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It is unlikely that it will become popular, but if it has anything to do with colleges and universities, even if there is only one picture, it will be cool, and if you write some clumsy emotional drama, it will be even more cool. This is a summary of the many alliance books I have read. If you can, reopen it!
This is not the ancient LOL. We don't even watch high school games or city competitions. At least I started with lspl.
The last e-sports novel that the parents hid from the protagonist has already gone viral.
Isn't this a direct invincible flow? LPSL has been around for a few years, and I will describe it in Spring and Autumn style. LP L started with a direct explosion.
Here are a few suggestions: 1. Either make up fiction, or write based on reality. Originally, the audience for e-sports novels is small, why not take advantage of the popularity of players and teams? I chose this book because edg won the championship. I wanted to find an e-sports novel by edg. There were so many other authors writing it, so it was no big deal. 2. You started playing in the college league. It's too retro. If the protagonist wasn't as handsome as me, I would have given up on it. I also skipped the previous plot. I didn't start playing in lpl now and wouldn't even watch it. 3. It's up to you to decide how to portray the protagonist's parents. If you can't write this kind of plot and characters well, you should be persuaded to quit. 4. Regarding the female protagonist, it is better to write one, but it is best to be original. In reality, female anchors or female hosts are difficult to agree on.
These parents are a bit toxic, and the abbreviation of the team name is not enough, but they have to spell it out in full.
. . . Forget about the outline, I read twenty chapters. I don't know which season this is. I feel like it should be quite early, s4, s5 or something like that.
After pushing it several times, I took a look. Overall, it's too bland, nothing exciting and not too poisonous. The description of the female character in the early stage is a bit awkward, and the parents' concealment of their net worth is a bit shocking. I feel like I'm dreaming back 10 years, and it's a bit tasteless, and it's a pity to abandon it.
Here's a suggestion: Don't always use hero names when describing matches.
Say a few words
1 Regarding the content of this book, there are only about eight chapters of the plot of the school team, which also includes the preparation for the recruitment of new players into the new team, and then directly enters the professional team to play in the game, mainly to shape the character. 2. The comment section keeps mentioning the school team that slows down the pace. This is a fact, but always mentioning this really affects the sense of reading. I didn't delete the comment because the opinion was very pertinent and everyone has the right to speak. As long as I don't curse people, I will keep it. (It's good, but you can't do it again next time. After all, the author has already seen it.) 3 In addition, the author's writing power is limited, so he can point out any shortcomings and adopt them if they are reasonable. 4 Suites of buildings. Enter your name, character, and identity, and you will have a chance to get storyline additions. Finally, I will continue to work hard. There is nothing to say but empty words. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง.
Isn't this the big watermelon template? But that one is the mid laner
Chapter 41 has the classic stop-and-start commentary and barrage, but other than this poisonous point, nothing else can be seen for the time being. The summary is mediocre, tasteless to eat, and a pity to discard.
I read a novel you wrote, and I still have to guess the number in chapter 40 😰😰
🐂🍺, This book is bound to be popular, and the post will prove it! 🤓
The biggest problem is that it's as light as water and doesn't feel good.
I feel like I've read it somewhere but I haven't. Maybe I've read too many novels about this alliance.
If the start of the game is okay, the rest of the game will be uncomfortable for half a day.
It's a little bit toxic for the parents to hide their identities, but it's also a bit of a laugh.
I can't read this book. It's all gibberish. Too much impact on reading experience
When I saw the pasture, I thought it was a toilet, but I didn't expect it to be a wild area.
If the barrage and interview are not interesting, it is best not to write them. They are just too few words anyway, so it is better to transfer the scenes to the commentators and let them praise the protagonist more.
I looked at it and said that, it's a bit not to my liking, but there's nothing wrong with it. The writing is okay, but the team names are a bit uncomfortable to read. In fact, it's okay to just use real ones. Just make the city names more obscure.
Is there a female protagonist? Single or harem
After reading more than twenty chapters, there is no reason to continue reading.
The timeline is too confusing to watch
What's going on? One hundred versus more chapters have gone through two finals. Your speed is a bit exaggerated, right?