One Piece: The Book-Book Fruit

The author has obviously been reading the comments. What everyone is most interested in is the development of Shushu Fruit. However, you have written hundreds of thousands of words now, and most of the content you have written has nothing to do with Shushu Fruit. It's okay to improve the Charlotte family's combat power. After all, it's about developing the brain. With the novel abilities of the Devil Fruit, everyone is still willing to order more. But ever since I went to the Kingdom of Flowers, it has been a running list. No one has the patience to read these. After all, you are not writing about daily life.

If the book world is afraid of burning, just put a Boruto in it.

After reading the previous twenty chapters, you were either helping the protagonist's brothers to develop fruit, or analyzing the situation of other pirate groups and the navy. The plot has not yet been developed, and the protagonist has very few roles. It's completely indifferent. Most people who come to read your novels are based on how you develop the fruit of books. I'm not here to see you fix One Piece bugs! If you really want to write these things, you have to wait until the plot unfolds before adding them bit by bit. Rather than just pile them all into the first few dozen chapters. Dry and dry doesn't look good at all. How to attract readers?

To be honest, this book can probably be called a layout flow? It feels like the world is really being deduced, and it can be said that the viewing experience is quite good. For example, it is written that the Big Mom Group is expanding its territory everywhere, but Blackbeard unexpectedly jumps out and persuades Whitebeard to follow the expansion. The reason given is that it is easier to find the Dark Fruit only if the territory is wide. This is very true. Unlike many of the protagonists in the fandom who have quickly entered the sea of ​​martial arts, Blackbeard is still motionless and acts like an NPC that has not triggered the plot. It can be said that the logic is quite good Until the Kingdom of Flowers, to be honest, I don't understand why the author cares about the Kingdom of Flowers so much, and has created a complete logical chain for the Kingdom of Flowers. However, the Kingdom of Flowers is very clumsy in the original work, and the forced editing of more than ten chapters of the plot that is not in the original book is indeed filling in the pits, and it really discourages people from quitting. It feels like the author is thinking about the Kingdom of Flowers just like Oda is thinking about his Wano Country and Oden. It's too dramatic. The result of going for the pirate style is like reading the history of Chinese dynasties. It can be seen that the author is careful. Anyway, I booked and skipped. If the author wants to retain more people, it is best not to think about the Kingdom of Flowers

，，， I remembered this when I beat my aunt, and I felt very unhappy when I saw those brothers and sisters being killed. Or others can't write about the charisma of these brothers and sisters, so they treat them as ordinary bosses and then feel bad about it, and then abandon the book. Is there anyone who has the same emm as me?

After studying for a long time, I finally found out why I felt tired and why I didn't feel immersed. . . Chapter 53, a random cutout of a page, what is the beginning of each paragraph? "Because", "Besides", "After all", "Especially", "Because" They are all words with an explanatory meaning... It's really not like a novel, like a composition... The author can really learn how to write stories, or practice writing short stories. Maybe the story in his mind is very good, but it changes when he writes it... It's a pity that he has the perfect setting in his mind and his own perfect logic... In the end, the novel still needs to have a story and a sense of substitution...

The book fruit ability should be conceptual. The most fundamental thing about books is information. I think the most basic thing is that the ability user itself is equivalent to a book. It can record, view, and understand all books, including historical texts and other book-related information carriers. If it is further developed, it can see the history. For example, if a sword is used as a book, its forging history will be recorded. Of course, it can only be seen, or it can create a space according to its own script. Anyway, I think it is unlikely that it is the ability to control books, because books can be called books because they record knowledge, and they are concepts, not concrete things like rubber food. If it is a paper fruit, it is reasonable to make paper and control paper, but a book fruit should not be something like creating and controlling things.

Personally, I understand that no matter what kind of fruit, development should have an upper limit and a scope. If you only rely on your imagination to develop a system like Superman, it should be a bug. Even the imagination must be combined with the scope of fruit development. Why are all superhuman fruits developed by some people and are practical, while others are useless? I guess it has a lot to do with the degree of development direction. A fruit has countless development branches, and human energy is limited. You can only rely on luck and wisdom to choose the direction that best suits you, and then deepen it, so as to achieve the purpose of awakening the fruit. A fruit is like a computer. Its running speed and installed hardware have all been designed. You cannot use an ordinary computer as a supercomputer. In short, the upper limit of the fruit has been set. Bug-level capabilities that exceed the upper limit cannot be achieved at all due to the mismatch of the hardware. The name of Xiangshu Shuguo sounds very buggy, but it is also possible that the hardware does not match and bug-level capabilities cannot be realized. So my understanding is that the best direction for the fruits of books is to be used for assistance. Since the ability cannot be embodied, the only place where it can be operated is in the world of books. Let us then think about whether there is room for operation in the world of books. In fact, there is. For example, using the world of books as a training ground, you can source By continuously sending people in to experience fantasy with real life and death training, you can train a powerful army or personal strength. As we all know, if you want to become a strong person, you must inevitably break the limit and experience life and death. In reality, opponents with the same strength as you cannot risk their lives with you. Therefore, the probability of a strong person appearing is relatively reduced. 😃

Some suggestions for the author to develop the fruit: 1. The book fruit combines knowledge, color and domineering to predict the future, and displays it with text or images. The images can be divided into still pictures and dynamic images. 2. After being able to predict the future, you can modify the concrete text or images. In this way, you can modify the future, and use "modify the future" as a medium to derive the ability to modify the present and the past. 3. Develop the world in the book, incorporate the written story into the book that is embodied by the book fruit, and turn it into a whole story world, which can bring people and objects in, and can also materialize the items and characters in it. The degree of realization depends on the strength of the book fruit itself and the degree of development of the book fruit. 4. Develop a book of skills and gain the writer's experience and skills in writing the book through fusion books. You can directly understand and use the content in the fusion book, and intercept the experience and wisdom used by the original author of the book when creating it. 5. Develop books of wisdom, print and distribute a variety of books for people to read through the fruit of books, use books as a medium to obtain other people's understanding and thinking methods of the content in the books, and use the wisdom of all living beings to enhance your own wisdom. 6. Develop the Book of Immortality, use the ability of the Book Fruit to replace the paper in the book with the life card, and bind yourself to the life card. When you are seriously injured or the life card burns, you can use the ability of the book fruit to repair or replace the damaged life card, and through the causal relationship between the two, your own injuries and status will also be repaired. 7. Develop a book of blood. Since paper is also an organic matter, it can theoretically reproduce the cell structure through shaping. And because of the information-carrying capacity of the book, it can carry and reproduce the biological information of living creatures and even the cells of people with fruit abilities, thus creating a book of blood with various unique abilities. When used, it can be used by oneself and others, and can also reproduce the complete individual of the biological information. 8. There are also various ways to develop abilities such as the Book of Power, the Book of Agility, the Book of Memory, the Book of Props, the Book of Information, the Book of Healing, the Book of Time, the Book of Space, the Book of Kingdom of God, etc. Because there are too many, I won't go into details. I can only say that the abilities that can be developed by the book fruit are as numerous as the stars. If you think about it for a while, you will have a lot of powerful development and use methods, and they are all reasonable and logical. ps: Although there are many abilities that can be developed, due to the upper limit of Devil Fruit and users, there will naturally be limitations in the abilities that can be developed. However, as long as there are more correct ways to develop abilities, the user's abilities will naturally be stronger.

If I give you a book fruit, you will think about strengthening your teammates every day. . . Is it okay to develop your own fruits when you have time? The simplest thing is to synchronize books and get some functions like mobile phones