Mystery: Shadows of Order

At present, the logic is relatively clear, and the golden finger setting is also relatively reasonable. It is a pretty good mysterious fanfic. However, the plot will start after Xiaoke is cast, and it depends on whether the author can control the plot of the original work. Normally, the protagonist would not have direct contact with Xiao Ke before he came to Backlund. However, the incident between the new party leader and the retired soldier in the current plot may, after being resolved, allow the protagonist to go to Yangen in the name of shelter and participate in the main plot. Of course, this is just some speculation on my part, but I don't think it is necessary to participate in Yangen's plot. First of all, Yangen did not explicitly mention anything or anyone related to the "lawyer" path. The Yangen incident can be said to have established Xiao Ke's main theme of "revenge" in the middle part of the plot. Excessive intervention is not a good thing, and the protagonist currently does not have the ability to solve the heirs of "The Hanged Man". At present, it seems that the protagonist retains the memory of his past life, has sufficient reserves of high-end knowledge in the field of occultism, and his position in the Tarot Club also belongs to that mysterious setting. There is no need for help from Xiao Ke in the short term. Excessive contact in the early stage means that the possibility of identity exposure increases, which is not a good thing in the early stage. After Xiaoke comes to Backlund, it is more appropriate to contact Xiaoke through lawyer Jurgen. The current focus should be on sequence promotion. To be honest, the accumulation of predecessors and the role of the protagonist make the promotion time a bit too long. The follow-up needs to be accelerated, not as fast as Xiao Ke, but not too far behind. Otherwise, it is not possible to keep up with Xiaoke's plot. The most important thing is that the subsequent plot will become bloated, which will be a big test for the author's writing style.

This is a good book for a mysterious fanfic, but the chapter about the conversation between the goddess and the djinn is so weird that it's easy to dismiss.

Promotion is too slow, why? Why is the Mystery series so slow? It makes me feel even slower than when I watched Lord of Mysteries. I summed it up, that is, most Lord of Mysteries fans know too much, which makes them always exposed to many big events, so they have been skipping challenges. However, too many skipping challenges have not allowed Pigfoot to gain too much benefit. Even the degree of acting has not increased much, and many novels are not even described in detail. Most of them are written too much. When the protagonist needs to be promoted, the acting is almost enough. I can't feel the growth of the pig's feet, but I don't want to think about the original work. Every time Klein's growth is very reasonable, even the digestion of every time he plays is very comfortable and very It feels comfortable, and you get promoted when you need to be promoted, instead of describing too many other stories. It makes sense that you can be promoted logically, but you always don't mention this aspect, so that you don't feel the tension in this aspect. It seems that you are not in a hurry to be promoted and just wait slowly. Klein often thinks about the next level and things, which makes you feel that he has been growing. , He is working hard to get promoted, but most of the fan protagonists have been thinking about how to get involved in unnecessary things. Even if they can't be connected, there will be various coincidences that involve the protagonist. In the end, except for a spin, nothing is gained. Even the so-called mood improvement is perfunctory, pretending to be unhappy, upgrading is not happy, and even the story is not good.

I hope the author will not write the protagonist so lickingly at Klein, licking the original Xio and Forsi. This is what I hate the most about fanfics. They give money, channels, and materials to others. Of course, this book does not have this situation. In addition, I hope that the century view of Lord of Mysteries can be more cold, violent and selfish. I am timid and hesitant and I don't like to read it. As long as the bottom line is not touched, Klein will not care about your little thoughts. He must seek the best interests for himself without touching the bottom line. It's more fun to watch this way. 🤓

I also prefer that the protagonist becomes the Black Emperor, and he doesn't necessarily have to save Huang Tao. Mysterious fans feel that they have to save him in the end, and the goddess ignores him.

