Alliance: Please Stop C!

Don't you think it's confusing? After the bp, neither side has summarized it, and I don't know which side chose what?

This is the author himself, let me state it again. This book is purely for fun, and the author is a fun person. The content of the article is not directed at any real clubs or people. If there is any inappropriate joke, the author is greedy for life and afraid of death, just 🇫🇷military salute🏳️. As for alliance writing, it is inevitable that sometimes bugs may appear due to lack of consideration. You are welcome to correct me! Squirt lightly. I will try my best to write a good book, so...

There's no need to scold, it's okay. It's just that the heroine is a bit awkward, so don't engage in emotional scenes. Occasionally intersperse flirty and interactive female anchors with commentary and stuff, just ok to polish it up. In addition, the Pan Sen at the end was indeed a bit of a drag. It was written that it would bring down teammates, turn invisible, and then end... This, at least, had some eye-catching operations to show that the team lost. I didn't lose, at least not completely. I have to have a good mentality, and update it stably. Look at the back~😎😎😎The author writes well, come on! ! !

The content is okay, but I think this heroine is too awkward. It's better not to show up. If the league publishes results, either it's a popular heroine, or it's better to focus on writing games.

Zhou Shuyi really doesn't want to see it every day

According to the alliance articles I have read before, the more well-known ones are either tactical analysis and good explanations of the game, or they are cheating articles with smooth plots and clear explanations. Not to mention that the cheats in this novel are not exciting enough, they are completely missing in the middle period. The protagonist's skills suddenly do not rely on cheats and are at the top level. And the author, you chose a very strange time at this time. It is not S7 or before, nor S10, but S8. To be honest, at this time, MSI has rng, and the World Championship has ig. There is no need to change at all. What else does the protagonist need to do?

Those who can be followed are basically for e-sports. Let me ask you, can someone specialize in writing urban romance dramas that you write? So it's not that you can't write, it's best not to write too much

Just give a woman some tug, don't show true feelings faker and scout said it well: E-sports doesn't need love! PS. I want to see the interaction between the protagonist and the anti-bar buddies. Recently, Zoom and Binghuang read each other's anti-bar comments. It was quite interesting. It's true that Bengbu lives in Bengbu.

Just finished watching Spring Judgment. Just a little question. The title is because my teammates are too clumsy, so I can only win by lying down, and the result is that I am a loser. Introduction to the God of character. As a result, after the game, he was still giving harsh words to his opponent who had just lost, adding insult to injury. Although I am quarreling with Heizi. But, how do you make the black men admire your character like this after the game? , Finally, did those Internet trolls excerpt too much? Blood pressure looks up. A bit too much.

Personally, I suggest that if you don't know how to write a romantic drama, you shouldn't write a heroine. Chapter 19.20 Is too embarrassing. The protagonist is only 18 years old. Why is he so anxious to find a heroine and have three children? Most people in this genre don't care whether the protagonist has a partner or not. If there are too many matches and need to be adjusted, you can write interesting things about the live broadcast and copy two memes for fun. Isn't it better than this embarrassing emotional drama?

Can you please stop teasing your Bai Xixi?

Suddenly, a female protagonist comes along. I think the male protagonist is in heat, like a puppy, which is a bit funny, and it's so cute! ! !

Licking IG hard! It's really unnecessary. Although these two Han Yuans are very conscientious, but it's really unnecessary. Wouldn't it be better to hit them if they fall to the ground?

To be fair, it's not impossible to lose, but if you lose too much, readers will also run After the canyon girl flying thunder god next door lost the competition, half of the readers ran away, and the rest of the mentality was also sent, and it was unfinished after only a few chapters were written. After all, the system already has the rationality to care about whether you win or not. It's not necessary. Of course, if you think this is not a cool novel but a serious literature, then you should think I didn't say that.

The title of this book is very inappropriate. "Please stop fucking me." The "you" speaks volumes.

Isn't it too fake that RW can actually beat IG? S8IG Top laner shy teacher UR Jungler King Ning SSR (top and mid ADc3 dad is really good) Mid laner Ji Zhenzhu UR Ah Shui UR (commander and assistant to play the game, a big daddy in the bottom lane) Baonan SSR (Ah Shui brings support, ssr is not too much) Top laner Aguang SR (The stalk of light is very famous, and then he is a blue-collar top laner, a bastard) Jungle boy SR (Korean aid is real) Mid laner plug-in male protagonist UR (not too much, the male protagonist is not UR) ADc Sima Laothief SR (just the relegation emperor) Support? SR (To be honest, apart from Lian Nan, Xiao Ming and Baonan, I really don't think the S8 has any good support, oh, there is also an S9 Liu Hai brother) With this configuration, I dare to write a novel! My IG fans are furious! Do you still remember S8 Incheon? Ah!

Seeing Bai Xixi come out, I was so disgusted that I couldn't stand it anymore! ! Various brothers, I withdraw! ! I read another alliance article.

Let me first tell those who want to read this book a few shortcomings 1. It is not S7 2. The author started to want to write a romance novel in the early stage, so those who want to read a pure LOL novel can skip it 3. The emotional drama written by the author is extremely poisonous

This heroine is just like you eating fried stinky tofu and pouring two ounces of osmanthus nectar on top of the stinky tofu for you 😰

After passing 520, the author is gone

I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 42. The author wrote blindly and hastily ended the game with IG. He lost two games in a row without the protagonist mentioning it. The golden finger bonus was obviously real-time, but the result was that the protagonist was invisible for the entire process. It was a deliberate arrangement to lose. It's better to just post an outline and arrange it without thinking. It can be seen that the book quality is very poor and does not pursue the basic and reasonable integration of the plot.

The same new book, "The Fierce Shooter" next door, also won the championship. You are still in the semi-finals, and Zhangzhang's starting word count is 5,000; the number of words is more than yours and the updates are more frequent than yours. 🥺

😒It means, a eunuch? I already said I wouldn't pursue you anymore

I wish the author and all book friends a happy new year, all the best, and good health. Especially the author, he must be vigorous and update ten chapters every day 😃

After reading part of it, it turns out that the protagonist's plug-in actually has a halo effect (눈_눈). Why does it feel like the protagonist has only a few tricks to show off when his teammates are at a disadvantage, or even feels like he doesn't show off at all? Instead, his teammates all explode. For example, when the protagonist Ryze hits ig, the increase should be as high as the sky. The description of the protagonist in the early stage is to suck the blood of his teammates to gain troops. Even if you describe the protagonist to go deep into the lane and then escape cleverly, it will not affect the overall advantage of ig. It also shows the operation of the protagonist after the increase, and also explains why the protagonist is disadvantaged by so many knives. Then there is a desperate wave of twin towers. It is understandable that someone must take damage and block skills, but you can't write the protagonist like an idiot who can only stand in place and scroll on the keyboard. Shouldn't it be that the protagonist has nothing to show off, and at this time, the teammates who were inspired by the protagonist rush to block the knife? This makes the protagonist look stupid.

Too cheap? Well, I'm looking halfway up, and I'm still looking down 😭

The source of a large amount of property belonging to a public figure is unknown, so it would be senseless to give him direct reward.

This book is really a pity. It was obviously very well written, and the number of subscriptions was also good, but I ended up cutting it myself.

Magnet for sleeping? Li Zai Gan is the devil! ! ?

If you are in a bad mood, you can read this article. Many chicken soups are good.