Jiu Shu World Gou Taoist

Protagonist

It's not cool, the author can't control it... The protagonist casually reveals an elixir, and his literary talent rises to level 4. The protagonist himself is still on the first floor... He took a lot of pills and gained experience for several days before reaching the fourth floor. You must know that only one Wencai can be upgraded to level 3 in one day. The second one is on the 4th floor. How comfortable is it to write like this?

A Taoist Puppy in Every Mouth. What do you think about the real puppy?

When he saw the dragon coming out, he knew that the book had collapsed and the dragon had come out. How could he still play with Uncle Jiu? It means that all the plots foreshadowed before are invalidated.

Although many people just lie down and behave like dogs, they don't really like to become dogs and be called dogs. . . This protagonist's name will naturally lose some readers.

Seeing that people are being accepted casually and the techniques are abandoned,

No matter how well-written the name of the protagonist is, I'm not interested in reading it.

To be honest, it is very average. This kind of book that relies on experience points to improve is very immersive. The golden finger can break down elixirs and magic weapons, and the protagonist does not need to fight monsters. It is so refreshing that I feel a little tired after reading too much.

There is a saying that if you love writing a book, you should come up with it yourself. After reading three chapters, I felt like it was boring and boring. It was popular for a while but lacked stamina.

Goubuli, is he the father of the protagonist? ? ?

You are so fast

If there is less pornographic plots, the writing will not be watchable if it is not involved? If you don't have enough control over the plot, then you can learn from it? If you can't tell the story, then change the classic case? If you are immature, you don't know how to copy the protagonist's mental journey written by a master? How naive does it look... There are too many plots, various conflicts of interests between ghosts and elixirs, disputes between sects' interests, disputes between portals, conflicts between Buddha, Demon, etc., And all kinds of calculations. There are so many sects abroad! Are you having sex with Uncle Jiu and a sheep? You don't have the desire to look at your mood in the main plot! If you have time, learn more about the religions of various countries. If you write like this, a huge world of cultivation will be formed, with various branch lines entangled with the main line, various strategies, and various forces. As long as you have a good idea, you can write a series of novels

Uncle Jiu didn't know anything about his character, so he went to do his homework. According to the settings, Uncle Jiu would arrest the most evil culprits, convert them to extremes, and then send them to the underworld.

Is there any book friend who can get us some fan art, such as Wolf Run, Uncle Nine, Sky Axe, or the protagonist.

After reading less than 1,000 words, I saw a typo and a lack of smooth tone. ,. The author should be more serious. The beginning should be that it is already unknown, it is impossible to know the meaning, and then it goes on to write about Lu Dongbin, probably because the story is widely circulated, so what? Instead of the story being widely circulated, so what, if you do, the protagonist becomes the story, but you want to say the protagonist. . . .

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Only two chapters on the shelves? What's the point of listing it?

Throw two first

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