Start Opening an Internet Cafe from the World of Naruto

Otsutsuki Hagoromo's addiction to Internet cafes, is it Otsutsuki's sorrow or his moral decay🐶

It feels like the writing is getting better and better, and it reminds me of a certain successful fan fiction. The author found that the plot was becoming increasingly weak, so he immediately changed and focused on character description and characterization. . . I think the author can learn from it and write more plots related to the main characters; A few other suggestions, just my personal thoughts: The title and plot of this book are all related to DNF, so the crowd it attracts must be mostly between the post-80s and post-95s, so subsequent new games can be written around the preferences of this age group, and it is best not to have unpopular games. If you don't choose a genre well at one stage, the loss rate of readers will be huge; I don't know what your outline is like. Yes, but if I write, I will write DNF as the main game, and other games can be used as sub-games. Enter other games, and the benefits obtained in them will be reflected in the dungeon, which is equivalent to a copy of DNF. Otherwise, it will be one game at a time. If I keep writing, it is likely to collapse; Of course, this is just my idea. I rarely comment. It is rare to see a novel with a relatively suitable theme and writing style. I really want to make it better and better~ I have unknowingly made it so verbose, the author forgives me

There are two reasons why Naruto does not turn black. The first is that Naruto can sense the malice of others, so he pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. Over time, he really becomes a pig. The second type is Asura's chakra brainwashing. The reason is reflected in many events in the original work. Any blackened person can have your mind twisted by Naruto's will. No matter how ridiculous Naruto's words are, for example, Nagato even killed Jiraiya, and his will was twisted by Naruto with just a few words, such as Obito, Sasuke, and many, many more.

Aizen is not only strong in the mirror, the key is his mind.

I'm new to writing books, you can tell me anything you want.

I feel that it is better to have no heroine. The protagonist only needs to be a tool to create the game. There is no need to describe too much. The excitement of the content can be filled directly with what happened between the anime protagonist and the Internet cafe.

Then the rich man in the Land of Naruto has a laptop, and those doing research in Konoha also have desktop computers.

Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, DNF is like a secret realm, there are no time travellers, some natives found out after entering that there are opportunities and dangers, they explore on their own and lead a different life

Is there just one dungeon game in an Internet cafe? Then don't call it an Internet cafe.

The problem is, when I saw Chapter 42, the author basically didn't write about the plot direction of Naruto, it was all about games, so it doesn't really count as a Naruto fanfic.

Money, the entire ancient dynasty could not afford a modern aircraft carrier. . The entire United States in the 21st century cannot afford an interstellar-era space battleship. . . Money is not simply precious metal. Money is only as valuable as your fist. It must be of use value. Just the weird feudal era of Naruto. Those nobles lost all their money and only had a small amount of money. There is no stable industrial output at all. Normal logic should go bankrupt early.

CS doesn't write at all. Why did you add that game?

Open worldview allows the worldviews of Pirates and Naruto to communicate with each other. Naruto has so many miserable children. Let Whitebeard collect them.

It is not recommended to buy Dragon Ball. In the later stage of Dragon Ball, stars will explode at every turn. Not to mention the technical content, the power level alone is basically 75 and above.

Naruto has a computer

I don't play dungeons. I've read twenty chapters and haven't gotten to CS yet. I feel sleepy. I stopped reading and gave up.

Why is there no dragon rider in every DNF novel? Although Dragon Rider is a bit more sewer, it is still the same fixed-damage profession as Crazy Fighter.

The writing style is too naive, and the characters in the original drama are not well controlled, and it feels like reading a running account.

I want to know if people from the Pirate World go to play in the beautiful water world, will they get phobia of the deep sea?

Starting from the dividing line in Chapter 64, the author's writing skills have obviously improved. In the previous 63 Chapters, people without Poison Resistance would not be able to proceed at all. It's not that the plot setting is bad, but the previous writing is very poor! There will be progress later

I just felt like there was something wrong with the strength setting! DNF is a bit too much to have the strength of a general at level 30 or above, let alone those who are strong in their own right. For some who were weak in the early stage, it is a bit too much to have the strength of a general at level 30 or above, and they don't have any good equipment to support them! In terms of damage, a general is almost equal to level 45 or the strength after awakening! After all, one has no cooling and the other has cooling!

The writing is pretty good and the progress is obvious. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I have found the same book. They update it faster than you. I ask you to update it once a day. Now it's better. You're stuck.

Why are there only dungeons in the introduction?

I always feel like I've seen the same thing somewhere

I was given CS at the beginning, but the result was never written, so what's the point of giving CS to the protagonist?

To be honest, the DNF is too exaggerated. There is no way I can compare to Hokage even after sleeping. Moreover, I have not awakened even after reading ninety chapters. Each character is only over thirty levels, and this book only has so many chapters.

There is a saying that this book is better than the one next door that focuses on the pirate poisonous milk powder. The main plot of the poisonous milk powder is already quite good. The author handles the part about the Lord of the City of Light very well, and it is not a brainless recommendation.

It's still the same worlds. Is there any world with less than 100 episodes?

It feels like a running account, front