The Movie King Starts from the Sky-Falling System

I saw the author mentioned that he often changes girlfriends, and I feel a little uncomfortable. Although this is normal in the entertainment industry, how do you write about your ex-girlfriends next? You have to write about them finding new boyfriends! This is not realistic. Others can't break up with the protagonist and remain single, right?

What the heck, what level is Song Dandan? How long have you known the protagonist? Just accept the protagonist as your godson. Even if the protagonist has a halo, he still has to understand basic logic.

This book is really poisonous. I can't bear it anymore. I don't usually post anything. But when I saw this book, I couldn't help it.

The entertainment system stream is still better than the eunuch one, the heroine is a fairy

Why don't you just write the system directly? What do you want to do by writing a protagonist?

Should be renamed System Toy or System Slave

Seeing that Lili gave up the college entrance examination for something, I thought that even if such a person has a system, can he succeed?

The current entertainment industry is too dangerous. Yang Mi is quite good. She has been hacked by everyone on the Internet, so she is relatively safe.

Obviously, you can write well without a system. Novel with a system does not have a sense of immersion, especially Huayu novels, which rank first in the sense of immersion. I don't understand why I have to add it. If this book does not have a system, the results will definitely be better.

It's poisonous, and a lot of damn things are gathered in the first 20 chapters. What kind of system dialogue is there? The system drives the plot. The protagonist is the tool of the system. These... But after running through the drug circle, I found that it was not bad, a bit trivial. The protagonist is local, has desires, desires, compromises, frustrations, and coquettishness (this is the key point). Well, just an ordinary person has a golden finger. Not counting the first 20 chapters, the results should be much better. 🐶

Does the author Nagada have a large northeastern quail?

The movie Parasite is not in line with the national conditions

Author, your writing is really good, it can be compared with the Golden Retriever. Just no recommendation. Come on come on

The timing is a little wrong: the first 10 chapters say that the wish was made at the age of 18 in 2004 (1986), and the 158th chapter says that the protagonist is one year younger than Miss Yaya, which is 1984, so the time does not match.

It seems to be well written so far, good luck to the author! But I still want to ask about the heroine. You can't keep changing the protagonist like this. After all, you have to consider the final outcome, and those ex-girlfriends also have to explain. You can't just not mention it at all. It's okay to say that those who have little impact in reality, but according to what you said in the previous chapter, you It still needs to be changed. Then the question arises: what should you do as your ex? After all, you are writing a novel. I don't know who you are going to write about in the future. I don't want to discuss it. What are you going to do? Then marry Uncle Liu without mentioning a word. It is impossible. If you want to write like this, I will definitely not read it anymore. I believe many people will not read it. , After all, everyone reads novels to feel happy. Even if they don't abandon the book, they will abandon it because of other heroines for similar reasons. This opinion is just for reference. After all, you are the one who writes the novel, and I am just a spectator. If it doesn't suit me, I will at most not read it. At most, I will curse and curse. I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and I rarely write reviews like this. I can count them on my fingers. There is really a shortage of Chinese entertainment books, and not many people like to read them. Although your book is systematic, it is still very relaxing and enjoyable to read. I really don't want to abandon the book later, so I have a few words with you, hey!

The protagonist of this book is an Aboriginal, but the author's writing is not good and he makes the protagonist a fool.

Good brother, Ning Hao is from Beijing Normal University.

After reading about thirty chapters, I can't accept Zhang Xiaofei. Come on, author, I'm leaving first

Do you want to pay for the final chapter?

This book is one of the more comfortable entertainment books I have read in the past two years. It is just that there are too many poisons at the beginning, the game is green at the beginning, the system is too disgusting, and the description of power is not good. I might as well have a kidney transplant like other women.

Can you use Mandarin instead of dialect?

Dear bosses and young guys passing by, I would like to ask, who is the heroine? Single or multiple?

The author's writing is not bad, the film shooting and the review are good, and the emotional line is quite reasonable. However, the weight of the later part is reduced, and there are no twists and turns. And because some things cannot be explored in depth, and there are few descriptions of daily life, the later part is relatively dull. The timeline of this book is coming to an end. If the author is still working on China Entertainment, I hope the results will be better.

The heroine can't be Zhang Xiaofei 😰