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One problem with Yakuza-ryu novels is that they require extremely high standards from their authors. Gokudou-ryu highlights the word "pleasure". This kind of pleasure is not the kind of being beaten with blood and then inexplicably bursting out to fight back, but like Toguro Ludi's "Out of respect for you, I will use 45% to fight you." Many authors just read some categories It was like writing a novel as soon as I got the feeling for it. In the early stage, the writing was like diarrhea, but after reaching 200,000 words, it gradually became stuck because the excitement was gone and there was no complete outline for him to fill in. To continue, he could only rely on suppressing the pig's feet. In this way, a large number of readers will be lost, and everyone's understanding of the Yakuza style is different. Some people like to kill over and over again, while others like to crush. This makes the author not know how to choose to balance. As a result, many Yakuza-ryu are unable to advance, which has led to many jokes, such as level jokes. Without an outline, you can't open a new map, so you can only suppress the protagonist's level, so there are all kinds of half-steps, fake, false, the first level of the peak in the early stage, the great perfection in the later stage, this kind of annoying grading. Therefore, some people think that the threshold for Ji Dao Ryu is low and it is easy to write in the early stage. However, this simplicity is limited to tens of thousands of words and hundreds of thousands of words in the early stage. For example, everyone likes the character Lu Laomo who relies solely on his own efforts in the novel "Go Away", but they don't have deep memories of the Eternal Sword Master who is also a member of the Yakuza style. It is because the level of the Eternal Sword Master card has been stuck for a while, and the books after Eternal Sword Master have been upgraded more smoothly, so they are more popular. For example, the current one does not require the Green Lotus Weihe Beast. Therefore, I suggest that if the author really wants to write about Yakuza-ryu, he should not worry about anything else and must carefully lay out the cool points. Otherwise, haha, it's weird that it's popular. You can't blame the readers, because you said it, but if you don't like it when you write it, how can you make people spend money to support it?

Except for "Go away", none of the books in this type of book has a good ending. It's either a eunuch or a bad one.

Judging from my experience in the weird and popular novels that have been popular for many years, the horror and tension in the early stage can attract a large number of readers. For example, I read a strange world a while ago. The protagonist's IQ was scolded by readers, but there are still many people who insist on reading. One of the great advantages is that the author has put a lot of effort into creating a weird and suspenseful atmosphere. Every weird event can make readers continue reading with fear and curiosity, and it has attracted a lot of readers in the early stage. And I read the beginning of this book. Since it is a weird genre, the horror and weirdness is the path you should focus on. It is not a mortal cultivating immortality or a fantasy novel. It is my first time to come into contact with ghosts. The appearance and portrayal of the mist slaves did not leave much impression on me. For a woman, is it weird to scream Jie Jie twice? Obviously not. The key point is to portray his image so that the reader can have a more vivid image. When a paper man appears later, you will really be a paper man... Can you describe it below? For example, the paper man looks like he is smiling but not smiling, and adding some blush to his cheeks is a bit interesting. I think it also needs the support of the entire environment. When encountering dangers during the day and night, there must be more atmosphere at night. Even the inner narration of the protagonist is a way to enhance the atmosphere... Of course, everyone likes to read different things, and the author also has his own style of writing. You can't say that I am right, not to mention that I am a free prostitute. There are so many, boring and incomprehensible. Please feel free to comment if you have different opinions.

The author's writing is good, but the content made me confused and unclear. It's like writing without an outline. I just write wherever I think. There are many places that feel wrong no matter how I read them, and it makes me uncomfortable.

I just finished reading it after reading it. How do I put it? It's very blunt. If you have the patience, you can read it. The plot is okay, that's it.

Not bad, ready to fully order. Just two requirements, don't stud horses and don't kill innocent people indiscriminately.

I feel like the writing can at least be a little popular

Is there any Yakuza-ryu with more than a million words?

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this, please update soon

If you add some flow, you'll become a bald donkey.

Building is being built on the first day of the new year. I wish all my friends peace and health in the new year and hope for success.

How much do you have a special liking for this broken knife? Why don't you get a new one or find a better one?

The world view, writing style, and characterization are all acceptable. Come on, author, I won't do it for nothing in the future.

I wonder if the protagonist's curse later can backfire on the caster and rob him of everything.

The writing is good, but the data is a mess!

I just want to ask when will the curse problem be completely solved?

Finished ordering, go to bed😒

It feels okay, why are there so few people?

Take your time at first and just check whether the author has finished writing a book before! No reward will be given to the author of The Eunuch