I hope the author can grasp the rhythm of improving the protagonist sequence! The reader's book was still at Sequence 6 after hundreds of chapters, and the Hunter's was still at Sequence 7 after hundreds of chapters 😥. The sequence upgrade is too slow. Unless there is a big lag in the later stages, it will definitely not be able to keep up with the events that Klein experienced!

The writing of this book is good, but it is not good-looking. There are two key points: 1. It is not exciting at all, and it lasts until the end. Maybe young writers feel ashamed to write exciting articles, but this is exactly what needs to be written about the emotional ups and downs of characters. All literary works are essentially about writing about people 2. The protagonist is a lawyer In this way, I have learned too many fortune-teller practices from Xiao Ke, which may not necessarily be suitable for the protagonist. Moreover, while being stubborn, he does not have enough rational calculations. On the contrary, he is sometimes very stupid, doing big things at the expense of his own life, and forgetting his life for small profits So the author has writing skills, but cannot write online articles. It is as simple as that.

Write down your own thoughts. The author's writing is very good. It can be said to be one of the best mysterious fan stories I have ever seen, but there are a few bugs... 1. Bethel should know that Tamara's ancestor is the favored one of the Uncertain Mist, and Tamara's ancestor was initially a judge, but in the end he crossed paths and switched to the door path! ! ! He is finally a Sequence 2 Planeswalker... You can see this on the Squid official account (turn to the bottom to ask questions from readers, Squid will sometimes answer) Tamara is not a Sequence 1 Judger, nor was he persecuted by the Night Emperor! ! ! 😅 2. The Tamara family is a subsidiary family of the Abraham family, and they have been married very early... This is probably how the planeswalker potion of Tamara's ancestors came from. They may have been married during the Solomon Empire... (This is a personal speculation) Other than this, there are really no bugs like other mysterious fan fictions Some interesting answers 1 Mr. Azik was born as a snake cub (Quatted Serpent) 2 Sasriel is the most beautiful form of white creation The clone 3 Bai Zao may have other clones (Squid hesitated when asked this question in the interview!!!) 4 Leonard's life experience may have a secret (Squid also hesitated when asked this question in the interview!!!) Interesting speculation 1 Ian Wright may be a descendant of the Night Emperor Trunsoest.

What is the author doing? Other protagonists are pretending to be pigs because they are weak and have no foundation. Their talents are too strong and will be destroyed by Lin Feng. The protagonist is already the king of angels and the king of two countries. What are you afraid of by trying so hard to hide and pretend to be weak? How can your group of ministers, common people, and those in the Tarot Club give you a Sequence 1 king who is so terrifying that he cannot be kept? It could have been explained that in order to prevent mysterious results, the author added a sentence at the end that the existence of the protagonist is not a secret to the gods. Just keep pretending to be weak and hide yourself from those who are not a threat to you, while the gods who can kill you are in full view of you? Speechless

To be honest, the author's understanding of some parts of the original work feels wrong. For example, the most direct one is the number of extraordinary people. There are thousands of extraordinary people in a family... Regardless of the sequence, this number is far out of proportion. You must know that the Church of the Night is the Church of True God and one of the leaders in the Loen area, but it is considered a big one in Tingen. There is only one team of less than ten Beyonders in big cities, and those who are in charge of daily affairs are Sequence Seven (the original text also has Sequence Seven who can be regarded as a bishop). Only in very important capital cities such as Backlund, the Church of the Night has more Beyonders, but there are only a few teams that have been raised to the level of Archbishop St. Anthony Stevenson, who is in charge of Sequence Three. What the cities below cannot handle are the nearby Extraordinary teams from the big cities to support each other or the Holy Church to provide airborne assistance. The number of teams like the Red Gloves that handle high-risk Extraordinary incidents is quite limited. If there are no churches in villages and towns, there will be no official Church of Extraordinaries. I hope the author will really think about it if he writes a next book. Squids are not described as being as numerous as dogs, saints, or angels walking all over the ground. There is no such description in any article. In my concept, a big family with hundreds of Extraordinaries, one or two angels, and several saints is already a force at the national pillar level. In the original book, no church or force has ever produced more than twenty or thirty saints... And Cuttlefish has long confessed to the Archbishop, Senior Deacon and other high-level leaders of the Church of the Night who are larger than twenty-two. It is equal to less than half of the Sequence Four. The only people who have said that they are or may be Sequence Two angels are the Pope of the Tranquility Church in Winter County, Arianna, the first candidate for the Pope, Abbot Arianna of the Night Monastery, and St. Samuel, the former Archbishop of Backlund, gone... So it is unreasonable to have a family of thousands of Extraordinaries. If it is bigger, I think four or five hundred are enough.

