Beast Control: Starting Contract with Panda Liquor Sword Fairy

I like the beginning of this book. Most of the novels begin with a pig's trotters who have just traveled through time and were either bullied or despised by everyone. Then the awakening system starts to show off and slap people in the face. Generally speaking, I don't read novels with this kind of beginning because the intrigue is too serious.

Book Title ①Beast Control: The Beginning Contract with Captain America ②Beast Control: The Beginning Contract with Godzilla King Kong ③Beast Control: The Beginning Contract with Transformers ④Beast Control: The Beginning Contract with Pangu What do you think 🤓

The best thing about this novel is that the author uses a lot of space to describe how the protagonist's talent is so strong and how awesome his spiritual species is. As a result, after going out, it is very difficult to fight for the same level. It can't even reflect the strength of those innate secret treasures. He just keeps driving hard. When the battle comes, he pulls his hips and uses all kinds of weird excuses to suppress the combat power, which makes me vomit. 🤮

Bullshit, bullshit, this is the first time I see the exit index is negative.

The author still changed the first love scene at the beginning. Even if you really want to write it like this, you can still describe it step by step and be more subtle. The beginning is a bad straight shot. What do you hope readers can expect from this book? The most annoying thing for readers nowadays is vulgarity. If your beginning is so vulgar, don't blame readers for not appreciating it. The three golden chapters at the beginning of online articles are very important to retain readers. Only then can you be qualified to say how wonderful your subsequent writing is.

Hello, I love my Ruibandi~ Open a Yuling post to collect data and copy it. . . Ahem I mean if you want your favorite little baby to appear in the book, you should actively create. Of course, a dragon suit can also be used, but the level of the dragon suit should not exceed gold for the time being, and the level of the dragon suit should not be higher than the marshal level Format of the dragon suit Name: Age: Level: Yuling: Tian Endowment: Yuling format (refer to Tuanzi's template)                                                                                                                                       r> [Level: 5 (nascent stage)] [Growth level: Myth] [Talent: King Kong is indestructible (the power of Tai Chi protects the physical body and reduces the damage taken by half), Wine Fairy (drinking wine from the gourd can trigger a variety of increases, and attack the target at the same time to drive the wine poison into the opponent's body), Sword Fairy (a first step) Heavenly Sword Qi protects the body, can be attacked or received)] [Innate Secret Treasures: Yin and Yang Wine Gourd, Jade Jade Sword Bamboo, Flame Glazed Coat] [Skills: Yin and Yang Fire (the three attributes of Yin and Yang Fire can be added to normal attacks in any combination), Immortal Qi Burst (the immortal energy in the body bursts out to make oneself charge at an extremely fast speed)]

Can this exit index be negative? First time meeting

You won't want to read it until you see the title, let alone the introduction. Panda Wine and Sword Fairy, not to mention that this thing is poorly written, it just means that it will be invincible at the beginning. Do you still need to read it?

Not much poison, but the taste is too bland

This protagonist doesn't look like an adult at all before time travel. He looks like a child. This is especially obvious after Chapter 23.

Why is the exit index still negative?

The protagonist has too much inner drama

To be honest, every photo of Yuling destroys the image of majesty in my heart. Is this setting for primary school students? The photos chosen really stretch the crotch.

I came in after reading the introduction. Are you sure you can grasp it in the later stage?

Why is the exit index negative?

I thought I was raising pets by myself, from low to high, but it turned out that the first two were already the highest.

The setting is very innovative, and the various spirits are refreshing compared to pet beasts, but I hope the story is not cliche, come on 😏

The background we are talking about now is divided into two categories, that is, ultra-ancient civilization and modern times. Why do you feel that the author should not focus on describing the super ancient times? Can't we write about the super-ancient advantages and then write about the modern advantages? Maybe I didn't see it, but if you, the author, have been writing that super ancient times are definitely better than modern times, there is no need for me to read on. Of course that doesn't mean your book is bad. This is the most fundamental thing in my mind. Human beings are the times, and they are always being eliminated and evolved. Since what he had lost tens of thousands of years ago, he must be eliminated. I just saw the part about entering the ruins, and the only thing I saw was that modern times are really weak compared to super ancient times, not to mention the shoe heel. Not to mention how many years it has been developing now, it will take a hundred years to at least develop and understand the most basic things. Historical things can only be learned from, rather than pursued. It's okay. If the author sees it, he would like to reply to see if the following is really the situation I mentioned. If it is, I will write everything down and give you a few votes and then withdraw it. After all, I can't read it in vain.

There are not many poison points, but a little water affects the look and feel, and the hang-up is a bit big. Whether it can be contained later is a question, and why do you always keep entering randomly?

What is the author group's answer? It's always wrong.

It's boring to see the routine of being dissatisfied with the innate soul power at the beginning

Why do you keep breaking in? What's going on with the author?

Can the author tell me which novel the chapters you posted in advance are from?

Author, can we be more careful? If it doesn't work, just post an hour earlier every day and replace it at 12 o'clock in the evening. What I see now at 7, 7 or 8 o'clock every morning is still the chapter that has not been replaced.

Can the author change the update time? Updating after 23:00 is too late. Can it be updated before 21:00?