The Magician from the Battle of Two Cities

It's faster than putting a chicken pecking at the keyboard

I hope that when the protagonist lifts his restrictions, the only thing that can make people let go of family ties is family ties. 80% Of the time, something happened to Bao Bao, and the protagonist is faced with the scale of Bao Bao, who is going home to his parents and friends on one side, and his own daughter on the other. The pain and confusion in his heart, as well as the relief after making a choice (there is nothing more devastating than having a daughter)

The writing is quite good, but the shortcoming is that it is not readable enough.

The problem is that the protagonist's presence is too weak. It's not like a fan novel. This setting of the protagonist is a mistake. Maybe it can be better to use this setting to break it, but it is a pity that there has been no attempt to break it. It is very slow to warm up, and it may not even be popular.

There is something wrong with the setting of Camille. Camille must be at least a hundred years old. It is because of the Hex Crystal that she has not aged. In the game, she has always treated the heroes of Piltover and Zaun as elders. Here, she is even the same age as the policewoman. Besides, Camille's transformation was not completed by Victor, right?

A magician is always just a magician, throwing fireballs and unleashing fire storms. It is never equal to a mage, let alone an arcanist, and it has nothing to do with a wizard.

Although I don't know where you will write it, after the protagonist loses the coordinates to go home, the emotions accumulated over the years must find a place to vent. This is also a climax of the book. If it is not written well, the book will be over! Please don't go back to the original plot like some fans do.

I think those who say that the protagonist does nothing and keeps following the original plot should give it a rest. What's the point of fairy tales where everyone is happy? Moreover, the protagonist is not determined to be a bystander, nor does he adopt Jinx, but he does not completely intervene in the plot because he does not want to give up the way home. At least this way he is more like a person, rather than a tool that only pretends to be cool. As a God's perspective, we must also understand that the protagonist will never go back, so please be more patient.

The writing and plot are both good, but the character of the protagonist makes people feel uncomfortable and frustrated. I don't know if there will be changes in the future.

The protagonist who is tied up by a dog leash named Coordinates

For the protagonist, the entire continent is a foreign land, and he just wants to go home and accumulate 15 years of mana. As long as he takes action, he can change the situation in the Twin Cities, but too much interference will cause him to lose contact with his hometown. Maybe he will really intervene in the later development, but everything has a process, and you can't let him give up his hometown at the beginning. (ps: It is also possible that the author is worried that his too much interference will lead to changes in the plot, and whether he has the ability to control it is just a personal guess.)

It's really good to watch, but a lot of the foreshadowing is because there is too little plot now and I feel very frustrated...

When to use the Forbidden Spell on the Immortal Fortress (Dog Head)

It's good. The author probably thought about it seriously. First of all, the identity of the mage in the different world should be well designed. First of all, the mage means that the protagonist will not be lacking in power, and the different world means that the protagonist will not know the plot. This eliminates many problems. Secondly, the estimate of the home coordinate is also designed by the author. On the one hand, it can restrain the protagonist from being too strong at the beginning, and on the other hand, it will give a great point of relief when this restriction is lifted later. But there is also a small problem. There are too few scenes of the protagonist, which leads to too few exciting points. This is also the complaint of most people.

I'm a little confused, how did the protagonist get here?

I pushed two copies of The Master of Two Cities at the same time. This wave is called involution.

The author! Is there a book club group?

Seriously. Previous chapters. It's okay if you don't want to take action because of the coordinates of your hometown. People die in front of themselves. Don't take action even if you are angry. Is this the so-called chief magician? Let someone provoke you like this? There is no prestige at all. It was frustrating to watch.

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Say something to increase the population flow

Oh my god, you still have to die for a few more chapters.

Will Janna come out if the two cities start a war?

You are too procrastinating. Jinx has died three times, and the protagonist has not yet appeared. And Ike's skills are too buggy. It's just a bad vegetable.

The protagonist is coming online. This is a great point! No matter how depressed and restrained you are in the early stage, the scene that explodes in the later stage must be impactful.

I want to ask the author, can you reply to me? Will Jinx be paired with Ike? The following plot (in the outline)

It feels like the protagonist is another version of Hilko

The protagonist can also use time magic! ? Time magic should be standard equipment for great magicians!

By the way, what is the current strength level of the protagonist? Demigod? Still like Ryze and Syndra.