Beast Taming: My Pets Are Just Here to Build Bonds

Bonds have not been reflected until now. They are mainly various skills for copying pets. So why are you writing bonds? The Golden Shovel system is for bonding different races. Does this have anything to do with bonds?

I ordered a chapter to complain about, and after looking at the table of contents, it was not a book from more than ten years ago. The opening chapter is full of poisonous points, and I can't copy following the trend. Was the author bullied every day when he was in school? How could he write the kind of plot where the main character tries to contract a beast and fails, and the people around him laugh at him. After three attempts, it is not a failure to cultivate immortality and awaken spiritual roots.

The protagonist is a child. Most readers are not. Don't you think it's awkward for adults to see your child's thinking? Why should I read your novel if it's not outstanding? The road is narrow. The author has forked the first 3 chapters for you.

I saw that the university was in a secret place, so I made a special trip to evaluate it. First of all, this book is really to my liking! ! ! I love it so much. Pet literature is a category that I love very much, but I rarely see anything that I like. In the past year, it's almost impossible to find any animal pet literature that I can read (don't tell me what "unscientific animal control" means, thank you!) I personally feel that most of the animal pet literature is problematic. The problem is: first, in many pet novels, the author cannot write the relationship between the pet and the protagonist well, and the author cannot correctly show the protagonist's behavior in the book to guide the pet to work hard, so the frequent interaction is a poisonous point, including the training of the pet. Secondly, pet novels generally need to set up an upgrade system and pet quality segmentation, but many authors have not bothered to build a suitable and reasonable system. They often directly apply the mainstream routines from the starting point, or write one at will. The result of such a setting is that the plot will lead you, leading to problems such as changing maps (things that are very precious in the early stage will have little value in the mid-term). Third, there is the issue of the depiction of pet beasts. The core of pet novels is undoubtedly pet beasts, but most of the descriptions of pet beasts are too facialistic. The above problems basically do not exist in this book😌😄🤭

From the current point of view, the bug is quite big. It is obviously a world where individuals bring pets to fight against monsters, and contracts will also bring physical bonuses to people. As a result, the way to teach the new generation to improve combat effectiveness in this world is just to cultivate pets. Don't people need to learn to fight? A monster appears and summons a pet beast, and then "Would you rather attack the taunting follower first?" 😅 You can't tell me that it's normal to start learning martial arts at the age of 16. In the novel, it starts in middle school. Already in middle school, the competition at the beginning was just Pokémon battles, where people used to trash talk each other. Even if you tell me that this world is so weird and you have to sign a contract with a pet animal before you can learn martial arts, then what does it mean that "most of the martial arts schools in the city are scams"😅. Anyway, I have caught up to the latest, and I just want to see how you behave.

Supporting characters need names, identities, and personalities Pet beasts need to be filled in according to the format, for example [Pet name]: Iron-eating beast [Pet attribute]: Earth, gold [Potential level]: Elite extraordinary [Pet talent]: Iron-eating [Racial skills]: None [Pet introduction]: A giant panda mutated by eating spiritual stones

The competition was also pretty good, but the interval between high school and college competitions was too short, which made me feel a little tired. And the pace is a bit fast. I hope there is more emotional bond between the beast master and the pet beast. Also, the advantage of the male protagonist, that is, his own strength, is actually very little expressed. I hope it can be described more, otherwise it will still be indistinguishable from other beast-control novels. Finally, you are really lacking in emotional aspects. No matter what heroine you write, everyone will accept it. I can't feel Fang Qing's charm. Besides being beautiful, I'm speechless. Can it be a little charming? Anyway, the author's aesthetic is indeed quite superficial.

Unless you are rich and handsome, don't imagine that a beautiful, talented and kind-hearted girl will come over to comfort you. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Watching one will poison you.

Before you know it, you have become the master of the hall, so cheers to the author!

This should not be a highlight of the speech