Global Travel Survival Trial

Come on, author, collect it on your bookshelf first

I'm going to say something depressing. There's a big problem with the pacing, and it's a bit cumbersome. The new writer doesn't have a fan base. The most important three golden chapters need to be exciting or suspenseful, but it's not obvious what you wrote. The most important thing is the rhythm, which must be done well. This rhythm is a bit too fast. However, this book still has its merits. As a new writer, it is very correct to write about systematic writing skills. I read your potential from your words, and I believe that your story can be successful😡 The above is only a personal opinion, without any offensive remarks😢😢😢

Why wasn't it updated so soon?

Will the author publish a new book? I look forward to it.

Collect various opinions, monster ideas, and supporting settings. Maybe it won't be used even if it is mentioned, but what is even more embarrassing is that no one mentioned it at all.

Tell me a few words. You are a novice reader, and writing novice articles is very advantageous. Unlike old white readers, who have such high requirements, they cannot write such simple articles. The problem is also too simple. There are actions but no purpose, there are turns but no emotions, there are conflicts but no contradictions. This creates the absurd, chaotic and mediocre characteristics of your article. It looks like a standard ancient and brainless piece of writing.

Come on! Station B also follows you and collected it 👍

I commented for you on station B before, so I'll talk about something else here. It is common for newcomers to encounter adventures and meet the opposite sex. They feel that these elements are present and have expectations in their hearts. They write it down as if it is good. Such considerations are correct, but they are not the decisive factor. If you don't have a clear outline, then you should also think clearly about the short story in front of you. For example, for the protagonist, you can write that one of his girlfriends suddenly had such an accident, and he wants to go back to save people. If he meets these people again on the road, then he may think that this girl is similar to his girlfriend, so he helps. Then after several stages, you find a girlfriend, maybe the next one is survival, a bigger challenge. Otherwise, when you arrive in a new world, you will have no ideas or thoughts, and you will start doing tasks as if you are very familiar with it, and your character will look very empty. Everyone has a goal before they act. I can first think about changes on the earth and what kind of actions the protagonist will take to face this environment. But after this step, you should think about why he acts like this and what does he do between actions? What results do you want to achieve? After you think it through, you can almost write it down.