Rebirth Started When My Wife Chased Me

When this review was published, the novel was updated at Chapter 82 Let me briefly talk about my feelings, mainly focusing on the early high school life. After all, it is only a high school paper with more than 100,000 words, and it is not the author's priority. The evaluation is definitely biased. I wrote it for everyone Tu Yile The plot is just okay, the characters are average, and the writing is incoherent. The high school plot is quite ordinary, very ordinary and natural, has no outstanding points, is not well written, lacks a good sense of immersion, is out of touch with real life (it depends on the connection with real life), and has no value in talking about it (after all, the author also said that he is good at being honest with each other). As for the characters, after all, the high school part is only the early stage. The main thing is to establish the relationship between the two in the early stages and establish an image foundation. At present, it seems that the heroine is relatively clingy (she chases her husband without being clingy) and lacks a sense of security (she was reborn because of a divorce), and she should gradually become independent in the future (after all, she was also a female star before she was reborn). The male protagonist is the kind of person who is quite assertive (leave the wife he has found as soon as he says it), very firm (break up when he says it will break up, don't care about him again, and don't want to give me any advice), and of course he is still affectionate (how can a novel be ruthless?). In short, the image is clear, but the characteristics are not distinct enough.       ，，，， ：             ""，（……）， The question is, was Chen Juan in the classroom from the beginning or was he walking into the classroom? From Chapter 12: "After Lunch" to Chapter 13: "Chen Juan is sitting in the classroom" there is no clear hint or explanation, which will make people think "Hey, how did he change to this?" Of course, it just passed by in a flash. However, there are not many such examples in the book, and reading the whole book will give people a strange feeling (sorry, my limited skills cannot explain it). There are many places like this in the high school chapter that left a deep impression on me.               Sometimes it is a little redundant, such as here   Compared with the lack of separation above, here "He tapped the screen to reply" is a very redundant sentence and slightly cumbersome. The context already indicates that they are chatting, plus the special format so there is no need to emphasize it. (Of course, here is an example. This is not to say that the whole book is like this. There is just such a place in this book that made me "click". I will say one more thing by the way) Of course, we readers do not have high requirements for the writing style of dog food articles. If you make the sugar well, the sugar is sweet enough, and the story is almost the same. We will not care too much about how you write in other places, but I really think this "severance" author needs attention. I don't know if it's because of the author's own problems or because he's not good at high school chapters, so the writing is weird. But the current high school final chapter feels much better than the high school chapter. I hope it will continue. Then, as a reader who has read Mi Zhiji's book about the dog food of a girlfriend up owner, his book gave me the feeling of searching for sugar in the main plot. The main plot was written a little too much and the sugar was covered up. There were many incidents with the supporting characters in the later part of the book that seriously diluted the sweetness. As a result, I had a strange feeling after watching it. This feeling arose after the two established a relationship. Be sure to remember that Mainline serves dog food! (Ah, my personal wish) From my personal point of view, the main line of dog food novels is to give the male and female protagonists a goal and a point of intersection. The interaction of two people working together to complete the task (bushi) is the highlight. Whether the main plot itself is completed is not the point. In the end, I really want them to live together. The thoughts of an old couple and the hearts of young girls should have a very interesting daily life, but thinking about it, the possibility seems very low. . . I hope college is as sweet as it is!

I read this book in one breath in more than 5 hours, and I felt as if I was seeing a real life story about a couple getting to know each other around me. First let's talk about the advantages. The author's writing skills are very good, and his depiction of emotional lines and character growth are also quite good. Although it suffers from the disadvantage of not having an outline, the overall plot structure is reasonable and concise, and it can be said to be a small but exquisite work. As for the shortcomings, they are more regrettable than shortcomings. The author also realizes that the core of the plot of romance novels is the emotional story of the male and female protagonists. However, I think that the premature and weak plot is not necessarily due to the premature design of the two confessions in the high school chapter. In fact, the theme of this book: the rebirth of a miserable mandarin duck whose marriage broke down due to the pressure of reality and attempts to reunite. It is a theme worthy of further exploration. If you always pay attention to the dual contrast between the past life and the present life in the narrative, the tension of the plot will be much stronger. The reflections of the male protagonist and the female protagonist on their respective personalities, mutual feelings, career and family relationships, etc., And the decoding of these issues are actually enough to support a work of 1 million words. Although this work explores the first two, it actually avoids the third point - the heroine's career choice is not just an emotional regret that can be answered. During the reading process, I have been looking forward to the hero and heroine giving a better answer to this question through "living over again". Of course, for Chen Juan and Su Qian, this novel is undoubtedly a complete story. What I regret is that for readers, Chen Juan and Su Qian are not yet complete characters. If the author is determined to revise and continue writing this book, he may be able to write a more complete and in-depth work. A little humble opinion, please bear with the author.