In fact, I am more inclined to the protagonist becoming a god. Even if he is the Black Emperor, it doesn't matter. Why can't Huang Tao be allowed to become a god if he is the Black Emperor? Moreover, Huang Tao was originally a forced jump and was contaminated by the Mother Goddess. Will he be able to return to normal after his resurrection (I don't remember if it is possible)? The key is that I think that when Klein prevented George III from becoming a god, on the one hand he received a commission from Bernardi, and on the other hand, it was George III who brought misfortune to the people for the ceremony of becoming a god. Of course, Huang Tao's help to Klein in the early stage was not to let him die (but I think Huang Tao's help was not subjective In a sense, he only wrote a diary to record his life, which coincidentally helped Klein. Of course, the help of his diary to Klein cannot be denied), so as long as the protagonist can do better than Huang Tao on the path of the Black Emperor, I also support him, even if Huang Tao dies, it doesn't matter. (Actually, he was almost dead. After he was contaminated, everyone gave up on him.) Of course, it's good that he can live. As long as the author can create logically based on the original work, it's fine. Support the author 😁😁😁😁

Basic requirements for the protagonist: You must make people feel that he is real, that he has his own interests, his own consciousness, and his own way of doing things. Otherwise, what you write is just a tool man.

I admit that I am pretty good at writing so many words, and it all depends on the support of my colleagues, but there is really no need to be ranked first. "The Reader", "Paradox", "Kiss You Awakening in Your Dreams", and "Breaking the Dimension Wall" are all good. I read it with two accounts, because I also read other books that said free is not enough, so I interspersed the two accounts. I have been following this book from hundreds of thousands of words until now. Let's evaluate it objectively. If you say I am wrong, you are right. Don't be stubborn. First of all, let's talk about the advantages. The writing angle is very novel. It takes the path of order and uses the fog of uncertainty as its golden finger. It takes the political direction in life and gives many friends who have never understood politics a new perspective. It can be said to be very novel. It can be said to be very novel. It can be said to be very novel. It combines Tamara and Abraham's extraordinary family power for its own use. It also plots the throne to erode MI9 and eradicate the prince's heir. It does not have the poor god routine of most novels. It can be said that it starts rich. These are all advantages. Then let's talk about the shortcomings. There is no climax in the whole process from the beginning to the present. The plot is too bland, the plot has no sense of conspiracy, the extraordinary battle has no exciting fighting atmosphere, and the protagonist is not vivid enough. He is like a robot, only knowing the calculation of gains and losses. It is written that he will care about this and that, but the viewer does not feel that the protagonist has any humanity and no sense of substitution. When the mysterious world does not have the sense of mystery, it is a failure. That's all. I'm following this book just to see the ending. My expectations are really not high enough. I'd give it a score of 70.

