The Opening Song Was Duplicitous and Shocked the Concert!

Haven't watched it yet! I looked at the catalog and there was a big bowl of noodles! Are you so stubborn?

If you can't stand it, just don't sign with the company. After all, most of the systematic people are flying solo, but they don't even have a team. The agent has been for dozens of chapters and it's useless. He has caught a criminal gang and can make people hack. I can't stand it. It's just a huge poisonous book.

I gritted my teeth and read Chapter 10, and died of poison...

The first part is pretty cool, but the second part is grinding and grinding, the rhythm is dragging, and the holes dug cannot be filled well. It feels like writing a running account, and there is no sense of refreshment.,,

After reading the first chapter, I don't like system articles. Maybe I've read too much. I still like system articles that have no sense of existence. Personal panels and other things also don't feel immersive. It gives me the feeling of a game character. I can only add it to your collection.

The beginning was very loose. You sold a song for five bucks to that female idol. I don't have a problem with it because you borrowed her territory. So if you sell it to Jaylen, you still want to sell it for only 50,000 yuan, which is outrageous. Are you really selling it like cabbage? ? ? The agent is hired casually. Do you understand the role of the agent? Agents don't want connections? Don't look at the resources? I really laughed

I didn't like the main character at the beginning, a third-rate star cheating on someone, so I just read this chapter.

Shen Nong is dead, so he has to burn paper. 😓

Absolutely awesome, I can't stand the second chapter anymore

The brain circuit is a bit surprising, with a lot of ancient poison points, especially the plot development...

I quit the first chapter and can see the rest. You guys are so awesome.

After two chapters, I was persuaded to quit. At the beginning, I didn't even think about singing well, but I already planned to sell songs. If you don't rush, who will?

I've read about 10 chapters and it's too rough. But now it's free. You have to make corrections when it's published. And the author doesn't even correct it after writing? There are a lot of typos and wrong sentences. After all, you are not a fool. You must be moderate in a good article! Focus on the protagonist, but not too central, haters! The navy, the rival drama, the protagonist is coming back, the previous company! The ex-girlfriend prevented the protagonist from returning, and why the company terminated the contract. Write down the reasons for the conflict, but am I just a new author? That's understandable, come on! I also tried to write, but after writing less than 10,000 words, I couldn't continue. I felt that my outline was not good enough, so I gave up. I still admire those authors who wrote hundreds of thousands, millions, or tens of millions of words, and cheer for my dreams.

Chapter 1 I feel like this song is really low.

I was embarrassed after reading the first chapter. Brothers, please withdraw first. Come on, author, think carefully 😥

It seemed good to me at first, but as soon as I saw the penetration, I was attracted to it and immediately persuaded me to leave.

I originally wanted to criticize the author, but so many people have complained, and I feel embarrassed to do so. I can only wish the author to write more seriously in the next book, and to strengthen his writing outline by reading more popular works.

, If the author can see it, first of all, your book has no theme, salty fish is not salty fish, it is not chic enough, and the output is not generous enough , the world is dark, corpses are everywhere, on the city tower, Emperor Xin, standing with a sword, laughs loudly, the lonely human emperor, the most prosperous one, how can it be that the sky is full of gods and Buddhas, the people of Zuowu human race, read it a few times, do you have a picture,,, you have no sense of picture in the whole process, Second, you probably don't even know what you wrote. This is a fatal flaw. Or just use your name. Don't play with inverted characters. It doesn't hit the heart directly. For example, Mr. He, Huang Xiaochu, Jay Chou, or completely ignored. In short, there is no theme outline and no plot direction. Third, you don't know what you wrote at all. I'm not very good at typing, so that's it =, =

At the beginning of the concert, the singing was duplicitous? No soundtrack or playing guitar and singing by yourself? Don't you feel embarrassed or uncomfortable singing this song dryly at a concert?

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Plot written by primary school students. Assembly line

Come on and write. As an old bookworm, it's not bad. I've read a lot of books. At least this can make me want to read more.

It's rubbish. After reading three chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

I can't stand the second chapter 😰

What rubbish is written? The rubbish assistant is so disgusting.

Reading the comments makes reading a lot more interesting!

You can tell just by looking at the title of the book that it's not good. If it hadn't been for the introduction of poison three or four times, you wouldn't want to go in. It's better to read the table of contents than to read the book. You can know the content just by looking at the table of contents. The author should work hard to improve his writing skills.

I watched a video on Station B and said something very good. "Tsundere" has withdrawn from the environment. Women play straight and men play rough. Writing novels is similar. You have to write it well. If I didn't say it but you write it like this, you will have something to say. I won't talk about what my ex-girlfriend wrote. But if you write Li Lulu as your girlfriend or wife, I can still understand it, but if you write it as a part-time job, I can't understand it. The author tells the truth that you wrote it like this out of self-interest. You should either speed up the completion of this book or cut it. Think about it carefully and write the next one.

If you persist until Chapter 90, you really can't do it anymore, so I forcefully persuade you to quit! Looking at the social environment in which a single female protagonist is to be written Why is this ambiguous with various female characters It feels like it is forcibly adding drama.