We Agreed with the False Heavenly Master, What's Going on with Your Tongtianlu?

To be honest, the creativity is not bad, but it still feels a bit strange, so I won't continue reading.

It looks good at first glance, and it's okay in the early stages, but it gets more and more complicated later on, and a template is used one after another, which is not how any movie article is written. The outline of the dough buns came up, but the cooking time was not enough, there was a lack of ingredients and a lack of heat. The idea is good, but it still needs polishing

I still suggest the author to check more information and rely on traditional Taoist priests, and not to use the same skills as in online games. At the very least, there should be nine-character mantras, "All those who are facing an army march forward in formation," and "Emergency is like law and order," "Blessings and Infinite Gods," such Taoist colloquialisms that even old-fashioned Hong Kong movies are bad at! This is not much better than the main character's skills! Besides, the Eight Great Taoist Divine Curses are full of words and very powerful. Think about it, the protagonist is currently the only Taoist priest. When he sees a large group of villains bullying the common people, he just clicks the Golden Light Divine Curse and makes a hand seal, and all the villains retreat! That's not much better than setting fire to thunder! You think so?

The part about my fiancée is a little bit toxic. The purpose of hiding my identity is not clear. Everyone in the entire virtual bureau knows you, and your friends around you also know you. You are a closer girlfriend, but your lover says you don't want to reveal your identity. What the hell?

Just the introduction is enough to kill you! School beauties, fiancées, anyone who hooks up with women are all poisonous. Although women can play many games, these games will only make people vomit and make the story end with women, without any structure.

The subject matter is novel, but there are many poisonous points. To put it simply, when a new system (Tao method) appears and you are the only one who knows it, it is equivalent to an ordinary person inventing the warp engine.

I think it's best not to define the protagonist as the only Taoist priest. I know that the author wants to write about the uniqueness of the protagonist and also cultivate Taoist priests, but there are weird events happening in the whole world, and the place where the protagonist is located is so chaotic every day. What about the whole country? A country has more or less some foundations. It would be better for the author to write later that there are also Taoist priests, but it is not that exaggerated. What do you think?

From the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period to the present, the Confucian sect is headed by the 77th generation. Did your 300-odd generations begin with the cavemen at the top of the mountain? ? ? Zhang Daoling, the founder of Daomen, was from the late Han Dynasty

Another one who is so confident, he only charges money after 30 chapters

Luck, belief in Taoism? ? ? Can't reach the top

Don't give good things to your girlfriend before giving them to outsiders.

The Guizhou donkey is so incompetent that there is nothing but disgusting plots.

Why not let your girlfriend practice Taoism first, but let your friends

A ghost is a ghost, why is it weird to write a word with the same sound? Everyone else can write, but you can't? I can't bring it in just by looking at it.

Looks good, please update more

The first three chapters are poisonous! Can't afford it! Withdrawn!

I'm convinced, it's another eunuch's book

Except for the crotch thing, I admire the crotch thing.

"Complete" and "Exquisite" these four words, you will be completely hooked.

It's rare for someone to write Tongtianlu at the starting point

I beg the author to remove the word "virtual", it looks too fake, and the science-fiction term "virtual" conflicts with the supernatural word "weird"! Super responsive!

Although you are obviously capable, you still keep insisting that you are fake.

Why is your super archaeological novel gone? I gave a good introduction in the video, but your book is gone.