The Journey of the Heavens Since the Qin Dynasty

Nice writing, don't write it next time

After reading a few chapters, I want to say that the author really has the potential to be a screenwriter of a bloody eight o'clock drama. I will not do this bowl of bloody drama and withdraw it first.

This book is still suitable for beginners. Even old bookworms may not be able to accept it. It does not write about the protagonist as a character in the book and his historical background and status. Instead, he looks like a willful and ignorant pervert. I can't say that the book is not good, I can only say that the author is still a bit wrong. I read other book reviews and they are quite right. The most fatal thing is that they did not take into account the automatic things of the protagonist's royal status and the information that his status should have.

As soon as the protagonist arrived in South Korea, how many people did he tell about Qin's attack on South Korea?

Thief Cao, give away your daughter first, then take it back, awesome

I don't know why I'm no longer interested in stallions when reading historical texts. In ancient times, as long as you had power, women and money didn't matter. Since you are Ying Zheng's son, if you work hard to improve your knowledge, political vision, and force, your status in Ying Zheng's eyes will be higher. By then, what will you have? People in ancient times were not stupid and would not regard you as a saint just because you have advanced ideas and technologies. The high officials in the imperial court are all old foxes. It is quite easy to deal with you, an ordinary person from later generations. If you want to save the tragic ending of the woman in Qin Shi Mingyue and then stall, then you might as well write it with another identity.

Have you considered traveling through the thunderbolt to practice some skills first? Attack the immortal body of Tathagata from the sky

Don't add tags randomly, your IQ is online.

It's well written. I'd better read the plot next time, think about the characters, and use my brain more. It's not a bad thing. You are completely a novice within a novice within a novice. You just write whatever comes to your mind just for fun, and don't even care about the outline. Come on, practice more and write better.

Author, I just want to say one thing to you, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes between men and women, don't write them. It makes me so embarrassed.

It can be seen from the introduction that the author is definitely a novice.

After reading most of it, the idea is very good. Let me just tell you my humble opinion. First, the whole book looks too concise, like a polished outline. Two, South Korea. I have said several times that I will attack South Korea in the coming spring. There is a little something wrong here, but it is not a big problem. Third, to be honest, this "other and me" should be a poisonous point for many people (at least I personally think it is more poisonous). Hope for improvement Finally, I hope the author will write better and better and become popular all over the Internet Finally, the harem competition is the best

There is no golden finger in the world. How can you travel through the heavens without a golden finger?

Looking at it now, I feel that the main problem is that whether it is the main world or the sub-world, the plot is basically passed over without involvement. Looking down, I don't know what I saw.

It's so simple to write, I guess I'll be running away before I even get it in.

What a good sign!

Are you talking nonsense about the information about Qin's attack on South Korea?