After the Cold Palace Was Abolished, All He Wanted to Do Was Cultivate Immortality

I was fooled by the title of the book. I clicked in to read this book after reading it for the third time. The name of Mary Sue is, but in fact the Mary Sue script belongs to the supporting actors. The heroine got the Cultivation to Immortality script. You can read it. It's good.

Let me tell you my thoughts after watching it. I saw it on my subscription account. I was quite unimpressed by this name at first. I wanted to turn it off, but I stopped reading it after just one glance. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. It lacks some sense of immersion, the plot changes are abrupt, and there are also problems with the handling. There are also some places that are confusing and confusing. The advantages are that the pace is fast, the plot is quite attractive, it is exciting and exciting, and it is basically free of surprises. If I continue to follow up, I will subscribe. Overall, this is the book that I can read the most recently among the great cold dishes on Xiuxiannu. Com, and I am a 10+ year old bookworm.

A hammer in the east and a stick in the west, messy and unsightly

Author, come on and vote 5 times,

The writing is so scattered that I can't stand it anymore. It says that we should focus on the main plot and other sketches. In fact, it is the main plot that is the most inexplicable. We also need to write about the love affairs in the palace, the intrigues in the court, and the various aspects of people's livelihood. And then insert a period of cultivation progress with no beginning or end in the middle. What is this main plot? It's like a biscuit pie chart. She didn't write clearly in Beijing and went to the border to find her father. The map was cut so much that people got motion sickness. The rhythm and priority issues were also too big. It threw a lot of suspense. It either didn't work or passed by lightly. How about saving it to be a squib? On the contrary, there is no "suspense" in the description of the sealing formation that somehow becomes a clue. Of course, this line is also a dotted line. The heroine's plot is half-jumping. Every plot line is also anticlimactic. It is probably a thousand words of foreshadowing and the result is ten words. You can also say that this is not the result, but it is cut off at the end? Just open a new line? As I read, my head was filled with threads about sudden death The most important thing is that the motivation of the heroine is not clear at all. I know that the heroine is mainly practicing, but what is the specific development logic? Why did she break the formation after the Library Pavilion? Why did she rush back to the capital to save someone and then immediately go to the border to find her father? The superficial motives are very weak or even non-existent, which is completely insufficient to support the character's behavior. If these different plot lines can be strung together in the heroine's mind and reasonably allocated one, two, three, four, and then the heroine chooses what to do first and then what to do according to her own logic, it will be easy to understand. The image of the heroine is also clear. The problem is that readers can only see where the heroine suddenly went and what she did, but they don't know what she thought before and after she did it. Don't even know how she did it. So how can we understand? After reading more than twenty chapters, the image of the heroine is like a flash hero, always flashing back and forth between different places. If you omit too much, it can't be called concise. It will just look like making a mystery. The author's writing style is quite good and the concept is interesting. I hope they can pay attention to the issue of primary and secondary rhythm.

Is it a missing seal? Why did I just switch the map without any warning?

At present, except for two faults, it is a fairy tale that can be watched by anyone watching male videos. 1. Book title. After passing by n times, I saw the main text of the subsequent restrictions and exemptions before opening the remaining one 😁. In fact, only the first 31 chapters are related to the title of the book. After that, singing about professional immortality has nothing to do with it. 2. A montage of connecting techniques between big and small worlds. For novels, the lack of movie scenes requires readers to construct their own stories, which can calm down after a few chapters. This is where the ramifications of the comments come from. Do you need to burn your brain to cultivate immortal literature? So strange. It is recommended that the author move the last sentence of Chapter 31, about the heroine taking elixirs in retreat after saying goodbye, to the scene before the old emperor in the cold palace crying, so that the suspense of the chapter is correct, and the conflict in reading should be resolved.

It will be put on the shelves at the end of the month, invest a lot, and you will make sure profits without losing money.

I tied it yesterday, so I'm going to add a review today ~ The storyline is very suitable to my taste, the rhythm is tight, the protagonist and supporting characters all have distinct personalities, I don't think there are any big problems in the narrative expression, the writing is very comfortable, the author can't help you ੧ᐛ੭

No need to thank you, just update more 😁

I just read the first thirty chapters. In the previous chapter, the heroine traveled through time and became a destitute queen, and then discovered that there was spiritual energy in the imperial mausoleum and tried to break the formation to release the spiritual energy. Some book friends said it looked a bit messy, here and there. In fact, the main thing the heroine does is to break the formation and release spiritual energy. When doing this, it is normal to encounter something on the road and handle it smoothly. Later, when the empress sent her parents away, she gave the throne to Erya, who followed her, and began to concentrate on her career. Forget it and leave the mortal world. The second part is different from the first part. It should be a different world. It is guessed that it is the original world of the heroine. The heroine's memory was unclear before, so she should explain it from another angle. Haven't watched it yet. . .

It looks weird, but it's okay! The heroine is just too frustrated

It's really pretty, come on!

I found this on my subscription account. At first I was a little afraid to recommend it, for fear of being cheated by the author, but it is really well-written, the author's writing style and plot are excellent, and the reviews are also good. The protagonist described by the author is crazy and exciting, and it can be seen that the author has a profound writing background, so it is worth reading.

The name of this book is definitely misleading. It's not actually a brainless Mary Sue. It feels like it's a book about cultivating immortals and upgrading. It should be about a non-CP heroine. I haven't finished reading it yet. Maybe there's a male protagonist.

The author is in a bad mood again. At least he has written it this far. Can he finish it? Judging from the plot you wrote later, it develops very quickly. It should be over soon. Hey, it's been a few days since the break. Please update it soon 😭

This book is very good, I will continue to read it! Only by persisting can you see the hope of success!

Such a beautiful book, even if I love diving, I still want to support it.

It's very interesting, I support it~ Come on, author, keep writing well 😁😁😁