The Reputation of the Sword Will Never Fade Away

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Dear friends who have passed by, would it be better if this book started with this version? Shenzhou Continent, Shenzhou Calendar Nine Nine Ninety-Nine Years. Today is the day when the Chess, Music and Sword Sect of the Great Qin Dynasty in the North accepts disciples. At this time, it was Zhang Dangren's turn to test whether he had the qualifications to practice. Ding! The spirit-detecting stone did not light up. Elder Wang of the Qi Le Jian Sect in charge of spirit testing said regretfully to Zhang Dangren: "I'm sorry, kid. You have no spiritual roots and cannot practice. Go down the mountain early." The disciples of the Qi Le Jian Sect in charge of the spirit testing site asked Zhang Dangren to go down the mountain quickly. "Impossible! I was born with double-vein loops, and they are the unique unicorn arms! How can it be impossible to practice? Old Wang, Wang Quanzhong, why don't you try again?" Zhang Dangren was full of disbelief, tried his best to explain, and was unwilling to go down the mountain. Elder Wang shook his head helplessly: "Another crazy one, drag him away quickly!" When the disciples of the Qi Le Jian Sect dragged Zhang Dangren away, they still muttered: "You are such a good kid. How dare you call Elder Wang by his first name? That means Elder Wang doesn't want to argue with you..." After leaving the mountain gate, the Qi Le Jian Sect disciple gave Zhang Dangren a big thumbs up. Zhang Dangren didn't pay much attention to it, thinking to himself: Damn it, the apprenticeship failed! This road is blocked, and no one in the world knows me now. How can I sneak into the inner sect of Qi Le Jian Sect? That's right, Zhang Dangren was reborn. In his previous life, Zhang Dangren was a great monk of the Twelve Realms who was known as Jiazi Sword Immortal. His wife, Wang Yuanxue, held a high position as the head of the Qi Le Sword Sect. She was as beautiful as a flower and gave birth to a daughter Zhang Jiayu. It can be said that he has a happy family. But Zhang Dangren left his wife and daughter behind just for the sake of the human race, and insisted on going his own way and died in the war between the human race and the demon race. Exchange the ultimate limit with the Demon Flame Lord for one. His body was collected by the Confucian Confucian Temple and placed in the Martyrs Building of the Confucian Temple for the world to admire and learn from this kind of character. Apart from that, Zhang Dangren got nothing. After his death, the war between the demons and humans continued. His death can be said to be meaningless. Tian Lian could see that he was unexpectedly reborn. Now he just wants to live an ordinary life with his wife and daughter. But if you can't enter the inner gate of Qilejian Sect, how can you see your wife, explain to her and apologize to her. This is a problem. Zhang Dangren remembered that his daughter often went to Gu'an Street to play, and decided to wait at the entrance of Gu'an Street. If my daughter wants to go down the mountain to play, this is the place she must pass. Father and daughter are connected, she will definitely believe that he is her father. After waiting for seven or eight days, my daughter did not show up. Zhang Dangren is almost in despair. Could it be that Zhang Dangren, the swordsman of Jiazi, has no chance to meet his wife Wang Yuanxue in this life? At this time, a crisp voice came into Zhang Dangren's ears: "Gee, brother Xi Yu~ Don't be like this, it's so itchy..."

I clicked here after seeing the storytelling video on Bilibili. After a cursory glance, I figured out the main thread of this book: The conflict between the protagonist's past life hero and the grassroots in this life, In the future, it may escalate to the conflict between the protagonist's personal interests and the interests of the human race. Although the setting of reincarnation in the article is old-fashioned, it is well used and very dramatic. It's just that it's not used well in this book. The reason is that we failed to go further. You wrote about the identity and deeds of the protagonist in his previous life, and then, with a sudden change of writing, you wrote that the protagonist was taken to Longhu Mountain in this life, and gradually unlocked the secret of his life experience. It seems that the ins and outs of buying and selling are clearly explained, and it also supports a world background, but in fact it means that nothing is written. Since writing a fairy tale is about letting your protagonist fight against fate and break the rules. Since you set up such a big contradiction for him, why didn't you write it, and instead used so many trivial plots to cover up the main contradiction? Let me sort out my thoughts for you, 1. The wild boy was forcibly taken to Longhu Mountain for practice by the elders. Contradiction: Ordinary qualifications are treated with the highest standards. Character design: Showing the contradiction of the thin boy being filial but rebellious. 2. Write about the contradiction between the thin boy and the environment, and the contradiction with his classmates, foreshadowing. 3. The sect was in an uproar if he refused to admit his master, the thin boy. Then he was told about his past life identity and Longhushan's plan to awaken his memory. 4. The thin boy met his parents, Xiaoxue, the battlefield between humans and demons, and the saint. No matter what, it seemed that he would be appointed to have his memory wiped, but at the last moment, he ran away with his sword. 5,

Why do you write so many words?

Test the Poison, After a cursory glance, the writing is okay, but the character names are too difficult to pronounce, and you need to calm down and read to understand. The protagonist is not a time traveler, and there is no system, so I can't watch it at all.