Burning Jin

In the beginning, the protagonist was said to be a knight-errant, but later he became a weak scholar.

The question "Ran Jin" was obtained well. On the one hand, it can reflect the rise of the Jin Dynasty; on the other hand, it can burn out the Eastern Jin Dynasty, illuminate the protagonist, and turn the candle to ashes; in addition, it can also take the path of starting a prairie fire with a single spark. It can be said that the intention is far-reaching. 😜

The red protagonist, Lan Zhai Bin.

There's nothing wrong with writing about a princess. Do we have to write about a princess who falls in love with the protagonist? The author himself said that he wanted to use a princess to write about the sectarian relationship, but ended up writing about falling in love. Don't you think it's inconsistent?

. . . What this maid wrote is too self-righteous, right?

The descriptions are smooth and in place, not overly exaggerated, which is good. However, the only shortcoming is that the writing skills and sophistication are insufficient. It feels a bit behind Xiaobai's writing. When Ru Lao saw modern words, they appeared instantly, such as: marriage, divorce and other words. It is recommended that the author use words more carefully, and it is best to avoid using modern thinking to speak for the ancients. After all, we have returned to the society at that time. All masterpieces have basically done this, using ancient language methods to explain modern time travellers, slowly and slowly in every detail. It silently expresses the differences made by time-travelers and the changers of the times.

If you are rebellious, you will not be able to get a palace in front of you, because you still want the princess to be an official. It keeps going down. Love lines generally should not be added to the main line. Choose another one.

This book has fire potential. But I couldn't stand it because the dialogue was half-literate and my cultural level was not high enough. Just like when I first saw Qin Li.

As a history lover, the title of the author's book is good. The Jin and Southern and Northern Dynasties are really as brilliant as fireworks. However, the author's writing is too literary and picturesque, which creates a threshold for online readers and reduces the audience a lot. Trust is cultivated slowly, and you won't be convinced as soon as you get started. This is a historical novel, and it is a little too blunt and not enough foreshadowing.

Cutting the River to the East

Write well and check more information, maybe you can become a god.

It's well written, why haven't you updated it?

It's been five days, now you're a eunuch?

A good book. It is rare to see a well-written book on the subject of the Jin Dynasty. This book is still suitable for my appetite. I hope the author will read more. I will not be stingy with the monthly recommendation.

Does it mean that the protagonist is just an ordinary person because he is neither good at literature nor martial arts?

Is there anyone who has read it who can comment on how good it is? I just read it and what is the author's logic and writing skills like? Are you at the level of the Three Mad Masters?