An investor who has invested 100 million yuan in you would mind lending you another 100,000 yuan? It feels like the protagonist is going to follow Xiao Ke's old path, and it's even more crooked than Klein's. Why was Klein forced to be so miserable in the later stage? Because he actually released Zaratul from prison for a Sequence Four Magician formula, which made him have to deal with Zaratul and Amon at the same time in the later stage. There is no need to look at it from God's perspective. The goddess personally released him from Source Castle and even gave him An Banyu. To deal with Qiao San, the demon wolf Kotal personally ended up. Do you really mind giving him a recipe for Sequence Four? The little snake had long told him three ways to obtain the demigod formula: Zaratul, Antigonus, and the Night Goddess, and also hinted that he was the one favored by the night. He chose the most difficult path because he had doubts about the goddess, and he could only say that he was asking for trouble. The same is true for the protagonist Rawls. The body of the God of Uncertain Mist is suppressed by the goddess's kingdom. In the future, in order to complete the ritual of becoming a god, he must borrow the power of the goddess and even the old dragon. If you have too many lice, you won't be afraid of being bitten. If you have too many debts, you won't have to worry about them. What is there to doubt? Borrow the power of the goddess when you need it, and use it when you can. Just like borrowing money in modern society can strengthen connections and cooperation, even between countries. Shouldn't a Sequence 3 sealed object like the Scale of Balance, which is almost unusable, swallowed up countless characteristics, and tricked one's own Sequence 3, be smashed? I couldn't help but wave my hand to the goddess or the old dragon. Go to the Church of the Night more often to communicate with the goddess, and it may not be impossible to deal with the Augustus Church of the Night personally. In the original work, the goddess directly overturned Qiao San's tomb. By the way, it can scare Nast so that he will not have the idea of ​​seizing the Black Emperor's uniqueness. It feels like Rawls is ashamed to pray to the gods, and there is nothing shameful about positioning himself. I don't know the whereabouts of the last Hand of Order and the vampire's plan, so I can directly ask the goddess and the old dragon, do I need to find an unreliable ally like the Red Angel? Besides, by helping the Red Angel, you are participating in the fight for the Red Priest, and you may have offended someone unintentionally. It's time to wield the sword against the demigods and above of Augustus and the Castilla family. Taking advantage of the chaos of the war, demigods and above must kill at least half of them, digest the potions and use their characteristics to train their subordinates. Once the war is over, it will be difficult to do anything. The protagonist is different from Xiao Ke, secular power is very important. The fight for control of the path to godhood and the entire path should not be written in a gentle or clumsy way. Look at the success story of the goddess, the Demon Wolf King and his family were wiped out. After all, strength speaks for itself, and playing conspiracies all day is boring

The biggest problem with this book is that it is basically not as exciting as Randian, and the whole story is told in a straightforward manner. The protagonist is like a robot, without any emotions, and only uses interest exchanges with everyone. The same is true for cooperation in the Tarot Society. If you want to cooperate with others, you will talk like a riddle. You wear a vest and a mask everywhere you go. I guess in the end you become a god and no one around you knows who you are.

It's the first time I've seen a protagonist who can be held hostage by his beloved, and it's 1.33 Million words in Sequence 5. Are you waiting for Mystery 2 to upgrade so slowly? 😅

I was a little speechless at first, but when I went out and looked at other Mysterious fandoms, I immediately felt that this book was a good one. Good luck, author!

After reading more than 200 chapters, that Talama is very annoying to follow the protagonist all the time. He can't even be sure whether the pig's feet are the favored ones of the Uncertain Mist, so he follows the protagonist, asking the protagonist to do various things, and giving Forsi, who has only met once, various things, including magic potion formulas and materials.

Can the protagonist manifest himself in front of the nobles or the Tarot Master once? At least it can make a layman like me feel happy TAT

I have not read the original work, but what I am confused about is why so many protagonists in the fandom want to lick the original protagonist Klein. They know everything about Klein and know that Klein is pretending, but they still show respect and put their own identity below that of Klein, as if they can never surpass Klein's status.

There is no theme and the protagonist is stupid. It feels like a script written by a third-rate novelist.

The gray between white and black! The mist between light and darkness! The bridge between order and shadow!

The writing, the story, and the ideas are pretty good, but the ending felt a little rushed.