Heavens: the Magical World Begins with the Lord of the Rings

Third Age Map of Middle-earth

Introducing branches of mental power: molecular reorganization, energy and material conversion, creation out of thin air, human body spiritual cosmic giant attractor (can imitate the cosmic giant attractor to involve or control the gravity of everything within tens of millions of light years around to travel to a super giant high-density spherical planet), mental black hole (imitate the cosmic giant attractor) Black hole), mental form (similar to Naruto's Susanoo and Saiyou's Hoten Shoji, who can travel outside the body to a controllable external incarnation as big as the mind and become huge with the injection of mental power. There is no upper limit but requires mental power as the upper limit), species degeneration (forcibly interfering with target cells with mental power or Genes cause the target to degenerate or die due to gene collapse), species evolution (forcibly interfering with the perfect integration of target genes and external genes and preserving the survival of the target's spiritual consciousness), high-frequency vibration (similar to One Piece Whitebeard's shock fruit that can shatter the void or space), mental storm (imitation of natural storms, Tornadoes, etc., Can travel anywhere. The effect of tornadoes is similar to that of electric drills underground. In oil fields, it is fire tornadoes. In volcanoes, it is magma tornadoes. In oceans, it is waterspouts. In outer space, it is gamma ray bursts. The development limit is increased based on imagination.) {This comment is all virtual, please do not believe it. There is no supernatural power in this world, believe in science. }

The author's writing is good, and it is non-toxic and can be used as food. But if you don't like multiple female protagonists according to the introduction, please read it carefully.

Everything was fine before, but as soon as he entered the expedition team, Pig's Foot turned into a nanny. He directly took Gandalf's position and did more things than Gandalf. Why would the protagonist have to take care of children when he is so powerful? You know, this is not a risk at all.

What's the point of going into the plot if it's not to change all the tragedies?

If you emphasize love, write a single female protagonist, otherwise it will change the taste. Who of the people who love each other in Middle-earth will be in the harem, otherwise it will be a betrayal of love.

The wizards in Middle-earth are all lower gods, not humans.

I just want to know when Game of Thrones will end, and I'll watch it when it's over.

It's funny. Did someone else write it? I am in the water every day. You are so awesome that you can write a thousand chapters in Game of Thrones. A person with extraordinary power is dragging his feet and doesn't know what he is doing. You can also swindle this kind of money.

Arwen

I read the plot from the time I arrived in King's Landing to the present. It's too long-winded. The few things that can be resolved have been delayed for so long. How did the former prime minister die? The pain of death has nothing to do with the protagonist's future plans. What you want to write now is how the stone blocking the road died. It's not just procrastinating that it's coming out, but it's coming out one after another. You don't want to read it anymore, you know? I hope you have a good idea

As long as I keep it, I don't want to click on it...

Let's not talk about water, suddenly it's a eunuch

I think the only thing that can be called a poisonous point at the moment is the plot of the fake marriage. After all, this is the world of Thrones. It is okay to play tricks, but it is better not to do this kind of destructive behavior. I have created so many feelings for Mu Xing in the past. It is really unacceptable to suddenly come up with something like this. Even if it is fake, it is a thorn in the throat, which makes people feel like they are stuck in the throat.

A eunuch? Brother, I ordered it myself, and I don't use it to be so tricky.

How should I put it? Let's say his telekinesis is fixed to death. He can still practice subtle manipulation if he doesn't have it. Let's say he doesn't have it and can't practice to improve his mental power. This setting is so drunk. Is there such a suppression? 🤔

The progress is really slow, much worse than The Lord of the Rings.

At the beginning, telekinesis cannot defend against the hammer. . . . In the final battle of the original book, a truck was picked up, and people were pushed into various buildings. Later, there was an explosion and they didn't pay attention to defense, so they were attacked and killed by javelins. . . . . Your telekinesis is probably one percent of the original version. . . . In the original work, the bus was thrown hundreds of meters and still resisted the bus. . . . And it only took less than half a year to grow to this level.

If you want to make the protagonist very weak, then why do you give him telekinesis? Telekinesis is a very powerful ability. As long as you have some brains, you can use telekinesis to easily kill people invisible. This killing ability is not affected by the size and strength of the prey! If you dare to write about telekinesis as rubbish, don't blame readers for criticizing you!

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