Douluo's True Body Becomes an Immortal

Is it written about Zhutianliu? You can't become an immortal in the Douluo world, you can only become a monk, but the lifespan of a monk is not long. If you are a fellow immortal and a god, you will have a long lifespan in the Douluo god. If you understand the skills and the like well, practice the rules and understand the rules, then the Douluo can't improve, so you can just break the void and change places.

Is the author going to change? Next, it depends on the author's writing skills. Tang San has some thoughts about the fairy grass. What will happen next? Looking forward to (๑˙ー˙๑)

The plot and setting really poisoned me

This plot is really poisonous to me

You see, when you get to Shrek, you become wiser. You can obviously steal the master, but you have to risk your life on the character of Tang San and his son? And I always feel like the author is going to give jelly grass to other people in Shrek. Is it my imagination?

Aren't you afraid of being killed and taking the treasure by trading Acacia Heartbroken Red with Tang San? Tang San was not a good bird. When he was apprenticed to Yu Xiaogang, he said that once he is a teacher, he will always be a father, but when Yu Xiaogang was poisoned in the Soul Hunting Forest, Tang San was worried that his secret would be exposed, but he had the idea of ​​​​killing people to silence him. The Tang Clan Kung Fu is Tang San's forbidden love. If you join the Tang Clan, it will be okay, otherwise.

In this book, I planned to write about a kind of path to immortality, without the involvement of a female protagonist. However, I saw many book friends saying that it would be monotonous and boring without a female protagonist. So I plan to add two female supporting characters later. The overall plot remains the same, but the change is a little more involved.

It's so damn poisonous. You gave the fairy grass to Shrek even though you knew the plot. It's so damn poisonous. It's a rubbish novel.

Good guy, look at this description, there is only level 7, haha, every college can't get it unless you have full soul power. Level 7 is good in all high-level colleges. It can be said to be a genius. If you work hard, you will be a genius among the top. The reborn master thinks that the others are just children, let alone adults. Not even a child can persevere. If you have talent and don't work hard, who can blame you?

Look at this picture

(Personal suggestion) I hope to skip the Shrek part quickly, after all, many people don't like this plot. As for the eye martial arts, as for the development direction, we can be bold and directly target the heavy pupils. Or try to evolve or integrate these things into the martial soul when you comprehend the rules later. After all, although Douluo Continent is a fantasy floor, it still has merits. For example, the relationship between martial spirits and people can be regarded as a natal magic weapon or a tool to prove the Tao. Soul rings usually have some elements or incomplete laws in them (probably😰) If this is the case, Douluo Continent should be the easiest place in the world to understand the laws and elements. ——Come on! I hope there will be no more eunuchs.

A common problem that Douluo fans cannot avoid If they grab the jelly grass and the plot is not arranged well, they will deliberately give the lovesickness to Tang San and Xiao Wu in some way, so that they can pass the plot smoothly. With this, the protagonist's body collapsed. You can let Tang San grab the jelly grass instead of grabbing it, but if you grab the jelly grass and then trade it or something, it doesn't fit your character. Someone in the comment area said it well, this is a life-threatening test of the character of Tang Ritian and his son. Forcibly giving or trading Lovesickness Red to Xiao Wu, the thief looked embarrassed. The rogue rabbit himself is not responsible for his own life. He insists on giving away his life. Why are you so embarrassed? In general, sending fairy grass to Xiao Wu and Master Bai who are not in his harem are some of the minefields in Douluo fan fiction that non-Shrek and the group camp cannot avoid. Whoever writes it will die, and the character will collapse. In fact, the plot of Shrek has to be forced, just cut off the beard in advance, save a cat halfway, teach Ning Rongrong in Soto City to teach her how to be a human being, and then fight the soul there myself, wouldn't it be wonderful? In the later stage, we need to focus on splitting up kittens in a room at the Rose Hotel. After Oscar has a crush on Ning Rongrong, he tells him Qibao Liuli's overall mate selection criteria. The other half must be of the attack type, and he didn't use his support. And his teachers all knew that they were taking advantage of him even if they didn't tell him. If you do this, the tiger and the sausage will not be washed. Xiao Wu could persuade her in advance not to go and talk about the pros and cons. It's best to listen to it and go back to the forest to stay. A rabbit can survive any storm in the future. If you don't listen, let her do it. It's none of your business if someone dies for love. Be ruthless and report it directly. Giving the Heartbroken Red to Xiao Wu and Master Bai has always been a flash point in the non-Shrek camp, and whoever touches it will die.

