Black Dragon Lord and Kobold Players

The focus of this type of novel is on characterization, between players and players, between players and protagonists, and between players and NPCs. Do you understand? The focus is on interesting players, not the setting. The more complicated your settings are, the more dazzling your readers will be. You cannot ask readers to read your novel like a paper. The reason why this game is so realistic and successful is that the people put a lot of effort into characterization, but the background setting is simple. They directly changed the radiation as the background. The advantage of this is that the background used is familiar to everyone, easy to substitute, understand, and it is simple and easy to read.

It feels like a studio product. Players are recruited in the early stage. The protagonist will cry when he meets a woman when he goes out. The protagonist is soft-hearted and cannot bear it. It seems to be the same process, very much like the studio is not sure.

I suggest you check out "This Game is Too Real". It's much better written. Your protagonist didn't show much ability, and the player settings were too time-consuming. Forty chapters are still a bunch of waste and nothing has been done. Also, the appearance of the little loli was too sudden, and then the protagonist licked her like a licking dog and then disappeared? The character of the protagonist has become a complete waste. The most important thing when writing this thing is not to let the player lead the protagonist away. However, you write that the protagonist's IQ is not very good and the player almost takes advantage of it, and then turns around and treats it like a licking dog.

It feels like there are too many dialogues between the players and they are a bit watery, and the protagonist has too few roles.

Take me to play, preferably if I can get closer to the dragon? I want to be a kobold wizard or something, a wizard or a warlock.

Let me come. I want to be a beast mother, and then I will cross with a pig's foot and give birth to a litter of dragon and dog mothers 😍

Complaints: The protagonist's sister only appears twice. Since there is no plot, why did you write it out? A character who appears at the beginning appears for a while (hui) later? . Elsie appears in Chapter 30. Since she has no role, why write it out? There are only four chapters in total, but there will be no scenes later? Also, the protagonist doesn't have much of a role. A total of more than 80 chapters have been updated. The first to 36 chapters come out from time to time (huo). There is basically no role in the latter part, all the roles of the players. Speechless=_=

Handsome Naga, the male one looks super handsome with his big fleshy beard and face. The female one's 4 hands and face are not good-looking.

There is a bit of a problem with the writing. Players appear too early. The golden period at the beginning is not used to shape the protagonist's image and world view. Instead, you give the perspective players chaotic dialogues. No one really thinks that the highlight of the game's alien story is the chaotic dialogues between players, right? There are still some questions that I'm too lazy to talk about.

It is indeed a daily guide, it never disappoints me, and I understand everything. 🐶🐶🐶

Naga looks okay, her muscles are really good

Too much nonsense, not much actual content, slip away

I knew this thing wouldn't be long

Is the protagonist a loser? Just sleep? Don't rely on your own efforts now. Still need to rely on a group of kobolds? When can you get up?

I thought there would be some surprise, but it turned out to be nothing more than a mouthful of words.

Don't worry about whether your grades are good or not, just earn three months of perfect attendance from where you started 🤓

We signed the contract after only six chapters, fuck(*≧ｍ≦*)

This thing is really good-looking. I suggest you kill your mother?

What's written at the back is so similar to Caiyun Xiaomeng, it's so similar, it feels like it was generated by AI.

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I read it and found it a bit joyful to write.

The most troublesome thing about your work is that the names of the character players are rather esoteric. The names used in this game are too realistic, such as Lao Bai, Tai Wei, Si Si, Jun Jun, etc. It is easy to remember and has a large plot to depict.

As it stands, this book is one of the best I've seen in a while, big kudos to the author. 😚

If I remember correctly, kobolds are actually pigs