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Is this book not going to be written? I know of an author who has written more than two million words. There are only a few people in the comment area who are still persisting. Isn't it popular now? There is also the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms, which was not going to die at that time. Now you are also a god in one book. You only have 400,000 words. More than 30,000 fans, more than 20,000 subscriptions, and more than 1,000 comments. Are you saying that you are a loser? Then you should stop writing books. I can only say that this bowl of rice is not suitable for you. I have read many potential authors. All the books after this book are eunuchs.

Your update speed is too slow, right? It's okay if there are no new updates on the shelves. If your update speed is so slow in the future, you won't be just playing for fun like me, right?

Trial reading, I have finished the first volume. To be honest, the progress is very fast. It seems that the competition is the main line, but the writing is very simple, which makes me feel very anxious to change the map. The characters of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are also flat. The male protagonist seems to have no special qualities from a scumbag to a genius (that's how this character can appear in front of me). The same goes for the female protagonist. She was a top student at first and was more arrogant. Later, the AI entered the cold-faced program. I think there are very few emotional scenes between them, but once When it appeared, I felt like it was a hard cue, which was a bit stiff (maybe because I was watching so fast that I almost missed the details) I don't like or even hate the setting of the heroine. No one would welcome sharing their body with others The creation of background characters is also a bit hollow. The idea is actually pretty good

Coming from Diandianquan, if you are interested in science fiction, come and check it out. The following opinions are all my personal opinions. If they are offensive or make you feel uncomfortable, I can delete them. First of all, the sci-fi part is a bit vague. Although I believe that the author will improve the settings later, at least for now, I feel that it is no different from reading a system article. It can be seen from the introduction that the author has certain ideas, and I hope it will not be empty in the end. Secondly, in terms of character setting, except for the protagonist who has some characteristics, other characters are very empty. I can't see their flesh-and-blood side, I can only see a one-sided formulaic character. Qu Yanqiu (I'm not sure whether she will be the heroine, or an AI to promote the plot, of course the AI ​​can also be the heroine, it doesn't matter) the early description did not make me think she is a vivid person at all, a tsundere female academic? The author should have written according to this setting, but it was still too blunt, so that after she was "possessed", I couldn't sympathize with the male protagonist at all. Although the head teacher and mother are a little one-sided, they are still acceptable. After all, they are to highlight the male protagonist. The character of the male protagonist also feels a bit vague. I know that the author wants to make him appear more ordinary and ordinary, but even ordinary people will have their own characteristics, let alone the people in the novel. The last thing is writing. Internet articles have always had little requirement for writing style, pursuing more ups and downs in the plot, but the writing style must at least make people comfortable to read. The author's writing style is a bit childish and colloquial. He could pay more attention to detail description and environmental description (it feels like a narrative comment), so that readers can be more immersed in the situation. For example, in Chapter 8, "bala bala said for a long time" (something similar to the meaning) is used. When you are chatting with others, it is simple and easy to understand, and there is no problem at all. But writing it down and using it in a more written language is a bit inappropriate and looks awkward. After all, there is a big difference between written language and spoken language (I won't go into details here). There is another thing that should be a small loophole, that is, in Chapter 13, it is said that Chen Quan's second grade is only "1.3 Meters tall"... Let's not talk about other things. It would be troublesome to unify the numbers and words before and after. It is very uncomfortable to read. And no matter how you say the second grade of junior high school, it is impossible to be only 1.3 Meters. It is more reasonable to be about 1.6 Meters and 1.7 Meters (1.3 Meters is about the height of the second grade of elementary school) Okay, I have almost finished what I should say. I wish the author will write better and better! Come on!

Let me comment. I was totally convinced about the last book. Science fiction is the greatest romance. There are not many good ones. Swallowing the Stars is great! But it's just fantasy disguised as science fiction. This book can be said to be very good. I think there are two big poisonous points in this book. I suggest that it be changed. This is not to say that it is not science fiction, but it is unpleasant and not conducive to accommodating more readers. First: Set the plot of the song being wiped out. This is the original sin. What is the original sin? You killed someone! No matter what brilliant achievements are made in the future, no matter how cute the artificial intelligence is written in the future, how much like the heroine, but in one sentence, you killed someone. And he is an innocent child! The little boy's mind is not yet sound now. How will the protagonist feel when he grows up and matures in his outlook on life? While raising his childhood sweetheart, he was a murderer. It is difficult for people with simple moral concepts to accept it, and it is particularly disturbing every time I think about it. Second: Set the plug-in background, experiment, and container. The container sounds like it's meant to hold something. From what I've seen so far, it's meant to hold something. It sounds like it's dark, conspiratorial, and perverted. So far, a lot of experimental materials have been destroyed, people. To sum up, I think this is a very failed beginning. Science fiction has the mission of popularizing science, and at the same time attracting more people to accept, identify and invest in science. This is a high hat, but let's be realistic. Looking at such a conspiracy, perversion, and the origin of original sin, I think it will dissuade many readers. And this is also deliberately awkward, and it is not troublesome to change the settings. For example, one set of hardware has two systems, and the artificial intelligence is activated only when meeting the protagonist. The dark experiment only explains the background of the plug-in. It is the same as another explanation. If you must use it, you don't need to say it at the beginning. You will explain everything when it is really involved.

Those without favorites are still continuing Those without recommendations are still continuing Those without clicks are still continuing Those who have not signed a contract are still continuing Or, the current situation is not what you want But you are definitely not the worst one There are too many disappointments and you are still persisting Think about why you wrote in the first place? Maybe there is a reason to persist

The book is good. This is Qu Yanqiu's situation. Is it better to change the situation to a situation where the soul is temporarily put on hold? If the protagonist fails and the protagonist becomes stupid, Qu Yanqiu's soul returns but loses his memory during this period. Of course, it's mainly based on the author's opinion, I'm just mentioning it a little bit. Although the author added that her soul is fine, the fact that she is in trouble is written in the novel, which is the point at which she may be persuaded to quit.

Name everyone's favorite science fiction movie. My favorite is "Interstellar." I think interstellar voyages should be lonely and long like in movies. Unlike the current Internet science fiction novels, two civilizations can easily engage in an interstellar war, and civilizations can also do business and run logistics between them. It would be unreasonable to know how big the universe is and how far apart each galaxy is. I think that current Internet science fiction novels describe the exchanges between civilizations in the universe, and apply them to the communication methods between countries on earth. I think it's a way of thinking that's not outside of the earth. Due to factors such as distance and time between galaxies in the universe, communication between civilizations will not be our conventional communication method between countries. It should be another set of communication methods suitable for civilizations in the universe.

With just this few words, it's still advertised everywhere. Wouldn't it be nice to write more words if you have time?