open to all comers. It doesn't matter if you don't vote. Please comment a lot, and you can also guide me where I make mistakes or unreasonable things. Suggestions are welcome!

When I saw where Xiao Yan went to Yunlan Mountain, I really wanted to complain. The protagonist already knew the plot, but it was still the same plot after going round and round. This is a joke. If you don't mess with the Soul Palace, you won't be able to write it, right? If you treat the Soul Palace as an enemy, you can write about other events. It's better to be safe. It's the same as the original work. Where is the opposition in the Yunlan Sect? After all, the first dozens of chapters are written to avoid attracting the attention of the Soul Palace. After that, it is still the original plot. Then the first dozens of chapters just keep talking nonsense. After all, there is no protagonist. The original work is fine in the end. It doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not.

After more than three hundred chapters, I feel that the source fire divine thunder has been weakened even worse than the alien fire. Except for the golden light Dao Yan, other source fires have to be combined with the divine thunder to be of any use. It is really numb.

The soul power of the protagonist can take the route of the martial arts palace. The origin of the soul of the tomb is left to Xiao Yan. I feel that for the same soul in the imperial realm, there is a big difference between having a palace and not having a palace. In addition, since the protagonist takes the route of thunder and fire attributes, he should find an opportunity to go to the Tianxuan Continent next door to get the Flame Ancestral Talisman and the Thunder Ancestral Talisman for his own use.

Queen Medusa

Yunyun

By the way, Zi Yan has seen quite a lot of plots, why don't you stop it? This is a stock with great potential. After all, she can become the queen if she has the chance later.

The writing is okay, but the main character has a bad personality and a place where the strong is respected kills people and leaves some tail behind! I still like a protagonist who kills decisively. This protagonist looks like a combination of contradictions! Why should he leave some tail when he has become enemies with his classics? He must wait until the people behind him come to his door one by one!

Speaking of Tudou, it's easy for supporting characters to have the same name. I remember there was an Elder of the Soul Palace named Qin Tian in Dou Po, and there was also a guy named Qin Tian in Wudong Hundred Dynasties, and then there was the Demon-Slaying King Qin Tian in The Lord. 😥😥😥😥😥

Please don't let the ending suck. You can't rewrite the ending. You can time travel to the Great Master.

Special contribution of 500 was made. Three years ago, I knew the plot clearly but still handled it like a person with no intelligence. The protagonist's IQ is worrying. After thinking about it carefully, I could only lower my voice in exchange for a smooth resolution of the matter. In the end, the plot was still the same as the original work, and the motivation was pretty bad. Practice hard to help the protagonist wipe the butt? If you want a horse, just stick with it. If you want a horse, just stand up. It's okay if a bunch of fan fiction robs the protagonist of the opportunity. Furthermore, the opportunity is not just as described in the original work. Luck is not that bad, okay? If you want to write about the same camp as Xiao Yan, write a different plot line. I thought I was reading the original work.

I know I won't write about the whole world, but okay, this journey will be like this.

Emm, everything else is pretty good, but there are really too many side effects and psychological explanations. You can't find the key points at a glance. It's like looking at a running account. It would be good if you really cut off at least 2/3, otherwise the plot will not be highlighted and you will feel a little tired.

Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly! ! ! ! ! !

By the way, when the protagonist breaks through the Dou Emperor, will it cause the Heavenly Lord Tribulation?

I guess this Dou Emperor in black is not actually Dou Emperor, but the Youmo Emperor from an evil race outside the territory. 😜

I put a new book on the bookshelf, but why is it taken off the shelf before I even read it?

The ending looks a bit sad😣😣😣😣