This Brave Man Carries the SSS Heaven Defying Device

As the saying goes, a single draw is a miracle, so I drew a piano today. Then I took out all the remaining entanglements and made another wind attribute. So my current configuration is Hey, it is obviously a pool of walnuts, but I can't draw walnuts. As a result, I freeze to death as soon as I go up the snowy mountain. ———————— 2021.11.16 It has been a few days since I drew the walnut, and now my team has become It's just that walnuts are hard to grow, and I only have the West Wind Spear

Hey hey

Hmph~

Although no one has joined the group so far, I still want to say that it is only for true fans~~ Come and encourage me, I can't even code anymore~~

Um... I feel like I'm behind the times, I can't understand these brain circuits at all, and I show friendship to a woman who violently opens the door and her origin is unknown. The key is that such a woman is still well-educated and competes without others' permission. It shows that the world is bad enough. I feel that the feudal society in the West is better than this, no matter how old you are. Maybe it's because I can't bring in two-dimensional vision.

It feels as enjoyable as watching anime, the writing is great! Come on!

I have ordered it all, and I have to say a few words. From the beginning, this book is still very good, but it gets worse as it goes on. The first is the main line of the book. Up to now, the book has more than two hundred chapters and 600,000 words, but the main line is still not very clear. It is too slow to get started. It really makes people unable to wait. Another aspect is the characterization. There are many two-dimensional characters appearing in this book, and there are only two or three main characters. However, I feel that there are no particularly impressive characters, or characters with particularly distinctive personality characteristics, especially the protagonist's character. The character is not well developed. It is recommended that the author write more stories, either passionate or sad, or work hard on the details and shape the image of the main characters from the specific plot. In addition, in terms of plot, it is indeed relaxing. It is so passionate that I can't see where the passion is... There are too many jokes and no real plot to strengthen the theme. It is really a bit tiring to read. The worldview framework is too big, there are too many two-dimensional worlds, but there is nothing particularly outstanding. Then there is the issue of plug-ins. The mobile phone is used as a plug-in... This is quite consistent with the two-dimensional world view, but it seems to be of no use, and the fun of this plug-in is not written at all. (Hot-blooded episode, hot-blooded episode!?) When I read this book, I just felt tired. The setting and world view are clearly so well created, and the author is very imaginative, but why... Oh, I can't describe it, it's so weird! ! ! It's really weird! ! ! I obviously have the motivation to read on, but why can't the next chapter reach the level I expected? There are a lot of character dialogues, all kinds of gags, and no good plot story. The more I read, the more tired I feel. You can't write a two-dimensional novel like this! ! ! The author doesn't want to write about revenge or rebirth, so he can only write about daily life. However, due to writing problems, he doesn't feel like he can write well about daily life. He might as well create a few passionate stories of his own. Of course, writing skills can be practiced, so take your time. I believe that two-dimensional writing is nothing more than an interesting and novel setting, a big enough imagination, and a story that is either secondary, passionate, or regrettable, and you can write a good book. But it is not limited to this. It should also have a good enough grasp of the plot and details. What attracts readers is usually not the big setting and world view, but often the specific details and plot. Finally, there is the emotional line... There is not much to say. There are no cliché love stories where the heroines and the protagonist have no life or death, and there are not many warm and slow daily plots. I just follow the protagonist everywhere, go there, go here... Alas, I feel that the emotional line is not well shaped. I hope the author can pay attention to it. The above is my personal opinion. If there is anything wrong, please correct me. Forgive me for being a little blunt. This is just me. Please be considerate.

Many of these comments are fake.

Really nice to look at. When I saw this article on the list before, I wondered why it was always there. I didn't have the patience before, and I didn't feel like it was good enough before I even finished reading a chapter. Look at this article again. Well. I saw the list a few days ago and saw a comment from a reader. The general idea is that the logic of "This brave man carries the SSS to defy the sky" is very good, it is the kind of plot that makes sense and comes naturally. I was hooked again. Out of control. I want to tell all new readers, don't think it's bad just because it's too long. It's a really good article. It's rare to see this kind of article anymore. The plot is good and the writing is good. Later it got even better. The world view is huge, and it can be seen that the author's literary quality is really high. I really learned a lot from reading this article. I like it! Anyway, I like it very much! (However, it actually seems a little weird when I read it. It may be due to a problem with my writing skills, but it's very impressive for a newcomer to write like this.)

How could an excellent book club not have an idiom building? We all build the building together, and I grab the sofa.

Dangdang, why haven't you opened a new book yet?

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I'll form the head. . . See what it feels like now. The combat power system is a bit confusing. This should be an invincible article, but sometimes I feel uncomfortable reading it. Sometimes I can't bring it in. There is a separation between the two-dimensional style and the daily style. The heroine's character is very two-dimensional, but sometimes her behavior is a bit like real life. To put it simply, the two-dimensional painting is not thorough, and the realism does not have the power of writing. I hope Dangdang won't scold me.