The author has most likely never been married or in a relationship. He writes for the sake of making money. The effect is like a farmer uncle asking the emperor, "Why don't you cultivate the land with a golden hoe." It can only be said that the target audience is very clear: "Readers who can accept inconsistent characters, interspersed plots that are overly deliberate in order to achieve certain goals, and dog-licking behavior that appears from time to time, and who can endure all this and die for the last bite of candy."

Let me tell those who want to watch it first, don't be misled by some video titles, such as "no touching for seven years", the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very good, both in the past and this life, and there is no such thing as not being allowed to touch (this can be conclusively proven in Chapter 109), cheating and the like. One word of advice: Don't read with a self-righteous bias. You might feel uncomfortable finding faults in Pure Love. Let me briefly talk about the important settings of this book. There will be spoilers, so read with caution. This book is a dual student + campus + pure love story. I believe everyone is familiar with the latter two, but I will mainly talk about the first one. There are really not many books about twins, because it is difficult to grasp the "distance" between two people. At the beginning of the book, the male protagonist knew that the female protagonist had been reborn, but the female protagonist did not know that the male protagonist had been reborn as well. This information gap also led to a series of subsequent events. If the female protagonist finds out that the male protagonist has also been reborn, she will probably come directly to ask the male protagonist. The male protagonist will most likely refuse directly and finish the book (laughs). Seeing this, you may have two questions: According to you, the heroine also knew about the hero later, but why didn't she ask the hero and why did the hero agree later? First of all, the first question. At first, the heroine did not know how the hero treated her after his rebirth, so she might have confessed directly. However, in this book, the heroine learned that the hero was also reborn and also knew another thing: the hero was deliberately hiding it from her. The heroine must have thought that the hero did not want to be involved with her, so she did not dare to confess to the hero for fear of being rejected. The second question is that the reason why the male protagonist resists the female protagonist is that he is afraid of repeating the same mistakes rather than not loving the female protagonist. Later he mentioned that the female protagonist is his "white moonlight". If the female protagonist told the male protagonist that she regretted it from the beginning, would the male protagonist agree? Maybe, but I think there is a high probability that they will refuse. It's like a couple quarreling and then making up after a few minutes? I don't think it's realistic. Why did the male protagonist become soft-hearted again? My personal understanding is that the male protagonist saw the various efforts made by the female protagonist to recover him and her sincerity, and the male protagonist has calmed down after such a long time, so he chose to forgive the female protagonist. Well, there are actually a lot of things I want to say, because it's been a long time since I saw a high-quality sugar novel. The last time I read it was Lintian at the beginning of last year. One of the stories really made me feel like I was reading Lintian. I feel a bit empty after reading this. I want to share my thoughts. I will follow up on this post later and continue to talk about other aspects of my understanding. It's too late today, so that's all.

It's 1315 minutes and I've read it for so long, so I've fully understood the plot. Let me tell you my opinions. First of all, this novel describes the characters' expressions, movements, and the surrounding environment very beautifully. It makes people feel immersed in it. Secondly, the relationship between the two of them heats up quickly (the two of them are still in love with each other). In the early stage, the physical contact between the two people is relatively small. Later, after the confession, the physical contact between the two people and the relationship heats up rapidly. Let me tell you my views on the male and female protagonists. When I first read this novel, I liked the male protagonist (I am a boy). The male protagonist is considerate, attentive, detailed, and good at taking care of people. He is versatile, so when I knew he could be with Su Qian, I was not envious because I felt he deserved it. Secondly, let's talk about the female protagonist. She has a lively and cheerful personality, is friendly, clingy, and coquettish. She will pretend to be weak in front of the people she likes, but she is really serious about things. They are a natural match. Let's talk about love. Both of them love each other and are very courageous. They may have the same ending in this life but still choose to fall in love with each other. Finally, let's talk about something else. Since the author didn't write about whether the heroine in the previous life was tainted in the entertainment industry, let's not make blind guesses. This is respect for the author and the characters in the book. There are also many regrets in this novel, such as the story of the previous life, the college life of this life, two people opening a shop, honeymoon, and not knowing the name of the child. There are regrets, but it is precisely because of regrets that we cherish the beauty ahead

Liking is a matter of one person, but love is a matter of two people. When love is reciprocated, happiness will be within reach.

This is really the best novel of the same type that I have read so far. Although the article is called "Backward Chase", it is actually just a story about a repentant wife regaining her true love, right? The male and female protagonists love each other deeply, and in a new life, the wife "coaxes" the disappointed husband through actions. They spend the rest of their lives hand in hand, seeking a balance between love and hobbies. I read this article over and over again, and I have a different experience every time. I love it.

