Hedao

Overall, this is a good fairy tale. The power system, level division and advancement are all written just right, and the plot progression is also very comfortable. However, there are constant small poisonous points and inappropriate wording, which requires readers to have some poison resistance.

I have read several of Lao Duan's books, and I especially like "He Dao". It can be seen that Lao Duan wrote with great care and skill, the plot is slow and not procrastinating, and the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are well developed. I hope that Lao Duan, while taking care of his body, can occasionally burst out a few times to comfort the book friends' enthusiasm that has nowhere to put it!

Lao Duan, take care of yourself, don't force yourself, if you still have breath, get up and update quickly.

This book is well written by Lao Duan. It is like a biography of a mortal cultivating immortals. In the later stage, he becomes a god and becomes platinum in one book.

The old author turned to writing fairy tales, and he wrote them very well. In the past, Wudi's novels were old classics, but the more they were written in urban contexts, the worse they got. Common routines, but the writing style and details show the mastery of the veteran author. Support a wave

I will wait for Lao Duan to update to chapter 500 before reading, otherwise it will not be enough. Although I have not read the book, I give Lao Duan a few monthly passes every month.

Another 10,000-word chapter. It seems that as the protagonist's strength has skyrocketed, Lao Duan's updates have also greatly improved, which is a good thing!

It's well written, but it's a bit lacking in updates. You're a hard worker.

First first

After reading one chapter, I'm still a little confused.

It's well written, I'll keep following it, keep it up 😊

It's better to be simple. Write it like numbers. A secret realm is written as months.

It's not enough to watch at all. Please update more, I can't stand it.

Let's take a blind guess at the plot: Jian Zheng came forward, gave an explanation, and saved the prince. The Qin family argued hard and maintained the dignity of the family. What happened here, when Elder Jiang heard about it, he disturbed his mood and delayed the breakthrough. Elder Jiang put pressure on the prison, gathered people, and secretly ambush Zi Ling; when the camera turned, Zi Ling had entered the ancestral land, strengthened the power of the dragon vein, and had three magical powers at his fingertips. Later, he was recruited by the imperial court and went to the southwest to quell the rebellion. During this period, he encountered the Yin evil channel again, and the strength of the four golden corpses broke through, and they were able to resist the quasi-jindan. At this time, the fat meat was delivered to the mouth. A group of great mystic masters gathered by Jian Zheng, hiding their heads and showing their tails, fought in a certain mountain range. Zi Ling pretended to be a pig and eat a tiger. With all his strength, the black mist came out and defeated them one by one. Waiting for Jian Zheng to arrive, no one's body was left. Various storage rings, and encounter clues of chance on the golden elixir. After Jian Zheng returned to the Tianyan Sect, two flowers bloomed, one for each: 1. Elder Jiang broke through the golden elixir, and the younger brother and the cheap master who had been recruited by the Tianlei Realm before could be used, and they could fight openly and secretly in many chapters; 2. Elder Jiang was one step behind in the golden elixir realm, so he assassinated Elder Jiang with the extremely fast writing method of Lao Duan's plot, and then let the cheap master's lineage take charge of the Tianyan Sect. After various resources were used, the plot of Jiuxuan Mountain...

The writing behind it is not very good

It's not enough, it's not enough, it's not enough to watch one picture every day!

Very well written! Updates are a bit lacking! More updates at critical times

I read every one of Lao Duan's works. This time it was also very good, with 13 votes for recommendation every day. Hope there will be more updates every day.

[Summary of the current state of progress] This book is currently divided into three areas: spiritual training, qi training, and martial arts training. 1. The way of the soul: Concentration - Leaving the body - Possession - Expulsion of objects (early, middle and late stages) - Distraction (early, middle and late stages) - Seizing the body (early, middle and late stages) - Manifesting the Saint - Thunder Tribulation - Immortal In the book, it is said: Expelling objects is equivalent to the realm of a martial artist, distraction is equivalent to the realm of a great martial artist, and seizing the body is equivalent to the realm of a master. 2. Martial Arts: Qi and Blood Realm (muscle training, skin training) - Strength Realm (Condensation, Movement, Transformation) - Bone Refining Realm (early, middle and late stages) - Zang Refining Realm (small, medium and large) - Marrow Refining Realm It is described in the book: The skin training layer is divided into cowhide layer and iron layer, and the Qi and blood realm is called a martial artist, the strength realm is called a martial artist, the bone refining realm is called a great martial artist, the viscera refining realm is called a martial arts master, and the marrow refining realm is called an innate grandmaster, also known as a martial saint. 3. The way to practice Qi: Eat Qi and unblock the meridians - remove waste and retain Qing - take the truth - True force (early, middle and late stages) - True Yuan (early, middle and late stages) - Fa Yuan (small, medium and large) - Thunder quenching (small, medium and large) - Golden elixir Among them, it is written in the book: Before taking the truth, they were generally called Qi Practicing Warlocks, the realm of True Power was called Qi Practicing Master, the realm of True Yuan was called Great Qi Practicing Master, the realm of Fa Yuan was called Qi Practicing Master, and the realm of thunder quenching was called Qi Practicing Master. A Qi Practicing Master is equivalent to the strength of a martial arts master, a Great Qi Practicing Master is equivalent to a Great Martial Arts Master, a Qi Practicing Master is equivalent to a Martial Arts Master, and a Qi Practicing Xuan Master is equivalent to an Innate Grand Master. 4. Differentiation of exotic beasts: Grade 1 - Grade 2 - Grade 3 - Grade 4 (lower, middle, upper) - Grade 5 (lower, middle, upper) - Grade 6 (lower, middle, upper) According to the book: Grade 1, Grade 2 and Grade 3 are equivalent to powerful martial arts masters, Grade 4 is equivalent to great martial arts master, then Grade 5 is equivalent to martial arts master, and Grade 6 is equivalent to Xiantian Grandmaster (Martial Saint). 5. The classification of corpse refining: black corpse - iron corpse - bronze corpse (low level, middle level, high level) - silver corpse (low level, middle level, high level) - gold corpse - heavenly corpse The iron corpse is equivalent to the martial apprentice, the bronze corpse is equivalent to the martial master, the silver corpse is equivalent to the great martial artist, the gold corpse is equivalent to the grandmaster, and the heavenly corpse is equivalent to the innate grandmaster (martial saint). 6. Weapon classification: magic weapon - magic weapon ✌️ If there is anything wrong, I hope you can tell me. If you have any additions, you can discuss them together below. Thank you.

