Military Industrial Overlord

The favorite mistakes novice authors make (in no particular order): ①The protagonist needs growth experience. ——However, the protagonist of the online novel does not need to grow up and has the same temperament from beginning to end. You see great masters writing about growth and you also write about growth. Do you have the writing skills? If you don't, you deserve to be scolded for torturing the master, suppressing the combat power, and delaying the plot. ② Ordinary people's thinking needs to change in order to adapt to the new environment. ——As I said before, describing the gradual changes in a person's thoughts or cognition, especially the protagonist's, is something that a master can show off his skills to. What's the meaning? It's like a peacock spreading its tail. If it's opened properly, it's what it should be. If it's not opened properly, your butt will be exposed. If you don't have this power and are still a novice, then I suggest you don't think about this issue and just let the protagonist seamlessly connect. It's not like there aren't such people in reality. Why are there so many of them? ③ Over-description of the world view, and non-protagonist pages are too long or continuous. ——Stacking information and background settings is a very common problem for newcomers. They are always worried that readers will not understand the world they build. However, for paying readers, they have seen between 1,000 and 800 similar settings. They don't care at all or are interested in your slightly changed but not much worldview, unless you are really the biggest, and you have created a completely new genre of online writing. So put down the background settings of the several folders in your hands, they are for you to see, not for the readers. The other is to simply strip off the protagonist and write a continuous plot without a protagonist for the so-called "multi-angle description" and create side descriptions. I can only comment on this: I ordered a plate of spicy chicken, but after searching for a long time, I found there was no chicken. What do you think? ——It is generally not the protagonist who needs to grow, but the author.

Give it a try before limiting it to a free version. This book is like an anti-Japanese drama, with no regard for rationality. A few hours of hand-made missiles, a few days of building a new tank that has never been seen before, the brainless cool article is too open. You are welcome to come here to store your brain. You may be able to read it without any brain.

😅😅😅 A tank takes three days, a helicopter takes three days, from design to production and assembly... Even if you take more time to write, you may not be able to draw the drawings in three days.

I read it earlier, skipped through a few chapters later, and saw the complaints in the comments. I don't think the writing is that bad, but the author must have nothing to do with engineering, and he didn't check the information more, which led to some common sense mistakes. Take blueprints for example. It's not like in old spy war dramas where you can secretly take a few blueprints with a tiny camera. Instead, you have to use several terabytes of hard drive to copy them away like in new dramas. Therefore, we often see some cents and public-known satirical copycats, but we don't know that copycats are also high-tech, let alone that they can be surpassed in the future.

I read it, and I jumped at the end. Except for the J-8 aircraft, which has cultivated a design team, there is no mention of a design team. The industry is growing, and the products will not be updated in the future? ? , They don't even cultivate talents, but rely solely on protagonist design? Like cars, planes, tank engines,

1. The protagonist didn't turn on the Exocet missile, so how could he imitate 90% of its performance? How to obtain the internal structure inside. When developing nuclear submarines, most of the internal structures of Chinese submarines were based on an American toy submarine model. How the protagonist comes out of nowhere. 2. The protagonist didn't practice the fitter skills very much, but how did he make a smooth operation and copy the missile. The book describes that the protagonist is very proficient in operations and has a high technical level. However, the protagonist is firstly young and secondly, he has practiced less. So why is the protagonist so skilled? I understand that the author has arranged a system for the protagonist, but it is difficult to explain logically.

Brother, you should brush up on this logic. After reading a few chapters, I feel that you are too awesome to create a system. Hands-on ability cannot be solved by just pouring some memory into it. How dare you think like this after a while?

I don't understand why the protagonist wants to lead a team to northern Myanmar? What if something goes wrong?

Author, ah, military-industrial unit, keep it secret. I've read Chapter 16 and you're going to show me this? Don't you dispatch the security department immediately? If there is no security department, you should at least call the police! Even if your old factory manager doesn't expect this protagonist, you should know it! Even if the subordinate unit is not working confidentially, it still needs to be reported to the police as soon as possible! You wrote a question and asked it immediately. Anyway, I am a little speechless. If you can arrange these things more reasonably, it won't be a big problem for your novel to become a high-quality novel.

The main reason is that Jian Shao doesn't understand the function of your golden finger. In the early stage, I thought it was just for moving. Just make the weapon quickly, just rub it with your hands. I collapsed until I saw the integration of all the parts of the F22's airframe and the MiG-31's engine, avionics and radar. Your golden finger still has the function of fusion and optimization. Why are you selling it outside? Then just create it in science fiction, fuse it and optimize it, and then continue to build it, fuse it, and optimize it. In less than 3 years, you can colonize the solar system.

I seriously doubt that the author is a vest from Hulucun Village

As for the protagonist's behavior, he will have to squat for a lifetime without eating peanuts, but he can still engage in military industry. I don't know how the author wrote it, well, it can only be written.

Showing the protagonist's special powers to the country is better than anything else, rather than hiding them and causing a lot of logical flaws

Without a chip, are the more than 30 flight postures controlled by thoughts?

When I see a plug-in, I don't want to read it. It's against the rules to have a golden finger plug-in system or something like that in an industrial article.

Want to imitate the oriental aunt who enters the palace to serve the ladies? Have you practiced the Sunflower Book? The sun rises in the east, I am the only one who is undefeated!

548 Suddenly disappeared, hey hey hey! River crabs are rampant!

The book that will be signed tomorrow is the opening routine of Feihong Fairy and Xu Meiren.

Update more and use 50 more power

I don't know if I missed it or if it's the author's problem. The F14 is a carrier-based aircraft. Why not copy the technical information?

Readers, please pay attention to your health and wear a mask in public places. This time the infection is very strong and it is really not easy to get through it, because the infection is not given intravenously and you have to take medicine for a week.

I saw my old friend again, the boss of 8038, and gave me a reward of 500 starting coins. Thank you, I feel motivated again. I will update another 2,000 words tonight, and I will not keep the manuscript. I will post thousands of posts tomorrow and every day, and I guess I can update it for a few days no matter what.

I sat in front of the computer today and wrote more than a thousand words in two hours. I almost coughed my lungs out. I'd better stop here and write again tomorrow.

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