As an Alchemist, You Shouldn't Use Magic for Revenge.

Did you transfer to the starting point recently? The quality is pretty good

This book should be voted for fantasy. Moreover, the content and the title of the book and the introduction are a bit different. The content of the first volume, which accounts for the largest proportion of the struggle, should be written in more detail, including the layout, moves, and dismantling of moves. If it is well written, if the title of the introduction is changed, it may be the next tripod. If you expand the academic life and link it with the reality theorem, it may be the next arcane throne. If the internal combustion engine and industrialization were written into this book, it could be a farming novel, which would be relatively consistent with the introduction. However, even the electric energy has been snatched away by others, and industrialization has not started. The registration of the protagonist, which is the focus of the first volume, has not been detailed. Internal struggles, family divisions, etc. Are not written in detail. The timeline keeps jumping, and suddenly several years have passed. Although I don't like watching the Machiavellian Godfather genre, the success of Tripod is undeniable, and it's a good thing if you can actually write it well. Then the second volume suddenly became fantasy, and suddenly a man ran out to join a mercenary group. Fantasy is a dead end. If you write a hero who fights the devil, Higaru is more popular than fantasy. The lord goes alone and hides his name and starts a new vest from scratch. It is a very poisonous plot. Whether you are writing an academic article like the Arcane God's Throne, a Godfather article like a tripod, or a cool article about industrialization, it will be better than the current one where you even want to add a fantasy four-face. You stopped a lot of interesting points and suddenly started writing from a different perspective. Now this second volume is really just adding a piece of arsenic to the hodgepodge.

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The quality is recognized, but the article is bloated with paragraphs, coupled with constant interjections and fast-paced perspective changes, making the article look very laborious.

The main thing is that I suddenly fell into coma during the early stage of time travel, and then I couldn't stand it anymore after reading a few chapters. The main character, my grandfather was suspicious, and so on.

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I think it's pretty well written, but the style is a little off, but overall it's still a good book! Come on, author! I also hope you can reply to me.