Beastmaster: Fully Armed

The protagonist is too greasy, chatting with bosses, accompanied by beautiful women, just like a second generation, and has an ordinary appearance. The reader does not feel involved. It is best to change the protagonist to a middle-class family. Su Hui has an early marriage. The key is to be handsome and not to have a harem. We are here to see the pets. We can go to urban literature to read the harem ourselves. Learn the knowledge of beast control, the golden finger is the panel, unlock the evolution route, don't have too many evolution routes, just three or two of a kind of pet beast, we can't remember more, modern beast control articles, torture in clubs or arenas, collect pet information, and increase combat experience for pets by the way, don't have too many names of people, just passers-by, just describe this yellow hair and the like, Don't have big bosses in the early stage. You can participate in small competitions to win prizes. After the college entrance examination, you can go to a great university. You can have jokes like rich women, hungry people, and food, but you have to be single to the end. We don't want to eat dog food. The protagonist must act with a purpose. For example, if you are short of money, you must take on tasks, if you are short of skills, you must buy and learn them by yourself, if you are short of medicines, you must configure or buy them yourself. The weak chicken period is about growing up little by little. Don't add too much historical background and be swayed by the times. After all, urban readers of modern beast-controlling novels default to a peaceful world, or they have returned to the feudal era. The modern point is that courier birds deliver express, and it is convenient to buy ordinary beast-controlling books.

Let me give you some advice, the routine is too old.

Chongmei chooses pets based on toughness and consciousness. Rareness is secondary. Each pet has unlimited possibilities. If you get started, it will be a high-level pet, but it will still follow you wholeheartedly. It is a bit poisonous.

Look at the owner of the pet beast next door. At the beginning, he persuaded many people to retreat, and all the time travelers had to be counterattacked by the natives. Now that the writing is getting better and better, it does not necessarily mean that the popularity is increasing. If you feed poison in the front, who will come later?

I just want to say that the introduction is true🐮🍺

The soul of the Golden Core stage travels through time, and then is swallowed up by the protagonist. I feel that it is better to change the soul of ×××× to time travel, and then is swallowed up by the protagonist. This way there is one less pitfall.

The classification of levels is the most unpleasant in fantasy novels, because I can't remember it, and it's easy to forget the difference between 20 and 40. Secondly, there is no racial classification, and I can't tell whether the Battery Bee is strong or weak. Also, the author's writing is very unconventional, with alternating between classical Chinese and modern flavor. I suspected that two people were writing the novel. Classical Chinese is the best, because it has a formal style, and the modern flavor is only suitable for urban novels.

I read the first chapter and slipped away

It's another novel about a world full of conspiracies and intrigues in a difficult world to live in.

One opinion is that the pets are the team or the army, and the protagonist is the commander and the brain. That makes sense for the brain to go to the front line.

It's very well written, the writing style and everything else are good.

There is also a ridiculous plot, where a woman promises her body, and then is misunderstood. What do you want to do? Are modern people so conservative? This is a strong person's article, not an idol's piece of shit.

A tribute to a classic? It feels pretty good, but I would like to think more about the writing style and details.

It must be cultivated from an early age. Fighting instinct and awareness are the most important. The race can be improved with krypton gold. You must have the toughness of grass. Don't be a sycamore that cannot live in it, a vase that cannot be eaten without training, or a young lady's temperament.

There are too many dialogues, please write more about the environment

I don't want to watch the first three movies. I'm so tired from work and I want to watch the main character, but PUA has withdrawn it.