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The pace is too fast, isn't it? You can write in one chapter what others can describe clearly in dozens or hundreds of chapters? Moreover, the plot is too abrupt. It starts with big moves, and there is no transition at all. It doesn't feel that much fun.
If you just copy it without changing it, you will still have some ideas of your own. If you have children at home, why don't you change it if there are a lot of forced endings?
The pace is too fast Although it's not watery at all, you're doing it too hard It'll make your teeth ache😥
Where did Chapter 24 go, ah ah ah ah ah ah
The most disgusting thing when writing about entertainment is to refer to foreign works as domestic plots.
This rhythm is very fascinating. For example, for a music festival, things are prepared a few days in advance, but why do I feel that except for Bao Qingtian, everything at the scene is put together haphazardly. You don't know how to upload the things you have prepared, and you have to be informed by others before you can proceed. This rhythm is not right.
President, would you like to have a chapter of 300 this time?
This book is indeed quite good, but it's a pity that the plot is too dissuasive. It's like a different person. The character created at the beginning collapsed instantly. As for which plot the author should know very well, come on.