In fact, it can be changed into a short story, which can be completed after the college entrance examination. Not only does the long daily life have no plot, but the author himself is not easy to write, and it is easy to end. Yes, I am the pure love god of war.

It's too detailed, short and concise, without revealing anything, and the words are plain and simple. You can only see it if you look forward and backward carefully. In short, it has a strong sense of foreshadowing (I am the kind of person who reads slowly. When I read it, I can always understand it in advance at a certain moment before the author explains it)

The writing is very beautiful\(//∇//)\

Spend six yuan to be tortured😭😭

I finished reading it before May Day, so I will write another book review for this sweet novel Objectively speaking, the author's writing is not at the top level of the same genre, it is above average, but the significance of this novel to me is not the writing, but the daily life of two people depicted in the novel Different from other rebirth novels, the male protagonist/girl starts with the system, or the social elite is reborn, and after a few years, they become rich and wealthy. This little sweet article is more ordinary, more everyday, and more aimed at the general public It is precisely because the lives of Xiao Juan and Xiao Qian are very close to ordinary people, so it seems more real and gives people hope for life This hope does not mean that I also have a daydream about having a girlfriend who is a school belle, and living a sweet life with her every day. Rather, it allows the majority of the general public to have a good expectation for the future when facing their current lives, whether they are prosperous and wonderful, or embarrassed or depressed With this expectation, they can (re)look at themselves with hope and continue to work hard for the future. I think this is the meaning of this sweet article to me, and it is also the meaning of similar daily-themed novels My personal opinion, welcome to discuss

Take a look at the love apartment (｡◕ฺˇε ˇ◕ฺ｡)

How can I put it this way? At first, I felt that the male protagonist and the female protagonist were too boring. Later, it became sweeter and sweeter. I often made my aunt laugh. Anyway, the good reviews are very sweet.

The writing is delicate and smooth, and the main plot revolves around the emotions of the male and female protagonists. I just love to read it. It's a pity that it's too short, the pit/background development is a little less, and the branch lines are less extended. Summary: Excellent

Sometimes I would smile like an aunt in the middle of it, and I was happy for them when they got married, but I still felt a little sad in the end.

In fact, this book is short and quite good. If it is too long, you will feel bored after reading it for a long time. You will also feel tired if you keep watching two people accidentally eating their dog food.

After reading this novel, I thought of the person I love most and the things I did with her. This novel brought back a lot of memories for me, because certain things begged us to separate.

After reading Chapter 118, it was quite sweet. As a result, this chapter is a direct reversal. Chen Juan came to pick up Su Qian in the heavy rain and brought umbrellas to Su Qian's three roommates. This was all good, but in the end I had to write about Su Qian's inner drama. Fortunately, Chen Juan brought an extra umbrella, so Su Qian didn't have to waver between her roommates and Chen Juan. Haha, it made me laugh so damn hard. Her boyfriend, who came to pick her up in the rain, was still her husband from her previous life, and her roommate, whom she had only known for half a month, said that both sides were equally important. It can only be said that he was worthy of being a top figure in the entertainment industry in his previous life. After his rebirth, Chen Juan was fooled by all kinds of fancy tricks, thinking that Su Qian really loved him. He also said that this was Su Qian's tenderness and love for the world. Made me laugh so hard. My previous husband's current boyfriend was no better than a few roommates I just met, and he said he loved Chen Juanai to the death. As a result, I can waver in front of several people I just met. After rebirth, Su Qian's pursuit of Chen Juan was the same as Chen Juan's pursuit of Su Qian. Even when he performed figure skating for Chen Juan, which he learned in his previous life, he just responded to the situation when there were a lot of people, enjoying the stars and other people's eyes. He never thought of asking Chen Juan to surprise him. After Su Qian became famous, Chen Juan was like a stranger to her. He could only see her on the stage, and he only knew her on the stage. After reading this chapter, I went to read the previous chapter. Chen Juan proposed divorce to her, and she agreed without asking anything. She was reluctant to leave when she got the divorce certificate, and I always felt that she was cheating on her character. But before it was fully dented, it was hit by a car. After being reborn, she went after Chen Juan again, but she was unhappy that the person who had been licking her stopped licking her. Entertainment and revenge after rebirth and before becoming famous. As for giving Chen Juan blood, I just have been in the entertainment industry for a long time and don't care about this kind of thing at all. I always feel that after reading Chapter 118, Su Qianai and Chen Juan's character has already changed. My previous husband's current boyfriend is more volatile than my roommate whom I've known for half a month. Who can really believe that Su Qian loves Chen Juan to the point of death. After reading this chapter, I think about the scene before it which is entirely about Su Qian, a scene about Su Qian's love for Chen Juan. Su Qian'ai and Chen Juan were all staged. It's a pity that Chen Juan believed it again.