The introduction is so well written, but in fact, he still tortures Tang San and so on. He has said more than once that he will not control people casually, but it turns out that he is really not a human being when he is casual. Will he control people from two continents and force them to believe in him? Do you have any grudges between Tang Hao and you? Just kill him directly. If he doesn't leave, drive him away. Mental deterrence will be enough. And Tang San's Purple Qi. What you originally exchanged for meridians, Mysterious Heaven Technique and Immortal Grass knowledge, you must have secretly learned the Purple Demon Eye yourself, and then you absorbed what others cultivated. Is it wrong for people to hate you? For the method of exploding the ring, they directly carried out massacres, not to mention the people who killed Shrek later. In your eyes, if they don't go with you all the way, they should be damned. Isn't it right that they come to ask for fairy grass for no reason? In your eyes, they should be damned? Then you are still cultivating a shitty immortal, don't insult the immortal

The improvement was so drastic in the front, and the levels were lowered in the back, so I just gave in. Write less plots to reduce your intelligence!

Let's call it sending female Douluo away, Xiao Wu, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing didn't accept any of them, Oscar, Dai Mubai, Tang San hugged all the beauties back one by one.

I think the biggest problem with this book is the irrationality of Golden Finger. Elements are different from spiritual energy. It can be said that spiritual energy is very thin in Douluo Continent, otherwise it would not be a fantasy floor. We cannot treat the strong people in it as fools. This Golden Finger directly absorbs elements into the lungs, which is no different from swallowing metal. Adding elements to a soul ring can increase the life span. What's more, with so many martial souls, others can't see elements? Moreover, body training is all from the outside in. If you want to be special, most readers will not buy it.

The fairy grass here is indeed a big poison. The protagonist knows Xiao Wu's identity, Tang San's skills, Tang Hao and Ah Yin, and then wants to use this knowledge in exchange for the skills. This is very unreasonable. First of all, Tang San is unlikely to trade with you. To be honest, Xiao Wu is not as important to him as the Tang Sect at this time. Xiao Wu is not destined to die here. Besides, it is most likely that Tang Hao is right next to him, killing people and stealing goods. Besides, the protagonist knows Tang San's skills, Tang Hao's identity and Ah Yin are still alive. At this point, they can't let the protagonist leave. How can this be a deal? Isn't it just giving away someone's head?

The ideas and ideas are very good, but the writing style is not good. It feels like it treats the readers as fools, takes it too much for granted, and writes inexplicable poisonous points. For example, let's let Xiao Luoluo, who is in the 20s and 30s, go detect whether the Poison Douluo has returned. The two eyes of ice and fire are too poisonous. For example, let's take the fairy grass in front of Tang San and Tang Chen and change their skills. It's too poisonous. Who are they two? Not sure? There are too many poisonous points like this. No matter how good the idea is, Shen Nong cannot handle it.

You are really outrageous. You have written mental power as a regular method for Titled Douluo. Dou Yi knows how to use soul rings, right? Bibi Dong is so strong and has already used mental power to kill him. Where did Dou Yi come from so many sensing methods? This is so nonsense.

It was good in the early stage, but when the immortal grass came to Tang San, and he also self-destructed his martial arts, if you don't blow it up, who will blow it up? Some things in fan fiction, especially in this high-production type, are really untouchable, and the tolerance level is very low. There are too many Douluo fans, just like after market research, there is nothing wrong with following the crowd, and I feel that the author can cut it

Everything else about this fan novel is okay, but the protagonist's promotion path, soul rings and skills are not in line with the world rules written in the original work. It seems very inconsistent. Since this is a Douluo fanfic and the original characters have been upgraded and practiced normally, the protagonist can kill those above level 90 at level 50? Or crush? No matter what, it must comply with the world rules of the original work!

It's not me, the problem is that Douluo will definitely become an immortal if he breaks the world, and he won't overwhelm Douluo.

It's another book that stresses the level. I'm convinced. If I don't stress the level, I won't be able to write the same book.

So handsome

Author, your bug is too outrageous, isn't it? How could Bibi Dong be so strong? Who else in Dou Yi besides Tang San has the ability to use mental power? You've strengthened it too much just to suppress the protagonist. It's nonsense, and it directly attacks the protagonist's spirit. Isn't that funny? Bibi Dong can defeat the god-level lotus in just a few tests. That's nonsense.

At the beginning of this book, the protagonist gave the security guard of Notting College a Silver Soul Coin when he was embarrassing Tang San and Jack. I don't know why you, a noble child, would give money to such a contemptuous watchdog. It's a rubbish book.

It's not that you have no background and you don't have enough strength, so why do you dare to create a force? Why do you dare to trade with Tang San in front of Tang Hao, without fearing that he will kill you? When the time comes, let me tell you that seeing the new world for a few years is not a wasted life? And when you went to the Ice and Fire Eyes to find Tang Hao later, why weren't you afraid that he would kill you? If you want to do this, you should at least develop a life-saving soul skill, or you should first develop a background, or you should first develop a backer. It's just a suicide attempt, it's all up to the author himself to write blindly in this hard circle

Guess, everyone, how many people who can read fan fiction come here to torture and kill the protagonist group.

I've read a lot of Douluo fanfics, and this is the only one that I read in one sitting. Why aren't they updated?

All the rest have been distributed, only a few are left, a few at most.