I have read more than a hundred chapters. To be honest, this book is okay, but some plots are too outrageous. The book also says that there are very few people with spiritual roots in the world, but if you look at the people around the protagonist, basically they have spiritual roots, and they are all unique spiritual roots. Even the protagonist's mother has spiritual roots. I really can't stand it when I see this.

It's another classic scene where the protagonist is of low cultivation, and the personal maid has a peerless beauty, and happens to meet an expert who forcibly accepts a disciple, and tells the protagonist to get out, and then the protagonist puts down his bold words: Thirty Years in Hedong and Thirty Years in Hexi. This plot is really disgusting. I have watched it tens of thousands of times. Did the author write the manuscript in 2011 and then wait for 10 years to publish it? Otherwise, how could it be so vicious? I heard that there is a plot in the back where the little maid is forcibly married to someone else. I can still tolerate some of the old tricks of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but when I saw the disciples, I really couldn't stand it. I really admire other book friends who can survive this hurdle👍👍👍

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Did the author go astray? ? What is the protagonist's purpose in creating a force? ? Just to show how awesome you are, you can pull up a group of people by yourself. At present, it seems that the protagonist pulls a group of people, but the people below do not provide any help. Isn't the purpose of creating a force to make cultivation more convenient? Someone can help to do things, instead of the protagonist doing everything.

I just can't figure it out. You are a time traveler, or you are a person whose soul has been influenced by a vicious and vicious old devil. You actually exposed yourself to Liu Xiaoqiang for the sake of Liu Xiaoqiang, who you have a better relationship with. Where was your caution in front of you? Where are you in front of me? Even if you just say, I'll help you if I succeed in my cultivation, that's all! The problem itself is still on thin ice! And if you have money to buy a pill for others, you might as well spend some money on your old weaver! The older batch of authors are all the same. It's as if they can't write books without some friendship!

What is difficult to accept now about this book is that at the beginning, the protagonist was careful and cautious in doing things, and he was not very decisive in doing things. At this stage of development, you have started to crazily recruit younger brothers. You can accept them as long as you accept them. The problem is that when you recruit younger brothers, you are crazy about investing without asking for anything in return. Let me ask you: a child from a mountain village has a small family fortune through his own efforts, and then he will help someone he knows and has no big friendship with without being able to repay him? Everyone is the same, and these people can't provide any help to the protagonist. Don't say that you have to invest a lot in the early stage to get rewarded in the later stage. You yourself are brought out by poverty. You work hard to make a small fortune and then give out your own resources. Help some people who are not related to you without caring about the consequences. It is really funny and more and more pretentious. It's a pity that I gave up on the amazing things I did in the early stage.

After reading about a hundred chapters, I found it a bit awkward. It's not the plot, but the dialogue. It's best not to say the dialogue that is loyal to the protagonist or focused on the protagonist without the context of the scene. It would be better to describe it with narration or psychological activities. It's just a suggestion. The plot is still good.

The quality of this novel could only be considered average 10 years ago 😒

Poison, poison, poison! Even if it's a bit interesting, I can't stand it anymore. You, a worldly woman, don't enjoy any filial piety from you. Not only do you bring burdens to you and increase the burden of life, but you also have to accumulate all the money in your family. What's the point of your plot? It seems that the protagonist is a virgin? Or does it appear that the protagonist is affectionate? Then just don't be reborn and just write! Or did you create a persona of an ALS patient? Go and see the vice president of JD. Com about ALS. What did he say? Ever since I was diagnosed with ALS, my friends have stopped communicating with each other, and my relatives have gradually become distant. I don't believe it. After experiencing such a life, what kind of friendship can there be?

As long as women don't appear in this book, the protagonist is normal. The book is also normal. Once a woman appears, his brain is abnormal. Serious martial arts training becomes a dog-licking novel.

The beginning of this book is actually quite good, but as soon as friends, brothers, sisters, and women appear, it turns sour. It's the same old story of making friends and gangs, chickens and dogs ascending to heaven. Although it's quite passionate, but after reading a few of the author's books, you'll feel that the protagonist is actually a pseudo-protagonist tool-man who only serves the brothers, friends, relatives, and women around him. When I turn around, I almost forget the name of the protagonist, but I will definitely remember that the teammates around the pseudo-protagonist tool-man are 100% victorious!