The Beginning of Douluo Lets Xiao Wu Go to the Wuhun Hall to Become a Saint

The transformation story looks okay, I hope I can finish it Come on

Author, are you really going to cut it off? ? ? ? ?

The writing is okay, but how did you finish the book?

There is very little text about transformation, I didn't want to talk about it, but I really can't understand the plot 1 The sea is boundless, the number of words in this book can be reduced to at least half so that it won't make people feel like it's watery, often half of it is written and I don't know where it has drifted away 2 It doesn't matter what the priority is, author, you need to figure out the focus of what you want to write, do you want to write about a chat group or about the protagonist changing the fate of the soul beast? 3 If the protagonist wants to share the luck of the three brothers, he should really be a good boy. Don't you know the word "take it for your own use"? What are you doing secretly? Is helping others a shameful thing? I'm still worried about how to send plug-ins. Can you read the part edited by Ye Lingling?

Author, don't be a eunuch, it's hard to find such an interesting novel with Wang Qiuer as the protagonist 😆

I wonder if it's a hundred? 🙂

Let the author write about Lily, it's very promising.

Except for the title of the book, which is not very good, the rest is pretty good.

It was actually written about an auspicious beast as the main character. I finally found a book with tears in my eyes.

Ignore those trolls, just ban them all

It's really good, but it's too expensive

Damn it, I haven't been here for a while and I'm actually dying of it

The author will occasionally post follow-ups in the group

Do you have any recommendations for novels of this type? I'll start with "The God of the Rose Kingdom" "Transform into a Cute Girl in Two Dimensions" "Travel to Become a Girl" "Transform into a Rich Girl" "Transform into a Stunning Girl" "Transform into a Girl in Divine Costume" No poison, not even a little bit poisonous

It's actually a fake corpse, but can the author insist on finishing it? Don't write a paragraph every once in a while.

Readers who like this book can come to Shuiqun and urge our lazy author to update

Isn't it finished? If you want to follow, just follow. Don't update another chapter and run away again.

It looked okay, but why did it end so suddenly? When will it be updated?

When will the author update?

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