Age of Discovery: I Have a Ghost Ship

Personally, I don't think it has any poisonous points and it's a relatively smooth read. However, the protagonist is too indifferent. He has an attitude that even if most people in the world die, as long as it doesn't affect the lives of me, my sister, and my friends, it's not likable. He doesn't ask for active help, and just passively does something nice when he encounters something. As for other people who think that there is a problem with the emotional line and that the younger sister is not lovable, I personally don't think it is a big problem. It's just that the younger sister's too strong demand for her brother to marry is a bit abnormal, and the character is a bit willful and confusing (it can be promoted, but if it is arranged, it will make people disgusted). Relatively speaking, this is a cool article that worries about the protagonist progressing too fast.

I don't understand why some people have such a bad habit of talking to themselves... After reading fifty chapters, the protagonist always talks to himself whenever something bad happens. Even if you want to explain something, can't you change it to a psychological activity? ? How can any normal person talk to himself all day long? ? ? If you are used to blurting out swear words, that's it. You like to talk to yourself about the information you heard and saw. What do you think? ?

Chapter 25: It's disgusting enough. I didn't know that being someone else's shield would cause trouble. It's not a banquet for acquaintances or nobles. I feel like I'm a little bit powerful, right?

I feel like the rhythm would be better without a sister, and it would be less likely to become cliche.

The first part was pretty good, but what the hell is going on in Chapter 14? Can you agree to this kind of thing? Do you have a boss cover? Is the family powerful? Or is it stronger on its own? You are a low-level guy in the extraordinary world, you have no social network, your family only consists of two people, and you still have a lot of troubles. What gives you the confidence to join the dispute between a powerful noble and a big slave-owning family? Both parties can say that they are powerful, but you are such a little shrimp, if I would definitely go back and break my sister's legs immediately,

I don't know why you called that princess a maid? Brother, you are already a skeleton and you still think of yourself as a human being? You don't have any self-consciousness about your identity. If you want to write like the Bone King, don't just copy the character! Somewhat original

I always feel that the protagonist's personality is erratic. I wanted to hide myself for a while, but when I turned around and acted, I immediately exposed myself. I really don't know what I was thinking.

Why can eunuch's books be included in the daily guide? Are you really just taking poison every day? ? ? 😅😅😅

Good looking, come onｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Can this sister be of some use? Other than being a drag, she has no use at all? Isn't this just looking for a plot for myself? It's really annoying to keep asking the protagonist to find his sister-in-law. Can you please stop writing it? I want to see the ghost ship but not the human protagonist's mindless operation.

It's better to just be a skeleton, and to have a human identity is disgusting.

Chapter 8 was all over the place.

The subject matter is very good, and the content looks very good, but there is an indescribable feeling that makes me have no desire to continue reading. I don't know what it feels like. It's really a pity.

Why do you feel that the characters in the early stage are jumping around here repeatedly

New book sets sail, please recommend, collect, and invest.

I feel that the so-called Great Voyage is just a plug-in to add attributes to Pig's Foot. There are so many chapters, but Pig's Foot itself has not yet gone to sea.

It feels a bit deliberately creating a mysterious and weird atmosphere. The problem is that the author seems to have forgotten that when everything around is mysterious and weird, it is no longer weird or scary.

? ? Are you a eunuch? Outrageous! Why!

The original person died after traveling through time, and then he was just like a normal person.

Very good, friends who like punk and Cthulhu style can eat it with confidence. (Attached is a monthly ticket, cheers for the author)

Ghost ship. . If I remember correctly, the protagonist of the pirate system in the long-lasting novel also has a ghost ship.

If you have a picture, +1 for loyal fans!

I think fear should come from mystery. The author introduces everything clearly from the beginning. It immediately felt boring. From the original horror adventure extraordinary, it immediately became the harem extraordinary. It felt very cliche and boring instantly.

A eunuch? Sitting? I just like this kind of novels.

Such a beautiful book, why was it cut?

The first chapter was so discouraging that I didn't even want to read the second chapter 😅

Author, update soon, a lot of people are waiting for you to feed

Pay attention to paragraph 3. If you don't have the strength, take the first step.

Come on, it's quite interesting, but there are too few. I suggest you update 3-5 chapters every day, or a little more words, 5-8,000 words per day is best. Keep updated daily.

Author, is it guaranteed to be updated three times a day?