Obtain the Trap System at the Beginning and Unify the Three Kingdoms

At first I thought it was Goldman Sachs who was killed, and he summoned 700 magic soldiers to kill everyone and escaped...

Prime ministers generally don't like people who are greedy for life and afraid of death.

Poisonous Milk stands at the top of the Three Kingdoms. Starting from the Three Kingdoms is not easy to write.

I was attracted by the setting of the trap system. I often get off topic when I read the author's writing. I am a little anxious. Let me share my opinion with the author. It may not be entirely correct. It is for reference only. First of all, it must be affirmed that the system settings have great potential and the author's writing style is not bad. However, the author does not distinguish between priorities and focuses too much on the supporting characters too early. It is recommended that the author writes around the protagonist and the system, and the results should be better.

After reading a few chapters, I will tell you about my reading experience. If you don't like it, please don't comment. You are welcome to discuss it. First of all, it is positioned as a historical Three Kingdoms novel, a systematic and time-traveling novel with the protagonist. The history of the Three Kingdoms has a large audience, and what everyone sees is generally the sparks of the collision of the Three Kingdoms period with the mighty force and wisdom of the heroes. Of course, there are also those who go off the beaten path and write about the humanistic environment of the Three Kingdoms period in detail. This book should be the former, but it is very childish and leaves people speechless. The system is generally cool. If the suppression system is also for refinement. But this book is very rough and just kills people. There is no description of the changes before, during and after the upgrade. Can't read. The protagonist is a time traveler fused with Gao Shun's memory, and is considered a fusion protagonist. But this protagonist is very confusing. Sometimes he is calm, sometimes emotional, sometimes wise, sometimes righteous, sometimes timid and afraid of death, and sometimes stupid to death. It can be said that the personality is unpredictable. Like a psycho. The author should be a female. Of course, as a newcomer writing a book, there will definitely be a lot of problems at the beginning. Generally, if the author is careful, his writing skills will be greatly improved after a million words. So you can look forward to the next million words in this book. It may also be a late bloomer like Chixin Tianxian.

The most admirable thing about Gao Shun is his integrity, but the author turned him into a villain who is greedy for life and afraid of death.

My favorite part of the Three Kingdoms is Gao Shun and the trapped camp. I hope I can give the trapped camp a chance to expand and upgrade. Come on, author, I support you.

I want to ask if I want to be a horse boy or do my own work.

First of all, I like this subject very much. The entry point is very good and the details are handled well. What I can see is that although there is a system, the effect of the system is not too much. It just improves the tacit understanding. Personally, I don't like the kind of direct delivery of supplies. I can't stand it. After all, they are sending supplies directly. Can't you just buy a lot of rifles and pistols to sweep away, and then squeeze out little by little, as if you are trying harder. Here, I suggest the author, like the weapons used by the protagonist, can be available, but it is best not to have them. I guess the author also found that not many people read it, and they usually save it for a while before reading it. Why? Because I usually come in after seeing the name of your book. Reading is for fun, and the writing style is refreshing. The refreshing point of historical writing is that modern people with information explosion come to ancient times and have a kind of ideological superiority. And the theme of your novel is military training and hegemony, which involves tactics, which is the summary of previous wars by later generations, such as guerrilla warfare. I also recommend the author to read the saint's combat policies and quote them into the trapped camp There is also the title of each chapter, which should not be so dry. An old bookworm will know what it is about as soon as he reads the title. The author is a newcomer, so there is no such thing. There is a reader base, and to be honest, the writing style is mediocre (at least that's what I've caught up with so far). This also leads to the fact that even if someone has collected it and sees the updated title, they have no desire to click on it The author's biggest advantage is the subject of being trapped in the camp, so the author should think about how to use this advantage through the description of combat and daily life.

The number of enemies is eight hundred, not seven hundred. The number one general in front of Lu Bu is Zhang Liao, not Gao Shun.

I don't understand why there are so many people praising Gao Shun. After all, his playing time is limited and he can't just rely on one "trap camp". Gao Shun can't achieve many results.

Finally signed the contract😰😰

It's too little, I finished it in a while, I can only feed it to death, waiting for a wave of fat haha

This book of Three Kingdoms is different from what I thought. It feels a bit like reading Nirvana in Fire 😰

Growing a little slow. . Hanging is not good enough.

The pacing was too slow, and the battle against the bandits took a long time. There were too many inconsequential details, and the plot couldn't advance. I didn't want to watch anymore.

The pace is a bit slow, and the protagonist feels so frustrated.

I regret it😭

Did Cao Cao really not persuade Gao Shun to surrender?

Soldiers, have some backbone! ! ! Chu Yunfei was furious😡😡😡

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Modern people wear the Romance of the Three Kingdoms Gao Shun to accept the inheritance, and then wear it in the late Ming Dynasty, it is almost the same, and now he is a proper anti-bone boy

I took a look at it, it's pretty good

Why doesn't the author update? {"NickName":"Ran Zi","UserId":337522864}

I just wanted to do a crotch-drilling scene, so I gave up.