Tokyo Blaster

I went to a school and wrote more than 40 chapters about things in one day. It's awesome.

This is everyday life and looks a bit awkward with ghosts.

Start making recommendations, and the follow-up rate is very important. Please don't keep reading, just read it to the end! Thank you!😡😡😡

Come on, update quickly, the student party doesn't have much money. But it's still okay to make an initial reservation.

Personally, I feel that the problem with both the Ghost Line and the Subway Line is that they are not smooth. The author may have wanted to learn from the reversal and reversal of Wonderful Stories, but the writing seemed too wordy in the early stages. The main function of the ghost line is to introduce the setting of the vengeful person. The ghost can just kill the family. Although it is fun to complain about the master, writing it like this at the beginning will inevitably make people feel too watery. Writing about resolving grievances in the subway line does not necessarily require supernormal abilities, but it can be over after entering the police station to check the video. If it is not recorded, it seems to be superfluous, especially at this time, the protagonist is completely outside the article. The key is that the female police officer has a lot of nonsense in this section 🤭 Finally, there are only nine or eight people in Japan without surnames now, right?

Did Shen Nong test the poison? Thanks!

Please accept this scarecrow! When you've made up your mind just remove the red thread! I will take your enemies to hell!

It's very good. The tit-for-tat revenge plot is very enjoyable to watch, and some parts are unexpectedly written, reasonable and not blunt, making it interesting. But the attitude in writing revenge seems to be a little too pursuit. It is very good that the target of revenge should be deep enough (the behavior is very reasonable and suitable), but in some places, the protagonist may be preconceived that the protagonist is obsessed with severe revenge and seems a bit crazy (the first thing is to rationally explain to the Avengers quietly that it is better to have a human nature test before proceeding (I wonder if it will appear very tough even if the goal is achieved); in the train slander case, the last words of the protagonist should not be ignored, because you will preconceptionally believe that you are determined to pursue the case).