The ending has been figured out for you: there is no such thing as a quiet time, it's just a couple's fantasy before they were killed! 😏

There is no such thing as another life, it is just a regretful fantasy of a divorced couple who got into a car accident 🙄

Author, let me give you a suggestion. There are too few descriptions before the time travel. I don't know why a popular singer regretted it when she got the divorce certificate. The advantages of the male protagonist and how good he was to her were not brought out. They directly told me that the female protagonist regretted it and wanted to pursue her backwards. She felt a little self-satisfied. The female protagonist studied well, was beautiful, sang well, and could still live without the male protagonist. Why did she regret it? Everything must have a cause and effect. If you don't write these things, the foundation of your entire book will not be settled. Hope this helps.

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Are you reborn and going to fall in love? ? ? ? What a talent! Waste of rebirth slots

Anyway, it's too estranged for the male protagonist and the female protagonist to be together again after their rebirth. Before the rebirth, the heroine's interest and dream was to enter the entertainment industry, and the male protagonist went to the extent of getting divorced in order to fulfill the heroine's wish. After the rebirth, the heroine stopped entering the entertainment industry for the sake of the heroine. I don't know if this is because she loves the hero or because she wants to live another life after experiencing the entertainment industry? The male protagonist knows that the female protagonist's interest and dream are still in the entertainment industry, why can't he just let it go? The female protagonist doesn't go to the entertainment industry and they immediately get together again. What a bitch. If you really want to give me some benefits, then you will be tricked. The heroine cannot go directly to the entertainment industry. Is it good for the male lead and another female lead who is in the entertainment industry? Comparing the two sugars of female and female, there is no such thing. In my opinion, all the candies given to me now are durian candies. Only a few people like them, but most people are disgusted. Since the heroine can neglect the male protagonist for the sake of her career, it is impossible for her to leave the entertainment industry after her rebirth. If the male protagonist can endure it so much for the female protagonist, why doesn't he just stay away from rejection after being reborn? You must know that a female artist who is not married or in love can be more popular. I feel like the heroine wrote about a male protagonist who she found after having experienced the entertainment industry and wanted to change her life. I don't know whether the male protagonist is really stupid and a bitch or really affectionate, but they are together again after a while. All I can say is that the male protagonist before his rebirth really deserved it.

Recommendations are based on pursuit of reading. Please read it every day and don't keep reading. One final word. Don't keep books! Don't keep books!

My aunt was laughing throughout the whole process, and the sudden ending made me a little melancholy. I would like to mention that this is my first full order, please give me a boost!

When it comes to marriage, both men and women will gradually lose their feelings for each other after years of neglect. Like this, the male protagonist just sucks the dog and swallows his anger, feeling very awkward. Moreover, the female protagonist becomes a star after getting married. Before she is completely popular, there will be evidence of her marriage on the Internet. Now, if you see a celebrity getting married, can you really support her? This feeling is like supporting your celebrity husband, it's so mindless and disgusting

I felt a little heartbroken when I saw Su Qian saying to Chen Juan, "Don't you want me anymore?" There was once a girl who said the same thing to me. I had my first love in junior high school, and I went to the army in my freshman year in high school. A few months before I was about to be discharged from the army, I was still in the exercise. I mentioned breaking up on the phone. After a few dozen seconds, she said the same thing, but there was another sentence at the end, "The person next to me when I get married is not you, what should I do?" I hung up the phone. The train coming back from the army passed by the city where she studied, and I didn't even look at her. In a blink of an eye, November 2021 came, and she suddenly added me back, saying that she wanted to meet me to feel relieved, but I didn't agree, and I didn't want to let myself feel relieved In January 2022, she posted a photo on Moments, and someone proposed to her. She traveled through my entire youth, and all my previous struggles were for her. Many times I wonder if the person next to her would still be me if I didn't go to the army. I have been coming to Qidian for so long, and my favorite is the rebirth article. The nirvana of the grilled fish was rekindled. Why is this? Isn't this a pity?

To be honest, even if you travel through time, your soul is still there. You made two adult souls do very sweet things. I feel so toxic. I heard a sentence that made a middle-aged couple have nightmares for three days in a row. If one is an adult soul, the other is a normal adolescent trajectory. It's understandable that the two of them would have a sweet drama. With love, adult souls grow together with little souls. Or teasing your other half is very sweet.