I Play Alt in Sword Art Online

Please ask the book friend who deleted the book to leave something poisonous to you. I want to understand better.

Let's put a female protagonist first

Looking back, I have been busy recently, with a lot of pressure and emotional backlog, and it is also because these chapters are so poorly written that they will inadvertently spread negative energy in the author's words. Sorry, sorry to everyone. I will not do it again in the future, and I also thought about it, what am I being hypocritical about here, what kind of sympathy am I trying to gain, what I say is good is that I am miserable, but what is not good is that it is disgusting to the readers who are still supporting me, and it affects my mood, and it also affects everyone's mood for reading. This matter will not happen again in the future. If it happens again, you can just scold me and delete the book. I say sorry again! These chapters are indeed terrible, I will enter the main story as soon as possible.

Single female protagonist, I just want to scream. There is no need to call it a single female protagonist with two female protagonists. If you die, you won't be worthy of being the female protagonist. There are more female protagonists after death. There are also many female protagonists in the system. What's more, the male protagonist also has feelings for Reina. I have given Reina a female supporting role. I am writing a single female protagonist in the introduction. I am also speechless.

The whole book highlights a deliberate intention. What you want to shape or express is just forced to describe it. What you want to express is presented very mechanically, and the transition is too abrupt. The memory section is too lengthy, which makes the whole structure a little top-heavy. In terms of writing, no emotion can be seen, the narrative is bland, and the atmosphere is not enough. Finally, don't be a "single heroine", let's have a harem. Anyway, that's not the selling point. There are so many female characters, except for the heroine, who are all more or less ambiguous, so we might as well go straight to the harem. I can only say that the storyline is okay. Unfortunately, firstly, the expressions and links are not smooth enough, and secondly, the text lacks power.

1. I don't understand the role of Nan Zhi 2. The progress of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too vague 3. The world view is not explained clearly. It can be understood that a person who is used to playing Honor of Kings suddenly goes to play League of Legends and does not know the world view. 4. The content of Ling Nai is too vague. I don't really want to read the book, and I don't have the expectation to understand it. I feel like I see this person now, but I don't want to read it next. I might as well fight monsters and upgrade. 5. Since it is the national uniform, it is recommended not to be too biased towards Nikki, otherwise the contrast will be too great, just like the Japanese junior high school wearing the national uniform. 6. The change in the male protagonist's character is well written, but it is a bit too literary and youthful. 7. The blood was not written, and the battle content was poorly written. I think the best battle scene was the one where Lin Xiu was killed (maybe it was too cool, after all, Lin Xiu was too annoying, which is okay.) 8. The human setting changed the content of the plot, and it was too much. Summary: It is said to be an original version of the national server, but the core is still Nisgaru's sword, but the protagonist is missing. The names and characters are all Japanese, so I don't understand what's different about the Chinese version. I think the good part is that it should be fairly smooth, and you can be open-minded.

A new cover has been changed, you should be able to see it later The character is Rena who will appear in the second volume

I got 2,000 coins from my investment, I'll give you 500 as a reward 😚

Jian Qiubai is just the trumpet of a certain loner. As for who it is, there is no comment.

Please join the book club group, the group number is 663278477 (you can also apply directly in the introduction). You may need to crowdfund to write a book in the future, so it's good for everyone to communicate.

You thought it was a new chapter, but you came to watch the game?

The male protagonist is a little younger, I will change it later

I'm not going to persuade you to quit based on your introduction. It has an original heroine, an original plot, and it doesn't have much to do with the main plot. Then I'll just watch a fic.

Hanging the skin of the sword, if you don't write about the sword, you can create your own book and enjoy the heat of the sword.

Well written, good luck to the author.

I haven't read it yet, but it's in the author's setting. Is there something similar to the mind skill? I feel that Kirito's counterattack part is very similar to Accelerator World's mental skill, and I remember that there is a counterattack in the comics, that is, Accelerator World and Sword Art Online have a linkage. I feel that this ability can be added, and the impact will not be too big.

Give me quick girl clothes, quick, quick, quick! ! ! ! ! !

I'm looking for pictures of the political commissar. It's really hard to find a boy with squinting eyes that suits his temperament. If you have pictures that match his temperament, I hope you can provide them. Thank you very much.

The introduction reminds me of the past... Ran Ran

Author, it will be more difficult to sign a contract after it is unfinished, because you will be recommended for signing the contract. I won't say more later, I will figure it out by myself.

Well written, don't pay attention to the trolls

Is the cover artist authorized? ?

It's not cool. There's been no update for four days.