Entertainment: Throw Four King Bombs at the Beginning

I only saw Chapter 22, cut it out, and have a few words to say: 1. Author, you want to create a protagonist with positive energy, but the protagonist you create only uses those works to open the way, and the shaping of your own spirit and spirit cannot match it. The image point is that the protagonist is like a puppet. (For example: at the beginning of House of Cards, the protagonist encounters a dog who was hit by a car. The dog is swallowing in pain. The protagonist has his back to everyone, squats in front of the dog, strokes the dog's head to comfort it, and then twists its arm while no one is paying attention. First, there is basically no line in the whole process, but the image of the protagonist comes out immediately) 2. Based on those works, the protagonist's career choice is not given priority to staying in school (school league, etc.), Master's degree, etc. This can better promote traditional culture, right? In fact, it can be changed to the protagonist graduating with a master's degree or a doctorate. The starting point in the book is OK, Peking University, but it is not high enough. 3. The emergence of some female characters, villains, slaps in the face and other plots have lowered the protagonist's "pattern". It's like watching a story about a lazy beggar who gets millions of dollars from heaven. What do you think he will do? What kind of story will it be? How long do you think it will take for his tens of millions of money to be wasted and he will become a beggar again? 4. Water, I basically watched it without skipping a beat, whether it was dialogue, description or plot, it was all a bit watery. 5. The type of sex in this book should not be pretended like this. It is recommended to refer to a book about doctors and a scientist that was very popular in the past two years to see how to pretend to be sexy and who are the people who praise it. There's no need to pretend to be sexy when it comes to shocking ordinary people and shocking weak villains. After all, the protagonist is awesome from the beginning. If you solve the above problems a little, this book will become popular. The above are some immature opinions. They are not suggestions. If they offend me, please take it as a fart...

Real IQ online? Especially Dihua wisdom.

The author did write the protagonist a little too high at the beginning, and later wrote the protagonist a little low due to the needs of the plot. I almost didn't finish reading some chapters in the middle, but the author probably made some corrections in time after reading a lot of book review comments, so it turned out to be pretty good later on. Of course, it is the first time for the author to write a book, so some situations are understandable. Moreover, the concept and structure of this book are very good. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I personally give two small suggestions to the author based on my experience in reading novels for so many years (this is purely a personal opinion. If the author thinks it makes some sense, please adopt it. If you think it is uninteresting, please ignore it, because I only look at the problem from the reader's perspective, which may conflict with the author's perspective). I hope this book will get better and better as it gets written. First: the issue of female protagonists. I personally think that today's readers don't like harems when reading novels, nor do they like pig trotters surrounded by a group of confidantes. Too many women around them feel too chaotic, so it's best to write a single female protagonist. Moreover, the heroine does not appear too early. If the heroine of this book is Liu Feifei, it is obvious that the heroine appears too early. Moreover, the heroine's feelings for the pig's feet are too strong and too fast, which makes people a little uncomfortable. The relationship should be from acquaintance to acquaintance to falling in love, and finally it will be a matter of course. Falling in love is like drinking a cup of tea that tastes sweet but bland, and has endless aftertaste after drinking it (I suggest the author to read the novels of Ruffian Cai. In the novels of Ruffian Cai, both the direction of love and the character of the heroine are very classic, making people yearn for it but not available). The second point is that the speed of throwing out works is too fast. There have been so many classic works released in such a short time, which can easily make people numb. But I guess the author wants to make the cool points more intensive to capture the readers' hearts 😁. The third point: There is still the problem of the heroine. In the past, many authors who wrote heroines liked to write the heroine to be weird and have a slight princess-like character (many girls in modern times have this kind of character, and many boys have endless headaches in reality). This kind of writing was still popular among readers a few years ago. I like it, but now I feel that it doesn't quite meet the taste of readers. I think now everyone should prefer the more intellectual and quiet heroine, that is, the heroine written by Ruffian Cai. I suggest that the author can adjust the heroine's character appropriately when writing later. There is not much else to say. Finally, I would like to remind the author that the female protagonist issue is very important. It must be well conceived and written. I have read too many novels with good ideas but because the heroine became a harem or the heroine was not very well written, the book was eventually abandoned by readers. Okay, finally, I wish the author this book will get better and better, and I will keep reading it.

The protagonist described by the author is a great wise man, and his actions are pure diaosi. The first part is for the sake of the family and the country, etc. He talks very well, and the second part is completely pure diaosi plot. I read your book just to see you fighting against public officials, instead of playing the disgusting trend of the entertainment industry, and talking big words and doing villainous things. This character is the same as Guo Moruo, laugh

Many readers said that there was a conflict between the protagonist's character and behavior. Let me explain here. I positioned the protagonist as a common man with ideals. The main plot at the beginning of the novel was cultural export. Later, when I was writing Chapter 60, I suddenly got inspiration, so I added a sub-plot, which is to help the rise of domestic products. In the final analysis, it is still cultural export. I found that many people who commented and questioned had a habitual thinking, that is, literary heroes must be people who have escaped from low-level tastes, cannot love money, cannot love beautiful women, and must be saints. Do you think it's possible? In addition, in my understanding, the role of the literary and entertainment circles is to enrich people's spiritual civilization, and there is no distinction between superior and inferior. Can't good film and television works be studied and praised by future generations? Whether the protagonist enters the entertainment industry or makes money, it is all to expand his influence and accumulate capital. It is not a sin to love money and have money, but to be unkind is to be rich.

The writing of this book is very fragmented, and the second is Tai Shui. The protagonist's behavior makes me feel like a complacent and despicable plagiarist.

I've logged into it several times. I was so addicted just by looking at the introduction that I didn't dare to click in.

