I Am the Will of the Tribe

Let me give the author a small suggestion. First-person protagonist novels are really not very popular. This "I" is really in the drama, and it is difficult for people to feel immersed in it. The first-person narrative really makes people feel that you are writing your own biography, rather than letting us read and then lead into the novel. In addition, the opening chapter is very confusing. The author's idea is very creative. The background of Azeroth and the gameplay of Europa Universalis really attracted me. However, after reading the first three chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. The first person voice persuaded me to quit. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more. See you soon.

The writing is really good, and the subject matter is really great. I also want to read it, but reading it in the first person is too boring.

No matter how well written it is, using the first person will dissuade 95% of people.

Let's put it this way, if you write it just to enjoy yourself, then it doesn't matter how you write it. But since you post it on a novel website for readers to see, you can't simply enjoy yourself. The first person is a big poison. No matter how well written it is, not many people will read it. The first chapter can persuade them to quit.

Yay! In the future, we can try the national will type. Summon loyal soldiers in the game. The people of this country cannot cause harm to the protagonist.

It's been a long time since I've read a first-person book. . . . .

I really like real-time strategy games, but there are too few novels from this perspective... The most fascinating world view and plot lines of World of Warcraft need to be described from this perspective to explain its brilliance.

We will never be slaves!

The Battle of Hyjal is so well written. Alas, the biggest regret is that TBC's Battle of Hyjal has no epic feel. I'm totally sorry that the animation of War3 is named "Twilight of the Gods".

My little grandson begs the author to change the third person pronoun

After reading six or seven chapters, I feel a little confused. The writing content is acceptable, but I don't see the purpose of the protagonist. In the first two chapters, he pretended to be a prophet and said a few words. After that, he kept disconnecting to watch the plot, and then he was inexplicably able to control the tribal decisions. Thinking that a bunch of tribal chiefs seem to make their own decisions but are actually being manipulated. I, the alliance, can't stand it anymore.

Generally speaking, the title of will belongs to the dead and those who have not died in a hundred battles. It is better to change it to the new will of the tribe.

I don't know when someone said the first person xxx Now more and more people are echoing it