Douluo's Sword Breaks the Void

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The heroines are Bibi Dong, Liu Erlong, Zhu Zhuqing, Tang Yuehua and Bo Saixi.

The protagonist's mother's martial spirit is a sword. I think I should mention it, otherwise the swan mutated into a sword, and the emperor wouldn't be cheated 😏😏😏

Are there only three heroines? Isn't there Bibi Dong?

The most annoying thing is people who become apprentices after time travel, and they are apprentices in Douluo. What can your apprenticeship teach you in Douluo Continent? If it is a fantasy world, it would make sense. If you travel through Douluo and become apprentices to multiple fathers (once you are a teacher, you will always be a father), there is nothing else. Douluo is not like fantasy to teach you skills and so on.

Author Doesn't the protagonist accept Dugu Yan? You have taken care of your grandfather's vegetable garden, but you can't take care of your granddaughter as well?

In fact, the easiest way to pass the level is to conquer Qian Renxue. The country belongs to you, and you belong to me. Then kill Tang San. Isn't it Douluo who has the final say?

Are people from the Tiandou royal family sure to give birth to a martial spirit like the Zhuxian Sword? It's poisonous, I'm so speechless, and even if you are born at level 20, you won't be able to give birth to a martial spirit like the Zhuxian Sword. Those Creation Green Lotus and Pangu Axe are even worse. They're too poisonous, so withdraw them.

How can I put it, I feel that the factor of Qian Renxue has been ignored I have read a book about the protagonist Xue Beng, Kun Peng who is innately full of soul power in the awakening of the martial soul. The protagonist's cheat is to eavesdrop on Qian Renxue's thoughts. Although the plug-ins are a bit bad, the overall settings are still acceptable. Before awakening, he had been favoring Qian Renxue. After awakening, he appeared to be close to Qian Renxue. He was still favoring Qian Renxue and had a strong desire to survive. The author's protagonist setting, Qian Renxue's appearance in the early stage was pitiful, and her favorability was not much improved. It feels like the author has thought too well of Qian Renxue. Her purpose of going undercover is to steal the country and prove herself to Bibi Dong. A genius who is not related by blood will threaten her plan to steal the country, and the protagonist does not try to gain her favor. He has always been Long Aotian, so he is not afraid of being killed. The protagonist's template is very good, but the factor of Qian Renxue is not solved, which looks quite embarrassing. The template of Long Aotian, the protagonist of the book, has loopholes in his background, and the author has not solved this loophole yet. It's like there is a time bomb next to your house and you failed to conquer Qian Renxue. The remote control of this time bomb (Qian Renxue's heart) is not on your side, which makes you feel embarrassed. It's not that Long Aotian's genius flow is not good, the two problems that need to be solved in the early stage of Douluo fan fiction are all about the shameless assassination of titled Douluo you One is that if you are not Shrek's dog-licking nanny flow, you beat Tang San, what should I do if Tang Dachui shamelessly attacks you. Most of them are passable super thugs with system plug-ins or ferocious beast-level thugs from the Soul Beast Forest, otherwise this problem cannot be solved in the early stage. The other is that when Tiandou is too dazzling, Qian Renxue will usually recruit people. At this time, most fan fiction will be ambiguous or directly start to attack Qian Renxue. This solves the problem of Qian Renxue asking Titled Douluo to assassinate you. In general, this book by the author kept me wandering around, risking my life, and it was very embarrassing to watch. Overall, Qian Renxue thinks very well.

The martial spirit should have been beaten to death as soon as it came out.

Why don't you come to Chaos 36th Grade Qinglian Martial Spirit? The little Douluo Continent can awaken the Immortal Sword and be drunk.

Dugu Yan refused to accept it, and there was still a little ambiguity in the early stage. The relationship between the two was written several times. On the contrary, the emotional line with Shui Bing'er felt too fast, and there was no interaction between the two.

Bing Yuexue? The heroine Qian Renxue, Shui Bing'er Shui Yue'er?

He gives you medicine when we meet him. It poisons me. I would like to call him a boy who gives money.

It's outrageous to see a 100,000-year-old soul bone. Doesn't the author know how precious a 100,000-year-old soul bone is? The Tiandou royal family has no titled Douluo to enshrine, and the 100,000-year-old soul bones have long been robbed by others. Even if they were not robbed, they would not be absorbed by a 6-year-old child. Although the original book says that there is no level limit for absorbing soul bones, I feel that the huge energy brought by a 100,000-year-old soul bone is not something that a 6-year-old and level 10 soul warrior can absorb, and even if the skills are absorbed, they cannot be used.

I wish you all a happy new year, all the best, and all your wishes come true.

I recommend again that the female protagonists are Bibi Dong, Liu Erlong, Zhu Zhuqing, Tang Yuehua and Bo Saixi.

The skill of that hundred thousand year soul bone belt is outrageous, can it be condensed into a hammer? It's not the soul bone of the hammer soul beast, and the protagonist's martial soul is not a hammer, so how can it condense into a hammer? Unless the protagonist seizes the inheritance of the Haotian Sect, this will be a poisonous point.

Female protagonist: Zhu Zhuqing😃😃😃