Phew, since the protagonist is set as a common person, do you dare to use the four lines of Liang Liang? So fearless. If you dare to use these four sentences, everyone will look at you with a magnifying glass. He is a person who is insulated from vulgarity and establishes his character and mind. He has his own aura and is the master of the sect, and his personality is equal to that of the saints. How many literary giants throughout the ages, including Wu Qing, dared to say these four sentences?

It started with "Young China" and some subsequent national newspaper reports. To put it bluntly, the character was very high at the beginning. He was created as a positive figure of the country. However, the subsequent content did not reflect the character that a positive figure of the country should have. All aspects of the content did not match it. This kind of differentiation did not provide any enjoyment.

There is something called going too far, and the way of showing off in front of others is not the highest level of showing off. It only takes a few days after rebirth to go to the Demon City, and one poem per meal on average is too dense. There are too many plots, and the sense of repetition reduces the sense of enjoyment and becomes a low-level fluff. In fact, the subject matter is really good, but it is not pleasant. Writing about teenagers is very satisfying, and the fourth is very refreshing, and then repeating a meal and a poem is boring. After school, I write at most one poem, and then connect the plot to the main variety show, add career development and emotional development in between, and put the focus and plot conflicts into the variety show. This way the results will definitely be much better than now.)

Are these plots about Xu Gao and Zhou Jialun's beacon fire really not embarrassing? It's strange. Is it really satisfying to copy an article about being praised and licked by a real star? Why do you have to find a real-life star prototype to show off? Isn't it embarrassing? Why do these characters still appear to play the protagonist when they are all made up? Does the author really think that his writing skills can portray these people well, or does he mean that other characters cannot stand up and he needs to find a realistic one to write? Let's discuss the plot. There is a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west. The whole thing has been in chaos since I arrived in Hangzhou. I feel like I write whatever comes to my mind. I am either drinking or on the way to drink. The pretense is that the plot is seriously homogeneous, and it has reached the point where I just change people and places and change poems. And the plot of Liu Feifei, I really feel that the author has never been in a relationship before, and it is all based on imagination. The plot is abrupt and the dialogue is inexplicable... I can't associate it with Liu Yifei (this may be an advantage) Regarding literature and entertainment, it would be a bit outrageous to say that they both enrich the people's spiritual civilization. As the most important carrier of culture, does literature only serve to enrich spiritual civilization? Not to mention that literature is one of the most important cores of those very excellent film and television works. The West can live without Chaplin, but the West cannot live without Rousseau. Don't you have to look at the main contradiction of something to evaluate anything? To be honest, it was the author who set the author too high in the early stage. I don't blame him for the many comments later. You even tried to seek truth, and how much manipulation was done to gain popularity by talking about salary and popularity in order to increase Weibo fans... From this point of view, except for the occasional angry youth, most of the time they either make money for the sake of making money or show off for the sake of making money. Although it is true that literary giants can also love money and beautiful women, but really you wrote about a college student who shouted four lines about Hengqu and then went on a variety show to have scandals with female stars everywhere... This kind of discomfort must be the inertia of readers. Wei? If you want to write about a secular person with ideals who can make money and beauties, there is really no need to engage in these teenagers talking about Ailian and Hengqu. Do you want to enter the entertainment industry? There are many classics that can make you famous instantly, and there are also many red classics that can satisfy your positive energy and ideal ideas. Since you have set your style to bring peace to all generations, why do you blame netizens for thinking that loving money and beautiful women is too vulgar?

It's strange. Wouldn't it be better to write this kind of urban novel if you have a family? Especially for those who copy ancient texts, their status as orphans is really unclear, and their personalities can easily be separated, a bit like a beggar wearing a dragon robe! Moreover, copying is done too frequently, and many ancient poems and prose require age and experience! Another: It is highly recommended that the author starts with "goose, goose, goose" 😁. Really, I think this poem is particularly suitable for pretending to slap the face. The key is that it can be written in any age or background...

This kind of article is generally not long, because many different copies of background, history, etc. Will make readers feel embarrassed.

What can I say? The more I write, the worse I get. I don't understand why you have to dig into the shit basin of the entertainment industry. The protagonist talks about the pattern every day. In the end, he takes the most unstructured path. Niu

I quit after seeing the introduction. So can anyone easily write classic poems and articles now? Would someone with such ability go to a dirty place like the entertainment industry? Do you want to infiltrate the literary world or whitewash the trashy entertainment industry?

The beginning of the poem is very good, Young China said, Ailian said, Hengqu Four Sentences. I just stood up the article and then started to pull my hips. The author can consider the style issue later. If the whole book is the same as the beginning, it will at least be a small hit. If it doesn't change, it will be ignored by everyone!

I always feel that writing such an in-depth work with a protagonist of his age is a bit disconnected and a bit embarrassing. I do not deny that young people can write classics. There are always geniuses with extraordinary talents in history. However, there are many works in the article that require certain experience and experience to write. I hope the author will put some effort into the selection of works.

This Liu Feifei. . . Why write such a vicious plot?

The four kings exploded at the beginning. It was probably the toilet that exploded. After the explosion, it was all Oli!

Bringing literature down and the entertainment industry too high,

What are poets and poets? They are the sun and moon in literature, dragons and phoenixes among literati, leaders, especially the only poets and poets in an era! Author! Do you know Liu Sanbian? I wrote poems for famous prostitutes, and they were a bit glamorous, but I didn't even have to be an official. The four sentences on the cross beam are the iron rules of life for scholars. You are insulting the quintessence of China!

What kind of courtyard houses? Why are there so many novels with the name Siheyuan?

This book is okay, it's very interesting, why is no one here?