Become the Dominant Player in the Comic World

The author takes it for granted. If he were to challenge the difficulty level in his first book as a fledgling, his performance would have been several times higher if he had written a time traveler protagonist normally. Choosing an indigenous protagonist in a fan novel requires extremely high standards for the author's writing skills. If the author only works part-time to write what he wants to write, he won't be happy. If the author plans to make a living from this, it is recommended that the first one or two books be written according to public taste.

So, the protagonist is a real Marvel native? No trace of a time traveler at all?

I haven't read the book, but wouldn't it be better if the protagonist were an aborigine instead of a time traveler? If you are a time traveler, you can defy the sky and the earth without using your brain to write. The natives dare to write without using their brain and attack the streets in minutes. Looking at the books from ten years ago, I still remember many of the indigenous protagonists. In recent years, how many books do you remember with the protagonists being time travellers? ? ?

Fan fiction with indigenous characters as protagonists is not beyond the control of masters. The chance of it being bad is too high

Writing about indigenous people, it is impossible for you to break the fateful arrangement without external help. That book becomes a bug.

The Marvel clip is quite interesting, but later on you mixed some personal information with some biochemical writing. I couldn't stand it anymore, and I persuaded you to quit. Anyone with a brain knows that time travel should not be talked about casually, and you still tell a Jill who has status and strength that doesn't mean anything. I can't even see the point of you writing these snippets? Does the protagonist value love and justice? Or are you just looking for sex? Since you are pursuing maximizing profits, you might as well cooperate with Umbrella, or control the company behind your back. Stop playing the old trick of being a messenger of justice and saving the world. In addition, at the level of the infinite gem universe, your bird virus can absorb 1/3 of the gems. It's so fucking nonsense. I'm laughing to death.

Aboriginal? ? ? No sense of substitution

Why do you keep writing about the Resident Evil virus? Don't you feel disgusted by the virus that turns people into the living dead?

So far it's okay, it's pretty good-looking, and there's nothing wrong with it other than the forced death of Erkins 👍

If you write a same-text novel where the protagonist is an indigenous person, you will basically be offended, because this situation will give readers a very inexplicable feeling. If you want to write about an indigenous person, write something original. If you write a same-text novel without a God's perspective, the readers will not have a sense of involvement. If you write the protagonist's IQ or other aspect is very good, it doesn't matter whether you have a system or not. But if you write a same-story novel where the first protagonist is not a time traveler, there is no God's perspective, and the second is no system, this will be a drama.

The beginning is okay, but then it becomes the same old routine. . . A lot of new books lately start out okay, but then they bloom. . I really doubt that the author even bought it online.

Is Osborn's IQ enough? There is hereditary mental illness in this family. The father died and the son went crazy. The son became normal. Marvel resurrected the father and went crazy again. The grandson also has mental problems.

Not a time traveler, it's meaningless

Trivia: what if is also MCU😄

Aboriginal pig's feet, no sense of representativeness