Players and Lackeys Everywhere

I see that more and more readers have also discovered the problem of the protagonist. The first one or two hundred chapters of the game, the players, the society, and the background are all useless. In fact, it feels like writing two books one after another. The second half is just about a cool article with a very good IQ and a good supporting role. It is not because the author is not good at writing, but because the villain creation is very failed. But in fact, setting this thing, such as traveling to a new world, this setting, a good setting, a magical world in itself, the various novel experiences that you will encounter in this world, and the magical imaginations, are also very important components of the story, so wonderful settings cannot be given up easily, otherwise there should be no one from the beginning. In fact, I have seen several other books by the author that are similar. They are very good in the early stage, and then the setting starts to get messy. I want to write a little bit, and I can't control the storyline and running accounts, and the main line is unclear. I feel like the author, the literary The writing is excellent, the setting is excellent, and the story can be told, but the long-term thinking is disordered and the story is incomplete. It is rare. This difference, I can barely make a metaphor, maybe, is the difference between the author of a good book and a storyteller who can tell stories, right? Maybe the metaphor is not right. At first I thought I had found a second magical book similar to the Super God Mechanic. It was really fascinating. Until chapter 300, 400... But it didn't happen. It was missing a wonderful story and telling a complete story. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I have followed many chapters and I have stopped the loss in time. It is estimated that the author will not finish the book. Judging from the comment area, many people feel the awkwardness in the later stage. It is estimated that the author will also restart.

The protagonist's IQ is online, the settings are interesting, and updates are timely. It's worth buying.

This book is very enjoyable to read. The protagonist is decisive in killing and not trying to be a bitch. I like such a protagonist who is so unpretentious.

Hold on, author, and show your style of writing unlimited interpretations! Don't reach your peak right after your debut. You have writing skills and ideas. You can write whatever you want and it's v4. Money, do you still need money? All you need is a novel to prove yourself and you can make a lot of money.      ，，，，

The book is very good and the protagonist is very dark, but there is a plot at the end that I really don't like. The protagonist captures a fox demon with a high level of cultivation, plans to breed her, and then make her children into products for sale. IMHO, passed.

The front is fine. It was changed later. The more I look at it, the more confused it becomes. The supporting characters are all childish. Why has it become an assembly line? A saint from a sect has become stupid and sweet after following you. Isn't this funny?

Now it looks messy, so I deleted the book and re-added it to the bookshelf. Starting from chapter 40, it seems smooth. This plot has been changed. You were reading the original cache before deleting the book, so it is not smooth. It will be fine if you add the bookshelf plot again

I feel a little bit reluctant to let go, the pig's feet are not cold enough, is there any point in saving the female character so many times in the early stage? Since you are going for a special style, don't be too cliché.

This book is beyond imagination. I read it all in one go. The first 40 chapters have very toxic settings at first glance, but I ignored them and continued reading. It was fun all the way.

The book is a good book, but the protagonist is too clever and clever, and has a weak sense of empathy. Moreover, the protagonist seems to have no emotions. Everything is for profit and becoming stronger. People have to have feelings, otherwise would they still be human?

As long as you write a book, I will always support you

So are there any new books, or have I changed my vest?

All ordered. Looking for similar works. Strategies are still invincible. Hearts are still dark. The darker the better.

I stayed up all night to read it. It's rare to find a good book in this book shortage. The feeling of strategizing between the protagonist entering and leaving the capital was extremely enjoyable to watch.

I don't know why this book isn't popular. It doesn't make sense. It's much better than most on this list. The IQ, plot, and writing are online.

It's a lot whiter than the previous works, and not very rigorous. The protagonist is ridiculously smooth, so it's a self-titled novel, right?

The author's strongest point is his first book "Unrestricted Interpretation".

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Why is this index still falling?

Are there any new books? This book has been finished a long time ago and I haven't waited for your new book yet.

It feels like a poisonous spot. It was a stepping stone in the early stage and it was used again in the middle stage. It clicked and it clicked again. It was really boring. I looked through the chapter names and the personality of the host in the comment area and it was still bad. All I was left with was a silly, sweet vase personality? . . . It feels like the author, in order to increase his combat power in the later period, changed all the early characters into minor roles, and then wanted to wash away the important characters around the protagonist and then kill the girl.

I suspect that I am writing chapters of a new book. I will write a little bit every few days. I will be able to fish when the new book is released.

Aren't you going to cum for me? ! ! ! ! ! !

Lao Krypton says but writes ✌️🤓👌

Writing a book? Or did you change the place to write the book?

Does anyone know if this author has any other accounts?

Only a few chapters, a few minutes gone, see you next week